submission by Souren Mondal [poem on Female Genital Mutilation]

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Souren Mondal

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Aug 5, 2016, 12:31:33 AM8/5/16
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Chopped Off


Chopped Off
(On Female Genital Mutilation)


They held me down, my mother and that woman,
taking off my clothes on the strange strawy floor

The tin roof was dark
only a little light came through a hole

And then came the pain
as they did something with my vagina

Blood flowing like piss, warm and fresh..

my screams were muffled by the dirty cloth
that smelled like faeces
they had stuffed into my small mouth

The blade was not sharp. The cutting not done
So they persuaded again

Pig in a slaughterhouse
A pig of only seven in a slaughterhouse

I could not pee for five days
Without feeling a burn - One that melts the soul

My screams were due. My clit cut off.....

Cutting.. Cutting.. Cut..
A pig in a slaughterhouse
A girl with mutilated vagina

It was my body. My vagina
They cut it down to curb my bad wants
sexual desires

Shhhh! ! Don't say those those words
no girl here says that..


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Souren Mondal
I need to give a huge thanks to Fabrizio Frosini, who kindly edited my poem :-)

Doctor Fab

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Aug 5, 2016, 5:08:25 AM8/5/16
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Hi pal!
glad to see that your email account is now working.

About the editing, I only made your originally longer poem, 25 lines long. I didn't modify the wording.
The real editing (regarding the wording) is Pam's work 🤓
Pam, Kelly and, now, Larry (Lawrence Beck), are the 3 English American native speakers who are in charge for the editing (and I sent all the poems to Pam two days ago, so I guess she's already passed on the file to K. & L.).
BTW, regarding your poem, 'technically' (from an anatomical point of view) at least one change should be made.. 😇
A big 'hug'
F.


2016-08-05 6:31 GMT+02:00 Souren Mondal 
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