PERSONAL PRESENTATION

DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 8, 2012, 2:12:35 PM3/8/12

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Hi Guys,

You should write a short paragraph about you and the members of the
family that live with you, you have some examples here:

Example No. 1:
Hi. My name is Jennifer Radcliff. That's R-A-D-C-L-I-F-F. I'm twenty-
five years old and I'm from Canada. I live and work here in New York.
I am a hairdresser. My father is a software engineer and my mother is
a designer. My dad is forty-seven and my mom is forty-three years old.
I have one brother and one sister. They live in Canada with my
parents. They are students.

Example No. 2:
Hi. My name is Ariadna Guzmán. That's G-U-Z-M-A-N. I'm twenty-seven
years old and I'm from Colombia. I live and work here in Bogotá D.C. I
am an English teacher. My father is an accountant and my mother is a
secretary. My father is fifty and my mother is forty-seven years old.
I have no sisters or brothers so I'm an only child. I live with my
parents and a cousin, She is seventeen years old and she is a student.

Example No. 3:
Hi. My name is Mauricio Gaviria. That's G-A-V-I-R-I-A. I'm thirty-two
years old and I'm from Barranquilla, Colombia. I live and work in
Bogotá D.C. I am a salesman. I live with my wife Marcela and my two
children Juan and Maria. My wife is twenty-eight years old and She is
a dentist. Juan is twelve and Maria is ten years old. We live with my
sister and her husband too, She is a nurse and his husband is a
security guard.

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Ariadna Guzmán

ERNESTO MORALES

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Mar 9, 2012, 7:16:32 AM3/9/12

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| Hello my name is ERNESTO MORALES M-O - R-A-L-E-S twenty-nine years old, live in Soacha and work in Bogotá in customer service. I live with my wife Araceli and my two sons Nicholas and Laura, my wife is 39 years old works of typing, Nicholas is 17 years old and is a student and Laura is 7 years old and is a student and we live alone in our House.

De: DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO <labellar...@gmail.com>
Para: 1A ENGLISH CLASS - TEACHER: ARIADNA GUZMÁN <1a-english-class---t...@googlegroups.com>
Enviado: Jueves 8 de marzo de 2012 14:12
Asunto: PERSONAL PRESENTATION

Luis Alejandro Cordoba Fajardo

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Mar 9, 2012, 8:15:59 PM3/9/12

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Hi teacher,

My name is Alejandro Cordoba. That's C-O-R-D-O-B-A. I'm twenty five years old. I'm from Bogota, Colombia. I live and work in Bogota. I'm an accountant. My father is fifty nine years old, he is an architect. My mother is fifty five years old, she is a housewife. I live with my brother too, he is fifteen years old, he is a student.

ALEJANDRO CORDOBA FAJARDO

ASESOR TRIBUTARIO, FINANCIERO Y ADMINISTRATIVO

CONTADOR PÚBLICO

ESPECIALISTA EN GERENCIA FINANCIERA

> Date: Thu, 8 Mar 2012 11:12:35 -0800
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DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Hi Alejandro,

Your paragraph is perfect! You didn't make any mistake! Good job!

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Ariadna Guzmán

El viernes 9 de marzo de 2012 19:15:59 UTC-6, Luis Alejandro Cordoba Fajardo escribió:

Hi teacher,

My name is Alejandro Cordoba. That's C-O-R-D-O-B-A. I'm twenty five years old. I'm from Bogota, Colombia. I live and work in Bogota. I'm an accountant. My father is fifty nine years old, he is an architect. My mother is fifty five years old, she is a housewife. I live with my brother too, he is fifteen years old, he is a student.

ALEJANDRO CORDOBA FAJARDO

ASESOR TRIBUTARIO, FINANCIERO Y ADMINISTRATIVO

CONTADOR PÚBLICO

ESPECIALISTA EN GERENCIA FINANCIERA

> Date: Thu, 8 Mar 2012 11:12:35 -0800
> Subject: PERSONAL PRESENTATION
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DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 10, 2012, 12:30:38 AM3/10/12

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Hi Ernesto,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hello! (1) My name is ERNESTO MORALES M-O-R-A-L-E-S. (2) I'm twenty-nine years old. (2) I live and work in Bogotá. I'm an Agent of Customer Service Support (CSR). I live with my wife Araceli and my two children (3) Nicholas and Laura. (1) My wife is (4) thirty-nine years old and (2)She is a typist. Nicholas is 17 years old and (2) He is a student and Laura is 7 years old and (2) She is a student. (2) We live alone in our own house located in Soacha.

Notes:

1. After a point, you should use capital letters.

2. You should always write the noun or person (subject) at the beginning of the sentence.

3. If Nicholas and Laura are kids, it is better to use the word "children", you use "son" when they are older than 16.

4. You should decide between numbers or letters when you are talking about the age of a person.

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

El viernes 9 de marzo de 2012 06:16:32 UTC-6, ERNESTO MORALES escribió:

| Hello my name is ERNESTO MORALES M-O - R-A-L-E-S twenty-nine years old, live in Soacha and work in Bogotá in customer service. I live with my wife Araceli and my two sons Nicholas and Laura, my wife is 39 years old works of typing, Nicholas is 17 years old and is a student and Laura is 7 years old and is a student and we live alone in our House.

De: DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO <labellar...@gmail.com>

Para: 1A ENGLISH CLASS - TEACHER: ARIADNA GUZMÁN <1a-english-class---teacher-ariadna-guzman@googlegroups.com>

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HECTOR JULIO VELOZA CASALLAS

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Mar 10, 2012, 12:54:54 AM3/10/12

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Hi Teacher

Hi My name is Hector Veloza. That's V-E-L-O-Z-A. I'm twenty-seven

years old and I'm from Colombia. I live and work here in Bogotá D.C.

I am an guards. I live with my wife Cindy and my two children Santiago
and juanes. My wife is twenty-seven years old and she is preescolar teacher.
Santiago is five and juanes is three years old, they are students.

Date: Fri, 9 Mar 2012 20:51:04 -0800
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Subject: Re: PERSONAL PRESENTATION

DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 10, 2012, 1:11:46 AM3/10/12

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Hi Hector,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi!(1) My name is Hector Veloza. That's V-E-L-O-Z-A. I'm twenty-seven years old and I'm from Colombia. I live and work here in Bogotá D.C. I am (2) a security guard. I live with my wife Cindy and my two children Santiago and juanes. My wife is twenty-seven years old and she is (2) a preschool teacher. Santiago is five (3) years old and (4) Juanes is three years old, they are students.

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".

3. It is better to complete the sentence with "years old".

4. You should use capital letters for names.

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

El viernes 9 de marzo de 2012 23:54:54 UTC-6, HECTOR JULIO VELOZA CASALLAS escribió:

Hi Teacher

Hi My name is Hector Veloza. That's V-E-L-O-Z-A. I'm twenty-seven
years old and I'm from Colombia. I live and work here in Bogotá D.C.
I am an guards. I live with my wife Cindy and my two children Santiago
and juanes. My wife is twenty-seven years old and she is preescolar teacher.
Santiago is five and juanes is three years old, they are students.

Date: Fri, 9 Mar 2012 20:51:04 -0800
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DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 11, 2012, 7:17:23 PM3/11/12

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Hi Ivan,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi! (1) (2) My name is Ivan Sánchez. (3)That's S-A-N-C-H-E-Z-. I am (3)thirty-four (4) years old. I'm from Colombia. I (5)live in Bogota (6) D.C. (3)with (7) my wife and my two children (8) Sebastian and Alejandra.My wife is (3)thirty-nine(4) years old. I'm (9) an Administrative Assistant. My parents are pensioners.

Notes:

1. It is important to use Hello! or Hi!

2. You should use capital letters.

3. You made a spelling mistake.

4. Do not forget to write the hyphen (-) when you mention a number.

5. When you talk about the place where you live in, you do not use verb TO BE but the verb TO LIVE.

6. In writing you have to write the complete name of the city.

7. It is necessary to repeat the possesive pronoun "my".

8. The word "children" is plural so you do not need to add the "s" at the end.

9. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".You use AN when the indefinite article is followed by a word who starts with a vowel.

10. In writing you must use lower-case letters in general. You use upper-case letters only at the beginning of personal nouns and after a point.

You should publish this mail on the wall of our group in google "1A ENGLISH CLASS - TEACHER ARIADNA".

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

LUNA MERY

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Mar 12, 2012, 2:10:26 PM3/12/12

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Hi. My name is Luz Mery Luna. That's L-U-N-A. I'm thirty-two
years old and I'm from Bogota, Colombia. I live and work in
Bogotá. I am an Industrial engineer. I live with my husband Carlos
Andres and my daughter
Maria Paula. She four years old, she is a student the kinder garden,
My husband twenty-one years old and he is an Industrial engineer.

On 8 mar, 14:12, DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 13, 2012, 1:36:01 PM3/13/12

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Hi Mery,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi! (1) My name is Luz Mery Luna. That's L-U-N-A. I'm thirty-two years old and I'm from Bogota, Colombia. I live and work in Bogotá. I am an Industrial engineer. I live with my husband Carlos Andres and my daughter Maria Paula. She (2) is four years old, she is a student (3)of (4) kindergarten, My husband (2) is twenty-one (5) years old and he is an Industrial engineer too. (6)

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. Do not forget that we use verb To Be for talking about age.

3. The correct preposition is "OF" not "the".

4. The correct word is "KINDERGARTEN" not "kinder garden". For example you say "BABYSITTER" not "baby sister". Pay attention to this!

5. Are you sure your husband is 21 years old? I don't think so!

6. When you and your husband have the same profession you can say: My husband is an Industrial engineer TOO = Mi esposo es in ingeniero industrial TAMBIÉN.

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Hi Carlos,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi! (1) My name is Carlos Rivera. That's R-I-V-E-R-A. I'm thirty-one years old and I'm from Colombia. (2) I live and work in Bogotá D.C.and my job is in Soacha neighborhood. I am an industrial engineer. I live with my wife Mery and my daughter Maria Paula. My wife is thirty two years old and She is (3) an industrial engineer too. Maria Paula is four years old (4) and She is (3) a student (5)of (6) kindergarten.

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. After you have mention the city where you live and work, you can specify the neighborhood where your work is located.

3. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".You use AN when the indefinite article is followed by a word who starts with a vowel.

4. Do not forget to use connectors.

5. The correct preposition is "OF" not "on".

6. The correct word is "KINDERGARTEN" not "kinder garden". For example you say "BABYSITTER" not "baby sister". Pay attention to this!

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

Hi. My name is Carlos Rivera. That's R-I-V-E-R-A. I'm thirty-one Years old and I'm from Colombia. I live in Bogotá D.C. and work in Soacha. I am an industrial engineer. I live with my wife Mery and my daughter Maria Paula. My wife is thirty two years old and she is industrial engineer too. Maria Paula is four years old, She is student on kinder garden.

El lunes 12 de marzo de 2012 12:10:26 UTC-6, LUNA MERY escribió:

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DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Hi Jaqueline,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi! (1) My name is (2) Jaqueline (2) Wilches. (3) That´s W-I-L-C-H-E-S. I´m (4) thirty-six years (5) old. I´m from Puerto Salgar, Colombia. I´m (6) single and (7) I live with my (8) mother. (7) She is (4) sixty-eight (9) years old and (7)She (10) is (11) a pensioner. (3) My sister is (11) a policewoman (12) and my nephew is a (13)student.

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. You should use capital letters for names.

3. After a point, you should use capital letters.

4. Do not forget to write the hyphen (-) when you mention a number.

5. Do not forget the "s".

6. The word you should use is "SINGLE".

7. You should always write the noun or person (subject) at the beginning of the sentence.

8. It is necessary to repeat the possesive pronoun "my".

9. It is better to complete the sentence with "years old".

10. Do not forget that we use verb To Be (Ser/Estar).

11. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".You use AN when the indefinite article is followed by a word who starts with a vowel.

12.The word you should use is "POLICEWOMAN".

13. Your nephew is a student and She is at school.

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

Hi. My name is jaqueline wilches that´s w-i-l-c-h-e-s
I´m thirty six year old. and I´m from Puerto Salgar, Colombia
I´m maiden and live with mother is sixty eight and pensioner my
sister is police and my nephew is school.
att. jaqueline

El jueves 8 de marzo de 2012 13:12:35 UTC-6, DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO escribió:

DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Hi Lucy,

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters!

Hi!(1) My name is Lucy Garzón. (2) That's G-A-R-Z-O-N. I'm thirty-seven years old and(3) I'm from Bogotá D. C. (4) - I live and(3) work in Bogotá D. C. I'm (5) an (6) accountant. I live with (7) my husband and my child Carolina. Carolina is thirteen years old (8) and She is (5) a student

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. After a point, you should use capital letters.

3. You made a spelling mistake.

4. In writing you have to write the complete name of the city.

5. You have to use the indefinite article "A or AN".You use AN when the indefinite article is followed by a word who starts with a vowel.

6. The word you should use is "ACCOUNTANT".

7. It is necessary to repeat the possesive pronoun "my".

8. You need to use the connector "AND".

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

Hi My name is Lucy Garzón. that's G-A-R-Z-O-N. I'm thirty-seven years old an I'm from Bogota- I live an work in Bogotá I'm a accounter. I live with husband and my child Carolina Carolina is thirteen years old. She is student

El jueves 8 de marzo de 2012 13:12:35 UTC-6, DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO escribió:

lucy garzon

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Mar 20, 2012, 2:12:14 PM3/20/12

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Envio corrección de la presentación

Hi! My name is Lucy Garzon. That´s G-A-R-Z-O-N. I´m thirty-seven years old and I´m Bogotá D.C.. I live and work in Bogotá, D.C. I´m an accountant. I live with my husband and my child Carolina. Carolina is thirteen years old and she is a student. My husband is forty- two years old. He is a Car Painter.

Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2012 12:40:19 -0700

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DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO

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Mar 23, 2012, 7:39:22 AM3/23/12

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Hi! Lucy

Your paragraph is perfect! But you need to review this part: the text in parentheses is not necessary because you mention it in the next sentence.

Hi! My name is Lucy Garzon. That´s G-A-R-Z-O-N. I´m thirty-seven years old and (I´m Bogotá D.C).. I live and work in Bogotá, D.C. I´m an accountant. I live with my husband and my child Carolina. Carolina is thirteen years old and she is a student. My husband is forty- two years old. He is a Car Painter.

Best regards!

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Ariadna Guzmán

El martes 20 de marzo de 2012 13:12:14 UTC-5, LUCY escribió:

Envio corrección de la presentación

Hi! My name is Lucy Garzon. That´s G-A-R-Z-O-N. I´m thirty-seven years old and I´m Bogotá D.C.. I live and work in Bogotá, D.C. I´m an accountant. I live with my husband and my child Carolina. Carolina is thirteen years old and she is a student. My husband is forty- two years old. He is a Car Painter.

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