more comments

[chris]

Dear all,

Some more thoughts on the latest draft from Gerard, attached and at
http://babbage.computing.dundee.ac.uk/aif/

(And Gerard, thanks for pulling all of these comments together).

chris.

(Incidentally, I notice a mismatch between what is appearing on the
Google Group and what appears on the email list; not sure why, but we
should take care not to miss stuff).

[Jarred McGinnis]

quick addition to chris' "take em' or leave em'" suggestions. There is
an inconsistency in figure four and the text. An Opus vs. Tweety schism
has developed.

I would have more interesting things to say but Chris said it better
than I could have. So, I can only echo his sentiments. In particular,
restricting ourselves to propositions and having things like decisions
developed through extension.

cheers,

jarred