Hi my name is Diego Farieta. That´s f-a-r-i-e-t-a-. I’m thirty –three years old and I’m from Colombia. I live and work her in Bogota D.C. I’m a Literature teacher. I live my wife and son. My wife is twenty – nine years old and she is technology teacher, my son is seven years old and he is student of primary first.
Notes:
1. It is important to use Hello! or Hi!
2. Point and capital letter.
3. The verbs should be in Simple Present.
4. You should always write the noun or person (subject) at the beginning of the sentence.
5. Do not forget that we use verb To Be for talking about age.
6. Do not forget to write the hyphen (-) when you mention a number.
7. When we talk about age, It is necessary to use the complete expression "years old" at the end of the sentence.
8. Organise your ideas when you talk about members of the family, first the eldest brother, then the middle brother and finally the youngest brother for better understanding of the text.
9. Next time, Do not use traslator because There were too common mistakes!
Notes:
1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!
2. You should use capital letters.
3. You made a spelling mistake.
4. It is necessary to repeat the possesive pronoun "my".
5. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".
6. Point and capital letter because You are changing the idea, now you are talking about your son.
It is better to use the word "child" because you use "son" when they are older than 16.
7. The correct order of these words is: adjective + noun so It is first (adjective) grade (noun).
8. You need to use the preposition "with".