Your Marks for "Lecturer" & "Friend" paragraph

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May 10, 2013, 2:43:07 AM5/10/13
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Dear class,

Enclosed are your marks for the "Lecturer" and "Friend" paragraph (assignment 11).
I put in all of your work here so you can see how your other friends have made theirs. 
You can download any one of these to study on, so they can be good examples for you to prepare for the mid test on Tuesday.
Pay attention to the kinds of grammar and language style revision I did for you.

Mid Test exercises can be on:
1. Writing a paragraph based on a chosen topic.
2. Editing sentences, so they become grammatically correct.
3. Choosing the best topic sentence and controlling ideas.
4. Crossing out irrelevant information from a given paragraph.

Your marks for assignment 12 will be in another email.
Happy studying!
-bu eka-
YOHANES ass11 - 81 & 79.docx
rani ass 11 -90 & 89.docx
dias ass 11 - 80 & 85.docx
raka ass 11 - 75 &76.docx
bella ass 11 - 65 & 73.docx
marthin ass 11 (lecturer) -80.docx
steavny putri ass 11 - 70 & 90.docx
Flaura ass 11 - 88 & 80.docx
marthin ass 11 (friend) - 84.docx
andrean catur ass11 - 86 & 84.docx
andy ass 11 - 68 & 75.docx
Laurina ass11 - 64 & 68.docx
eki (lecturer) ass 11 - 84.docx
lia ass 11 - 80 & 85.docx
brigita ass 11 - 92& 91.docx
ancela ass11 - 75 & 80.docx
Yuannita- ass 11 - 89 &87.docx
Satria - ass 11 - 78 & 79.docx
agil ass 11 - 68 & 72.docx
carol ass 11 - 80 & 80.docx
dessy ass 11 - 73 & 72.docx
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