Poem submission by Marcondes Pereira da Silva de Mesquita

[Marcondes Pereira Da Silva De Mesquita]

Dear poets, below is my corrected poem. I hope you like it. It's an unpublished poem.

A Nymph from 18th century.
 
Feel the calmness of this land.
It's so beauty, so pure.
We left our castle of sand.
She is as soft as the wind, I'm sure.
 
Her kindness is like a shining star,
her smile glares more than gold.
We denied that money's red scar.
We dance, we sing, 'cos soon we'll be old.
 
My lady, you should seize this sunny day.
Your fragile flame
will disappear from universe's way.
Life is shorter than fame