Hi folks,
Thank so much for all your feedback!
I completely changed BN-2's cost analysis greatly increasing the costs to account for use of consultants and explicitly citing ZNE work done for Palo Alto by DNV-GL.
I changed the GHG calculations for residential such that it remains constant at 2019 levels.
I took out the SWOT strength about housing because it belongs in BN-8.
I added a recommendation of not allowing solar to offset natural gas produced on site.
Otherwise the changes are minor such as changing the location of content and/or minor word or phrase changes to make the content more clear.
Thanks,