A question about the endings of JCO's short stories

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Apr 21, 2012, 3:37:23 PM4/21/12
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Maybe someone can explain why the endings in many of her short stories seem to be unconnected to the story? For example, in “Tick” the author masterfully  builds up the tension  and I was in great suspense, impatient to find out how the protagonist would solve her problem. The ending was a big letdown

.I hope one of the posters can shed some light on this.

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Bill Coyle

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Apr 22, 2012, 1:55:39 PM4/22/12
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Which collection does "Tick" appear in? 


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Maybe someone can explain why the endings in many of her short stories seem to be unconnected to the story? For example, in “Tick” the author masterfully  builds up the tension  and I was in great suspense, impatient to find out how the protagonist would solve her problem. The ending was a big letdown

.I hope one of the posters can shed some light on this.

!Thanks


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monica galun

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Apr 22, 2012, 2:44:52 PM4/22/12
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Hi Bill,

“Tick” appears in The Assignation short story collection (1988).

Michaelangelo Rodriguez

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Apr 22, 2012, 5:26:27 PM4/22/12
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Hi! Don't forget writer's have artistic freedom and can choose their own endings. If writers have to choose an ending to satisfy individuals then there would be a lot of endings! Michaelangelo

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Apr 22, 2012, 5:27:31 PM4/22/12
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Well said.
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Hi! Don't forget writer's have artistic freedom and can choose their own endings. If writers have to choose an ending to satisfy individuals then there would be a lot of endings! Michaelangelo

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Maybe someone can explain why the endings in many of her short stories seem to be unconnected to the story? For example, in "Tick" the author masterfully  builds up the tension  and I was in great suspense, impatient to find out how the protagonist would solve her problem. The ending was a big letdown
.I hope one of the posters can shed some light on this.
!Thanks
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Virginia Bucci

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Apr 22, 2012, 7:32:22 PM4/22/12
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Here is a thread I found interesting, discussing 'Tick' and another work: http://dentfictionworkshop.blogspot.com/2011/09/oates-tick-and-abduction.html
 
Here's something on story endings which is thought-provoking: http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/2011/04/e-is-for-ends-with-epiphany.html
 
I find many JCO story endings tend to leave us at a place where the story is still moving forward & we are left to consider the characters, what their further actions would be, &what message we might draw from that.
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Max Alberts

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Apr 23, 2012, 1:48:34 PM4/23/12
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What? While I haven't read "Tick" I have read many of her other stories and have never once come across one which didn't follow its own organic law. Could you please explain your comment on the ending not matching the story????? Thank you.

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Well said.
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Hi! Don't forget writer's have artistic freedom and can choose their own endings. If writers have to choose an ending to satisfy individuals then there would be a lot of endings! Michaelangelo


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Maybe someone can explain why the endings in many of her short stories seem to be unconnected to the story? For example, in "Tick" the author masterfully  builds up the tension  and I was in great suspense, impatient to find out how the protagonist would solve her problem. The ending was a big letdown
.I hope one of the posters can shed some light on this.
!Thanks
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I've just read the story, "Tick," which I first read in 1989. Here's my interpretation: until she discovers the tick lodged in her scalp, the woman fantasizes complete independence, isolated independence.

That fantasy ends when she realizes that she needs help and, as the phone rings again, she is ready to accept her need for him. Given her isolation earlier in the story, it most likely is her husband calling.

Suddenly, perhaps in another fantasy, for who knows what her husband will say: she wants to be rescued, and loved, and part of a family--with a child on the way.

I find that this story follows "its own organic law" (to quote Max) with the woman acting consistently, according to her character. What do you think?

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