yeah thanks that helps! how is your novel going?
On Feb 16, 10:08 am, haricot vert <hariv...@gmail.com> wrote:
> in the chapters, there is a lot of what matthew does. and he does it
> because he wants to, is driven to, by something other than the
> conscious desire. sounds like he has obsessive, and control,
> issues.
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> external motivation looks to be stress from work. internal motivation
> looks like he's trying to fill an emotional void with food, sex,w
> domination-of-others.
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> how does that strike you?
> -vert
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> On Feb 16, 6:16 am, smwentum <michael.wen...@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > Hey guys, I need some pages critiqued. This is two different chapters
> > about one of my characters. Grammar and other things ignored I have
> > one question, what do you think the internal and external motivation
> > of this character, Matthew greenly is? I should know, but I don't.
> > Any any help would be appreciated.
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> > thanks
> > -smwentum