Reggie's Flyer - For Review, Comments, Suggestions...etc

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SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 7, 2016, 7:11:49 PM6/7/16
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Guy McCloskey

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Jun 7, 2016, 7:32:17 PM6/7/16
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Looks good, Vanessa. Thanks.
Guy McC


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SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 7, 2016, 7:34:54 PM6/7/16
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Thank you Guy

Doris McCloskey

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Jun 7, 2016, 7:52:11 PM6/7/16
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You do an amazing job Vanessa. 
Thanks so much,

SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 7, 2016, 8:01:22 PM6/7/16
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Oh thank you so much Doris, means a lot and I love collaborating and creating with all of you!

Joanne And Charlie

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Jun 7, 2016, 9:30:45 PM6/7/16
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Looks great Vanessa!  One minor edit is to add the 0 in 2016. Thanks!

Joanne and Charlie

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SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 7, 2016, 10:04:29 PM6/7/16
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H! Thank you!

SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 7, 2016, 10:06:02 PM6/7/16
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Lol I meant "Ha!"
But clearly my phone doesn't care for that expression 😉

Stacy Michels

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Jun 9, 2016, 12:01:08 AM6/9/16
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Thanks for putting this together, Vanessa!  Looks good!  Couple corrections: 1. add apostrophe to Let's  2. Ballgame is one word :)  What does the BUS: in front of White Sox vs Braves mean? 
 Maybe would it sound better if we said, "If you don't want to walk to Reggie's alone, then meet the Social Committee Members in our front lobby...... "  Great job, Vanessa!

Are we going to post this in the elevators for more advertisement? 

Stacy

SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 9, 2016, 7:21:30 AM6/9/16
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Thanks Stacy! Great catches, this is why I prefer more eyeballs on the announcements before posting, I'm usually flying through putting it together (and seeing what my brain thinks should be) lol I'll update it layer today.

Yes,  it'll be posted on Doorwaze, the elevator and email blast.

Thanks again!

Doris McCloskey

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Jun 9, 2016, 11:27:39 AM6/9/16
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Hi All,

I think the suggested time to meet in the lobby is great. 

Went to the park yesterday and don’t  think it will be helpful to add the bike info (only a few places to lock bikes, Divvys are there, but I do’t know how that works if a lot of people take the Divvys from 18th and find that there is no space to return them at the park.

Doris McCloskey



SoyYo LaMariposa

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Jun 9, 2016, 12:17:04 PM6/9/16
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Thank you for the update Doris :)




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