IMPT: Proof Reading Comments

[Ruth Cariño]

1. Don't forget to update quarterly progress tips
2. Monthly calendar uses "S" for both Sat and Sun (instead of SA vs SU)
3. We're missing the weekly spread for Aug 26-Sept 1
4. FEB FRONT: "15% off on..."
5. FEB BACK: Align 2nd line of 1st bullet (Snoe); complete "January" and "August (Manos); take out periods (Manos); simplify to "Not exchangeable for cash and non-refundable" (Manos)
6. Let's make it consistent if we'll add descriptions of the brand per coupon
7. MAY BACK: Complete "January" and "December" (Ayala Museum & Avalon.ph)
8. JUNE BACK: Complete "January" and "October" (Hey Kessy); complete "January" and "December" (Snoe & Fozzy)
9. OCT BACK: Please add other standard clauses (e.g. Does "Valid forever" mean it's valid the entire 2013 and/or it's valid for multiple transactions? Do you want to include "Not valid in conjunction....")

Will go thru other pages tomorrow night once in Dropbox. Thanks!

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Ruth Cariño

M: 0917-521-0139

[Ruth Cariño]

1. Please make ALL validity period consistent (Jan. vs. January, for instance)
2. APR BACK: Please add "twitter.com/thecirclehostel"
3. NOV BACK: Please make "Not valid in conjunction..." and "Non-refundable..." 2 separate bullet points to be consistent with the rest

I don't see the coupon pages for March, July, September. I'll do my best to go online later at around 6-7am to check if there were new pages added.

Thank you!!!

[Arriane Serafico]

Kim can we make it abbreviated na lang so it's kasya sa one line? Pagka kasi full month alanganin yung cutoff, so aesthetically parang awkward lang.

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[Amanda Cruz]

Okay noted on the months and the consistency!

[Karen Vigo]

Hi All!

Here are my comments. Hindi na 'to umuulit from Ruth's list.

1. I’m actually ok with the "Sa" and "Su"

2. In the Feb Coupon (p 18/170), Snoe’s number is 0999-88-SNOE. There’s a missing digit,

3. Just for OC-ness, let’s put periods at the end of each term/condition. Not all of them have.

4. For Karton's October coupon, it might be best to put 20% discount on any one item from Karton. 

Right now, it says 20% discount on all items, which might be misleading

5. For the landline numbers, I don't know how much it will matter, but let’s put “02-“ at the start, so that our customers know that they’re Metro Manila numbers. Some are provincial kasi. You can never can tell. Just saying... They just might dial that number directly.

That's all from me :)

[Ruth Cariño]

Re #3, I actually had the period removed cos most terms aren't complete sentences :p Otherwise we'd always have to start with something like "This voucher is..." but leave that up tp you guys! Basta consistent :)

Sent from my mobile phone; please excuse any typos.

[Amanda Cruz]

1. Fixed Sa/Su

2. Added missing number

3. No more periods to be consistent

4. On all items talaga :D

5. Sorry, hindi na kaya ng time :( If we had another hour, we  can do this, pero we'll have to cross our fingers that their stupidity won't backfire on us with this one. Hehe.

[Ruth Cariño]

Re #5, okay not to put 02 cos we're shipping from Manila hellur :)

Sent from my mobile phone; please excuse any typos.

[Amanda Cruz]

Guys, pwedeng pahelp on the 2nd 3rd 4th quarter motivational tips for quarterly tracking? Sabaw mode na ko. One short sentence lang please! :D

Suggestions:

2nd - Remember how it felt to write down your goals back in January to keep that level of motivation high!

3rd - It's normal for excitement to wane off by mid-year. But goals are not about moods, but moving.

4th - How does it feel to have an amazing 2013? Let us know on the Go Getter Planner Facebook page!

[Karen Vigo]

In the March coupon, Snoe's cell phone number is bitin also. It says 0999-88-SNOE. There’s a missing digit,

Kindly add Toby's website as well: http://tobys.com/

For September, should we put a source for the kettlebell exercises? Or no na? :)

[Amanda Cruz]

Sorry revised to be more accurate!

1st - Same original tip about heading to our FB for advice:

You can get  tips, articles, and inspiring planner cover art 

from facebook.com/gogetterplanner. Stay motivated!

2nd - We’re halfway through the year! Remember how it felt to 

write down your goals to keep that level of motivation high!

3rd - It's normal for excitement to wane off at this point. But goals are not about moods, but moving.