Opening Up
0 views
Skip to first unread message
Belldandy245
Dec 11, 2010, 11:33:19 AM12/11/10
to SC NanoWrimo R+R
This is a thread (at the request of our members) for everyone to have
their opening lines critiqued.
Post a line, get some thoughts. It's that easy! Everyone is welcome
to participate.
Just lines here please!
their opening lines critiqued.
Post a line, get some thoughts. It's that easy! Everyone is welcome
to participate.
Just lines here please!
sarah_macklin
Dec 11, 2010, 2:13:28 PM12/11/10
to SC NanoWrimo R+R
A new story I'm about to work on:
Addie never turned down other people's garbage.
Addie never turned down other people's garbage.
Belldandy245
Dec 12, 2010, 11:48:58 AM12/12/10
to SC NanoWrimo R+R
I like it, don't know if I would change it. Garbage adds
sophistication over trash, and never shows her openness. Defiantly
caught my attention.
sophistication over trash, and never shows her openness. Defiantly
caught my attention.
ElainePhillips
Dec 12, 2010, 1:20:11 PM12/12/10
to SC NanoWrimo R+R
I agree, it caught my attention. And now I want to know more about why
she never turned down garbage! HAHAHHA!
Reply all
Reply to author
Forward
0 new messages