603-101 Intro to College English Section 6

hey samir, i like that your text is short and gets to the point but i believe that you could have

I really like your conclusion, you give example for readers to better understand the subject. You

Hi Vincent, I find your attention getter very interesting and relevant to the text. A ''short

things i like : The text is short but it contains everything in it and respects the structure Good

Hi Vincent, Subject#1 : redevelopment is single ,abstract but I don't think it was central