MuzikMan wrote: > > Seems there have been so many changes in my life of late... not the least > of which is: The most exciting lover I've ever had just dumped me:( I > feel the dog days of summer may be coming on, or perhaps a period of > quietness. Who knows what shall win out. Can anyone relate? > > I was thinking... maybe I need a bohemian sort of woman... somebody who > used to chase the Grateful Dead, but is bored now. > (snipped)
> I wrote these lyrics at work last night, and wrote the music this > morning.
(snipped) (refrain from song)
> How it might have been > Like that story goes... > Love on the silken edge of a summer storm > I feel so young and free in your embrace > I hope I never will forget your lovely face >
> Peace to ALL of you. > MuzikMan > > Technical tip: > To drastically reduce screen clutter: filter "Mancini"!
I always am impressed by people, especially men, (though somewhat suspicious) who bare their self in a public forum. Could be nuts, could be a perv, could be an interesting person. I myself am called the "queen of overshare" by my dear brother-in-law, so I feel a certain sympatico. :)
You have a certain ease with words, which I also find noteworthy, a little florid, but hey, we all need a little more flora in our lives! The line "love on a silken edge of a summer storm" is quite nice, I must say. The rest wouldn't make a bad drekish pop song, but that one line was quite fine. IMHO. And what more do you need for a love song, anyway.... :)
(well, good music as well...)
What "kind" of music do you do? Send me a file, should be fun. My husband has a midi set-up, so if you send a midi file in Mac Vision I could hear it, I think. Or just a plain old Sound Machine, SoundApp file or something. I'm not altogether sure how it would work.