Love this design - bold, clear, and easy to read. Well done.
That said, I would encourage the following edits:
1. Nix the language at the bottom of page 1: "Let’s redesign Portland’s streets so they’re safer for everyone.".
20 Is Plenty is about reducing speed, not redesigning streets and this may be confusing for the intended audience - especially with traffic calming installations becoming more common.
2. Consider replacing that text (Let’s redesign Portland’s streets…. at the bottom of page 1) with the page 2 bold header "Slow down. Save lives."
3. Page 2: replace the text "Slow down. Save lives." and lead with "Why 20 mph?" in the same, larger font size.
4. Bump the text about Portland streets (Portland’s streets encourage fast driving…) to the bottom under "Ready to save lives?" and replace the text that mentions redesigning streets (which 20 Is Plenty does not do). So bottom of page 2 would read:
Ready to save lives?
Portland’s streets encourage fast driving,
but fast speeds are killing Portlanders.
That’s why we need 20 mph streets.
4. Page 2 bottom text: Again, I strongly recommend replacing any text that mention redesigning streets.
Suggested edit: change it to read: "Help make Portland’s streets safer for everyone - www.XXXXXX.com"
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