Personal presentation

[Edgard Realpe]

Hi. My name is Edgar Realpe Buch. That´s R-E-A-L-P-E. I´m fortyty one years old. I´m from La Cruz  City. I live and work in Bogotá D.C. I am a teacher  of primary education . I live with my wife Fanny. My wife is forty years old. She is working in the World Montessori is a teacher in pedagogy special.
My favorite colour is blue and orange. My best  friend is Alveiro, he live in Popayan city.

[DAYAN ARIADNA GUZMAN BEJARANO]

Hi Edgar, 

I'm going to correct your paragraph. Please review the BOLD and ITALIC letters! 

Hi!(1) My name is Edgar Realpe Buch. That´s R-E-A-L-P-E. I´m (2) forty-one(3) years old. I´m from La Cruz (4). I live and work in Bogotá D.C. I am a teacher  of primary education . I live with my wife Fanny. (5) She is forty years old and (6) works(7) at (8) The(9) World Montessori as (10) a teacher (11) of (12) special pedagogy . My favorite colour (13) are blue and orange. My best  friend is Alveiro, he lives(7) in Popayan (4). 

Notes:

1. It is important to use the exclamation mark when you say Hello! or Hi!

2. You made a spelling mistake.

3. Do not forget to write the hyphen (-) when you mention a number.

4. You must mention the name of the specific geographic area, for example you say: "I live in Madrid, Cundinamarca."

5. You should replace the noun "My wife" for the personal pronoun "SHE"

6. You can connect your ideas by using the connector "and".

7. Remember! You add a "s" to the verb with: She / He/ It so You write: She workS / He workS / It workS

8. The correct preposition is "AT" not "in". 

9. You should use capital letters for names.

10. In this case, you have to use the preposition "AS" and omit the verb "To be".

11. The correct preposition is "OF" not "in". 

12.The correct order of these words is: adjective + noun so It is special (adjective) pedagogy (noun).

13.If you mention two colors you have to use the plural form of the verb To be "ARE".

Best regards!

Att:

Ariadna Guzmán