On Jun 7, 12:48 pm, "O. Sharp" <
o...@panix.com> wrote:
> Glancing at the discussion thus far, I wonder if everybody's playing with
> the same definition of "tragedy" or "tragic". (At least nobody seems to be
> using Mel Brooks' definition here: "Tragedy is when I cut my finger.
> Comedy is when you walk into an open sewer and die." <g>)
>
> My old Greek literature teacher had an interesting definition of tragedy,
> which I'll toss out there as a place to start: a tragedy, she opined, is
> a story where the protagonist, despite being physically injured or
> destroyed, manages nonetheless to achieve a personal, moral victory.
I can't agree with her definition, that's almost the _antithesis_ of a
Tragedy as I would define it. I won't say that a Tragic protagonist
can't wina moral victory along with his/her essential defeat, but it
isn't essential and it can be counteractive.
(I'm using the capital T in Tragedy to distinguish from the colloquial
'sad story' definition.)
The ancients' definition of Tragedy doesn't work when applied to
Tolkien, because they didn't necessarily accept free will or choice as
legitimate in context. JRRT's world, rooted in Western Christendom's
thinking, does accept just that.
My definiton of a Tragedy is one where the protagonist and/or others
face defeat or loss of a high estate by virtue either of 'bad choices'
or 'a basic character flaw', or both. The bad results have to have
been avoidable. If they aren't, it's not a Tragedy, just a story
about something bad that happened to someone. The person who could
have avoided has to have had a realistic, serious _chance_ of avoiding
it, by means other than luck, or again, it's not Tragedy.
Thus a story, set in today's world, where the Sun goes into some
freakish nova state and wipes out the human race is just tragic, not
Tragic. Nobody could have known about it and nobody could have done
anything about it if they knew anyway. No power, no responsibility.
Likewise a story where the protagonist or someone dear to him dies
when a meteorite strikes him as he walks down the street is not
Tragic, merely maybe tragic. He could have avoided it by walking down
a different street or staying home, sure, but he had no way to know
that, there's no reasonable way he could be expected to know the
meteorite would strike him when it did.
Now, either scenario could _become_ a Tragedy IF the protagonist(s)
were given some credible, plausible warning of what was coming, and
had some ability to _act_ on that warning, and did not. But only then
would those events be possibly Tragic.
>
> By that definition, anyway, Boromir's death would qualify as a tragedy:
> he's about as physically defeated as one can get, but manages to gain a
> victory over his own craving for the Ring. Feanor, frankly, doesn't strike
> me as a tragic figure; yes, his pride got him to where the snot was beaten
> out of him, but there was never any personal or moral awakening or
> realization of how stupid he'd been; one gets the feeling that, if healed
> of his physical wounds, he would run back out and do the same thing all
> over again.
In Boromir's case, it was Tragic because it was a basic character flaw
on his part that the Ring played upon to bring him down, his desire
for _personal_ glory and _familial_ glory, and indeed the emphasis on
_glory_ in the first place. Boromir was by no means an evil man, in
his nature, but that flaw in his character was there for the Ring to
play on, and the Tragedy comes in that he _let it happen_. His
personal pride caused him to not take the warnings of Elrond and
Gandalf seriously enough, and to leave him open to the Ring's
seductions.
It remains Tragic, even though he had a victory of sorts later,
because so much was lost by his fall. The Fellowship was split, his
own life (he was of fairly pure Numenorean descent, he might have
lived and thriven and contributed much over many decades yet), the
removal of his sword and skills from the defense of Gondor, and its
contribution to the madness and fall of his father Denethor (and thus
to the needless death of a guard and Beregond's guilt over that
death), among other things.
Feanor is a Tragic figure too, but it lies deeper back. His Tragedy
lies in his Pride clouding his judgement and perception, making him
(again) vulnerable to the lies of Melkor. Pride is a key element in
the fall of Feanor and Boromir, the former's fall was vastly greater
and did far more harm, but the pattern is the same.
Pride kept Feanor from recognizing the core truth that all his
abilities and powers were not his own. That is, he didn't _make
himself_ the greatest of the Elves in skill and power, his abilities
ultimately derived from the innate talents granted him by God and the
knowledge and training the Nolder received from the Valar. A Feanor
raised in barbarism and struggling to survive in the wild would never
have been able to make the Palantiri, the Silmarils, etc.
Which is not to belittle the self-discipline, care, and effort he put
into developing his skills and his creations. But he remembered the
latter and forgot the former in his Pride, and he allowed his
resentment over his father's remarriage to Indis to drive him to wrong
actions. Nobody _made_ Feanor make the choices he made. When Melkor
started to put the lies in circulation about Fingolfin's plans to
usurp his place, Feanor's pride made him amenable to listening to
those lies.
Pride drove Feanor to bad choice after bad choice after bad choice.
Because he had a choice, it was Tragic, he might have chosen
differently at various stages, and in so doing left the whole history
of Valinor and Middle Earth better. He _could have_, but he did not.
Now, arguably, some of his later bad decisions _might_ be reasonably
ascribed to partial insanity over some of what Morgoth had done, he
might have been not thinking straight after the murder of his father,
but it was his own previous choices that had partly led up to those
events, too.
Thorin is not a Tragic figure, because unlike Boromir and Feanor, he
_did_ conquer his Pride and do the right thing. It might be tragic in
that his death was sad and a loss to his friends, but he did not allow
his vices to rule him in the final crunch, where Boromir and Feanor
_did_.
Thorin's grandfather and father, however, arguably _are_ Tragic
figures, though we see very little of their detailed stories. The
decision of Thror to enter Moria, and Thrain to set out wondering in
the wilderness, were avoidable. Granted the influence of their Ring
has to be factored in, but just as with Boromir and the One Ring, the
Ring would have had to have something to work with in the first place.
That said, JRRT himself noted in his Letters that it's possible for an
Incarnate to be 'morally overwhelmed', to be placed in a situation
where s/he simply does not have the necessary strength to resist on
his or her own, no matter how hard he or she might try.