Warning! this post contains spoilers to some of the Tales From the Fae, do not read unless you have read them all.
I love reading your stories and I can't wait untill you post more chapters. I realy like the full and rich world you have built. There are so many questions and Ideas that your story has given me, I can wait for them to be answered in the coming chapters. Maybe some of my notes or comments will help inspire you to write some more stories. You don't have to answer if it will lead to spoilers for future plot points, so you can keep us in suspense, or if they are just not topics you want to reply to at this time. However or whenever you reveal the answers to your world, we will all be greatfull.
Faerie Tale
Isaac Asimov had a very similar Problem and solution in his Robot stories. The Robot had to follow the 4 laws of Robotics to stop humans from harming themselves without Harming them. To take over the Human race would invite revolt that would harm Humans. So to save humans from themselfs he would secretly control them in small but meaning full ways behind the scenes. By Identifying people that would cause harm to the Human Race and promote or transfer them to a "better Job"where they could do no harm to the Human Race. It is a simple and elegant solution where everybody wins.
Songsmith
The time difference in the meeting with Gaia, was that because Gaia is long lived and that is the way Gaia interacts with others? Why is that different from Gaia's meeting at the Academy, was it because it was a shorter meeting or because it was in "our world" vs "Gaia's world"?
Why has Gaia not replaced the Dominion Queens or the High Priestess when they die?
The Academy of Dana
You talked about and showed the dangers of the closed sections of the Mountain. You also talked about the dangers of the Market but did not demonstrate them in the stories. What are the dangers of The Market? What kind of Laws and/or Punishments could befall the students from the academy? Will we see more of this in the next school year?
Gaia talked about the Nymphs using humans, do they or other Fae still do this?
Can a Fae change the forest they are linked with. What if an important Fae looses their forest, can they change with another fae, the more important the Fae (Principal) the more important the forest (National Forest) they are linked to?
Can the Tree Portals replace all of the human road and air travel, or will it over load the system like a denial of service attack?
Are there any dangerout plants in the Fae world? Will we see a class on dangerous plants? Will the final in botanical class be escaping unaided from a dangerous plant, the better the student is in the class the more dangerous the plant in the final.
Unseelie Summer
Why is Talise coming out now, is it to keep Stuckey from making the same mistakes she made?
Stuckey's intern with Talise shoud start with her First question being What was your greatest regret/mistake you made and things she would have done differently. Hind sight being 20/20, Talise can tell Stuckey what actions to avoid if she is to follow the same path.
First Contact Protocols
Where will the Fomorians attack from space be confronted? Will it be in deep space (Can the magic reach that far?), or will it be in Earth orbit? How are the Fae going to reach the Fomorians? Will they need help from NASA? Who will clean up the debris in orbit before it comes crashing down, NASA or magic?
Are the Fomorians going to try and wipe out all life or will they try to corrupt it by Terraforming? What if they fail and only do a partal teraforming (aka SyFy's Defiance 2013-2015) just enough to change things but not enough to make Gaia wipe the slate clean. Asimov was able to take his two worlds "The Robots" and "The Foundation" and make them into one world, I hope you can do the same with your worlds. It can lead into a Botanical class for the students using some of the plants from your other stories.
Would it be better for the Fae to come out before the Fomorians attack or after. Maybe they could crash the UN meeting with all the world leaders, with a show of power like "The Day the Earth stood still - 1951" and show them the danger of the Fomorians. Or would it be better to do a more controlled introduction to the whole world (A few key scientist, then a few politicians and then a few major world powers, and finaly a intro to the world at the U.N.)
There will probably be some who will think the Fomorians are here to help humans against the Fae scourge (Because of what the some of the Fae have done to Humans, and are thinking about doing). Could you prove it without letting the Fomorians attack first?
Are the The Sluagh working with or part of the Fomorians that have sliped past Gaia's defenses, or have they just gone evil.
Warning! this post contains spoilers to some of the Tales From the Fae, do not read unless you have read them all.
I love reading your stories and I can't wait untill you post more chapters. I realy like the full and rich world you have built. There are so many questions and Ideas that your story has given me, I can wait for them to be answered in the coming chapters. Maybe some of my notes or comments will help inspire you to write some more stories. You don't have to answer if it will lead to spoilers for future plot points, so you can keep us in suspense, or if they are just not topics you want to reply to at this time. However or whenever you reveal the answers to your world, we will all be greatfull.
Faerie Tale
Isaac Asimov had a very similar Problem and solution in his Robot stories. The Robot had to follow the 4 laws of Robotics to stop humans from harming themselves without Harming them. To take over the Human race would invite revolt that would harm Humans. So to save humans from themselfs he would secretly control them in small but meaning full ways behind the scenes. By Identifying people that would cause harm to the Human Race and promote or transfer them to a "better Job"where they could do no harm to the Human Race. It is a simple and elegant solution where everybody wins.
Songsmith
The time difference in the meeting with Gaia, was that because Gaia is long lived and that is the way Gaia interacts with others? Why is that different from Gaia's meeting at the Academy, was it because it was a shorter meeting or because it was in "our world" vs "Gaia's world"?
Why has Gaia not replaced the Dominion Queens or the High Priestess when they die?
Is Gaia just taking her time to find a replacement (A thousand years being a short time for Gaia), or is Gaia busy with other problems to choose the replacements, or is Gaia trying to come up with a new way of doing things (Like bringing back the Tuatha de Danann)
The Academy of Dana
You talked about and showed the dangers of the closed sections of the Mountain. You also talked about the dangers of the Market but did not demonstrate them in the stories. What are the dangers of The Market? What kind of Laws and/or Punishments could befall the students from the academy? Will we see more of this in the next school year?
Gaia talked about the Nymphs using humans, do they or other Fae still do this?
Can a Fae change the forest they are linked with. What if an important Fae looses their forest, can they change with another fae, the more important the Fae (Principal) the more important the forest (National Forest) they are linked to?
Can the Tree Portals replace all of the human road and air travel, or will it over load the system like a denial of service attack?
Are there any dangerout plants in the Fae world? Will we see a class on dangerous plants? Will the final in botanical class be escaping unaided from a dangerous plant, the better the student is in the class the more dangerous the plant in the final.
Unseelie Summer
Why is Talise coming out now, is it to keep Stuckey from making the same mistakes she made?
Stuckey's intern with Talise shoud start with her First question being What was your greatest regret/mistake you made and things she would have done differently. Hind sight being 20/20, Talise can tell Stuckey what actions to avoid if she is to follow the same path.
First Contact Protocols
Where will the Fomorians attack from space be confronted? Will it be in deep space (Can the magic reach that far?), or will it be in Earth orbit? How are the Fae going to reach the Fomorians? Will they need help from NASA? Who will clean up the debris in orbit before it comes crashing down, NASA or magic?
Are the Fomorians going to try and wipe out all life or will they try to corrupt it by Terraforming? What if they fail and only do a partal teraforming (aka SyFy's Defiance 2013-2015) just enough to change things but not enough to make Gaia wipe the slate clean. Asimov was able to take his two worlds "The Robots" and "The Foundation" and make them into one world, I hope you can do the same with your worlds. It can lead into a Botanical class for the students using some of the plants from your other stories.
Would it be better for the Fae to come out before the Fomorians attack or after. Maybe they could crash the UN meeting with all the world leaders, with a show of power like "The Day the Earth stood still - 1951" and show them the danger of the Fomorians. Or would it be better to do a more controlled introduction to the whole world (A few key scientist, then a few politicians and then a few major world powers, and finaly a intro to the world at the U.N.)
There will probably be some who will think the Fomorians are here to help humans against the Fae scourge (Because of what the some of the Fae have done to Humans, and are thinking about doing). Could you prove it without letting the Fomorians attack first?
Are the The Sluagh working with or part of the Fomorians that have sliped past Gaia's defenses, or have they just gone evil.
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So yeah. If you find issues with my translations, *please* let me know. I'm just guessing here. I SO wish I was fluent... Alas, it's probably not to be.
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Forgive me for taking a bit longer this time. As before, I can not guarantee 100% coverage or correctness, but I did my very best.
Chapter 8 - A friendly conversation (forgot one)
- "Dark Sidh" -> This would most likely be either Sìdh (Scottish) or Sidhe (Irish)
Chapter 12 - Illusions
- "g‡irdean pishag" -> Character set error? Anyway, see the comment for Chapter 4
Chapter 19 - The Greie Leeideilagh
- "greie leeideilagh" -> Just random info: It's Manx, and something along the line of a "direction finder" or "navigational tool". I suppose you already know that, but it might be interesting for anyone else reading this
Chapter 23 - The Refinery
- "Ob'Ilar" -> I can only translate them separately. But do I guess correctly that you infer from Old Irish and basically call it a "River of Multitude"? Perhaps more poetically translated as "Stream of Possibilities"?
Chapter 28 - Cuts and Curses
- "Lámind Argid" -> Just two minor spelling issues here: One additional fada, and one additional i: "Lámínd Airgid". I couldn't find a proper translation for lámínd, but it seems to be an alternative form of lámann, which means "glove" or "sleeve" (derived from lámh - hand)
Chapter 30 - Beta Testing
- "a half cup in a any one day" -> I believe the second "a" does not belong there.
Chapter 33 - Advocates
- "Anam Figh" -> I really like the term. The grammar is slightly off though. I assume you did a literal translation of "Soul Weave" or "Life Weave"? Unfortunately, Figh is a verb, the noun being fíochán. Simply replacing the word like that would most likely make this the "Soul of the web", so they'd have to be swapped to form "Fíochán Anam", the Soul Weave, if I'm not entirely wrong.
- "As a Leth" -> "Out of her side"? That would certainly fit the context, although I don't know if the preposition is the correct choice. Unfortunately, choosing the right prepositions in Irish is somewhat of a weak spot for me ;-)
Chapter 38 - Updates and Alliances
- "Nothing to compare it too" -> This should be "Nothing to compare it to".
Chapter 40 - Redemption
- "Shiana" -> this is a typo that occurs sometimes in this chapter. It might also occur in later chapters. Her name alternates between "Shaina" and "Shiana".
Chapter 42 - Trips, Traps and Transformations
- "Badb Catha" -> Well translated. The "hooded crow of battle". It's not a raven per se, but close enough, and interesting in that "badb" can also be translated as "witch". Whereas Badb is the name of a war goddess, the modern form of badb is badhbh and means "vulture", "bogey-man", or even "banshee" ("badhbh chaointe" in this case)
Chapter 43 - Badb Catha
- "She not" -> Did you mean "She's not"?
Chapter 45 - Black Blood
- "Bel'ora-Merna" -> I could not find anything related to this. Is it an invention of yours or did I simply miss a translation somewhere?
- "her hand down her her wrist" -> Just one "her" too many.
Chapter 46 - Awakening
- "I was not aware of [...] no one did" -> I can see the reference from "I knew Shaina's plans" to "no one did", but is that grammatically correct? Shouldn't the second sentence rather read "no one was", in reference to "I was not aware"?
Chapter 48 - Sherith Mal
- "Sherith Mal" -> I have no comment on this, since I could not find any translation for it. Is it a creation of yours, or is it derived from something else?
Chapter 49 - Sheeaghan
- "Tá mé bheannaithe An Mháthair" -> And here my lack of knowledge catches up. I can't say whether I'm just unaware of this form or it is slightly out of order. "Tá mé beannaithe" (without lenition, since she is not describing herself as an object) indeed means "I am blessed", but I am unsure how to fit the Mother in there. I believe "I am the Mother's blessed" (note: regard the blessed as adjective, not as noun, and you may see why it feels strange to me) is a rough translation of what you wrote, and that does not sit well with me personally. I guess I find it preferrable to use the active form, saying "The mother blessed me" - "Bheannaigh an Mháthair mé" (Irish stays within the simple past for most cases as far as I have learned)
- "Not much for quiet some time" -> I believe "quiet" should be replaced by "quite".
- "You're thoughts are clouded" -> "Your thoughts are clouded"
One story point here that I did not get: Cailleach tells of the Queen of Trees that was killed two hundred years ago. Until more recently, the Unseelie relied on the High Priestess. And then she continues to tell that the High Priestess was assassinated by the Sluagh, several hundred years ago.
This is what I found in Poppins' Return. Nothing gaelic this time, mostly typos.
Chapter 1 - Brightly House
Chapter 3 - Time Space History 101
Chapter 5 - After dinner mints
Chapter 6 - Guns, O-rings and good luck
Chapter 7 - The proof is in the...
Chapter 8 - Bump in the night
Chapter 9 - Battle Ground
Chapter 11 - Patrons
Chapter 12 - Glyphs
A question here as well: X’carin says she was too young to have a right to Marly’s mother. X’carin is almost 150 years old. How did the dryad go from “too young” to “feared so much nobody goes against her” in less than 20 years, when she couldn’t manage it in at least five to six times that many.
Chapter 20 - Resurrection
- "Willie Coyote" -> His name is actually Wile E. Coyote