LEAD拒信

[Angela Cui]

同学你好，我是AIESEC BFSU秋季招新负责人，非常抱歉你没有进入第二轮面试，我们对此很遗憾，你如果想知道面试官的意见请到北外AIESEC人人主页留言。感谢你一直以来对AIESEC的关注和支持。谢谢。
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崔可欣

Angela

Team leader of ICX ET

AIESEC BFSU, Mainland of China

Mobile:15810056618

Email: angelacu...@gmail.com

QQ: 1462308639

The active involvement makes perfect.

[Felicia Liu | BFSU VP OGX GCDP]

这个拒信不行吧？是最终稿吗？

2012/9/19 Angela Cui <angelacu...@gmail.com>

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Felicia Liu

ER Resource Coordinator

National Supporting Team 2011/2012 

Mainland of China Outgoing eXchang GCDP

Vice President Outgoing eXchang GCDP

Executive Board 2012/2013

AIESEC BFSU, Mainland of China

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[Angela Cui]

哪里不行？欢迎指正

 

2012/9/19 Felicia Liu | BFSU VP OGX GCDP <felicial...@gmail.com>

[Felicia Liu | BFSU VP OGX GCDP]

1、拒信一直都是英文

2、用salesforce要给每个人拒信具体说明哪儿有待提高

3、语气不用这么居高临下的

2012/9/19 Angela Cui <angelacu...@gmail.com>

[BFSU VP OGX GIP| 刘语珊 Reason Liu]

1、我觉得中英文倒是无所谓；

2、面官的评价是在salesforce上给吧？

3、语气还好，注意用标点符号缓解语气，句号比较生硬，不要过多用；适当用感叹号，会让人感觉比较热情。

刘语珊

Reason LAU

Vice President Outgoing Exchange Global Internship Program

Executive Board 2012/2013
AIESEC BFSU, Mainland of China

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