Essay #3 Questions

[tapia89]

Professor O'C

Can u please review my essayand give me feedback
Before I turn it in on Sat.

Thanks

Melanie Tapia

[o'c]

MT:

good start. consider page 2 the draft of your intro. pages 1, 3, and
most of 4 are too much summary/near quote, much from uncited sources.
cite and analyze all sources, more as in the style of the bottom of
page 4 and page 5. as before, good work on the references.

o'c

[tapia89]

Thanks professor,

Can I meet with u next week during the conferences? I will have a
revised essay by then with all ur suggestions taken and applied.

Thanks
Melanie Tapia

[tapia89]

Prof O'Connell,

Have taken ur advise and uploaded my essay, Please review and comment.
I would want to meet with u during the conferences, please advise if
you have a space open thanks

MT

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MT:

sure. if you see this and can come between 11--11:30, that'd be
easiest. otherwise, we'll see each other when you get there and work
you in.

o'c

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to prof.
i never got a reply on what is available for the conference shift
that
are open?
please and thank you


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tapia89
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More options May 22, 3:22 pm
Prof O'C
Do you have any available conference time? i would really appreciated
if i can meet with you and you can rec\view my essay.
Thanks
Melanie Tapia

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Jackie B.
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More options May 17, 4:02 am
I'm not sure if it's at all possible to upload my essay by the end of
tomorrow but I suppose it's worth asking I've been in the hospital
all
afternoon and night, now yesterday due to a close friend's mother
having a stroke and currently now in the CCU. Otherwise I have
uploaded what I have which I am aware isn't up to standards yet in
regards to citations and possibly grammar. Any input is grately
appreciated and I hope I am able to upload a more up to scale rough
draft asap.
Thanks,
Jackie Bolton

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Walter F
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More options May 16, 11:51 pm
Prof.
I had started something like what i have below, for some reason i had
a number of windows open and i closed the window in which i was doing
my work and did not save it. I have lost it all and now i am about
to
start again. i am sorry but i will post it again later. I am sorry.
Powerful People: Abuse of
power
There are powerful people all over the world; some of
them
use their power to do goods, some others do bad things to hurt other
people. These are people who become powerful meaning to do goods but
as soon as they get a sense of what this power allow them to get away
with, then some of these people start abusing and taking advantage of
the power. I think Hugo Chavez is a perfect sample of this
situation. Abuse of power is not something new in this world, many
people have done it at one point or another

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tiff
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More options May 30, 1:33 am
Hey proffessor, i no its late but i Tiffany will not be present in
class. I will turn in the final draft online and give u the rough on
the last day. plz let me no if were goin to do any thing specific on
the last day besides the presentation. thnxs =).

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riben
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More options May 29, 10:59 pm
I went see my tutor today but something happend. I don't think the
tutor correct completely my essay. I know that there are lots of
mistakes. But I need your advice.
I will ask you after the classe tomrrow.
Thank you.

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Steph
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More options May 29, 6:53 pm
Professor O'Connell, I will not be in class tomorrow, I have to
travel
for a family issue. I will be in class the following week. I have
uploaded my Essay 3.
Thank you,
Stephanie Diaz

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Mario L
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More options May 25, 8:46 pm
One of the Guys: Women as Aggressors and Torturers (Paperback)
by Tara McKelvey (Editor), Barbara Ehrenreich (Foreword)
This one was very interesting, even has an essay by Ehrenreich.
Also, and probably the best I think.
Band of Sisters: American Women at War in Iraq (Paperback)
by Kirsten Holmstedt (Author)
They are available on Amazon
Mario L

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oc
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More options May 28, 10:29 am
ML:
thanks
o'c

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Elmas Kockaya
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More options May 26, 10:31 am
Hi Prof.

could you please give some advice for my e3 assigment.
I attached it.

thank you.
Elmas
e3 elmas.doc
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More options May 28, 10:28 am
pages 1 & 2 are the strongest analysis
pages 3 & 4 are too much summary/near quote
pages 5 & 6 have some of your opinion
make pages 3--6 more like 1 & 2
references are mostly right--Smith is the most correct

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yawn68
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More options May 27, 10:32 am
Hi Prof.
I wanted to know if we had to have the characters from TC represent
both correct and incorrect courses of action or if both could
represent incorrect courses of action.
Thanks,
Jan

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oc
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More options May 28, 10:22 am
short answer: decide what would be right in the current conflict and
at least rank bad, worse, worst comparisons from the play
longer answer: see more examples from last year--particularly
corruption in the US
http://groups.google.com/group/lacc-eng/browse_thread/thread/546ea833df6288c3#

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tapia89
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More options May 30, 11:34 am
Posted Annotated Bibliography, Essay #3 bibliography is seperate but
also added
Thank you,
Melanie Tapia

MT:

thanks--i downloaded then removed the files, but i'll show future
students parts of your good work

o'c

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yawn68
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More options May 27, 10:58 am
what ends up happening with Ulyesses plan, the one to make Achilles
jealous. ??

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oc

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More options May 28, 10:19 am
JG:
short answer--it (somewhat) works
longer answer--we'll talk about the end of the play Saturday or
review
the outline of acts and scenes to help locate plot points:
http://groups.google.com/group/0459eng101sp09/web/outline-of-shakespeares-troilus-and-cressida-for-students-reference

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yawn68
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what ends up happening with Ulyesses plan, the one to make Achilles
jealous. ??

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what ends up happening with Ulyesses plan, the one to make Achilles
jealous. ??

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tapia89
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More options May 27, 3:30 pm
How do i incorporate my own opinion? Can I put the following?
"In Troilus and Cressida, Agamemnon wants a simple solution to the
Trojan War, he wants Achilles to get involved and kill off the
strongest in Troy therefore giving no more option for them but to
surrender, but would an easy solution actually bring the victory
wanted or a tragedy? In the Darfur crisis the easy solution was to
include the hatred ridden Janjaweed and kill off all the rebels, but
all this has only brought upon Sudan is mass homicide. Would they
have
liked if the tables were turned? In the Trojan War after the Greeks
have victory, Agamemnon suffers his own faith, he is killed off by
his
own wife. Now, the Khartoum and the main leaders of the janjaweed are
wanted by the International Criminal Court for the mass murders
committed. Problems of these magnitudes can not be solved so simply,
others will notice and will want to get involved to stop the crimes
committed."
or is this not what you wanted me to do?
I really do not get how to incorporate more of my opinion please help
Melanie Tapia

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More options May 28, 10:17 am
MT:
you've got it: keep going in this style
o'c