Twine Short Story: All Systems Stand By

[Liyamu]

It's not what you think. 

This is a short story I wrote a few years ago.  I feel Twine is the perfect medium for it, coming much closer to what I was originally going for than printed paper ever could.  It also got my family to finally see the "point" of Twine.  :) 

Takes about six minutes to play through.  Hope you like it!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/100285760/All%20Systems%20Stand%20By/All%20Systems%20Stand%20By%20%28Twine%20Adaptation%29%20web.html

[Christopher L]

That was fun :) Seems a little slow on my computer. Does it end at turbo mode?

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[Liam Neeley-Brown]

No...  Did you get to part two?  Part two is very different from part one. 

Hmm... I wonder if it's slow due to dropbox.  I just discovered I can embed fonts with 1.4, which was the only reason I didn't upload the file.  May have to take a look at that...

What browser did you use?

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[Christopher L]

Nope, it just stopped there. I tried it both on Firefox and Chrome. I have an old CPU, though other kinds of effects aren't slow.