essay 2, half-done drafts: post here by 10/18

[o]

Please post your drafts of e2 here, and I'll respond with notes by
email.

[HildaP]

Professor O'Connell,
I've uploaded all parts of my drafts, and I would really appreciate
some feedback. Especially with my short story, since I'm not exactly
sure that I'm headed in the right direction with that. I was
attempting to make a correlation between my characters and the
corruption involving cronies, but I don't know if I've gone too far
off on a tangent? Hopefully I will be able to get some better
instruction next week when you have conferences.
Thanks so much!!!

[carlacuellar]

Professor, I uploaded Essay 2 part 1, as well as a revised Essay 1
Part b which includes references. Have a nice weekend!

On Oct 18, 7:33 am, o <eng101l...@yahoo.com> wrote: