proposed editorial change to http://www.lrmi.net/the-specification

[Phil Barker]

Hello all. I would like to ask the favour of a quick check on some
editorial changes.

It came to my attention that The Specification page on the LRMI website
<http://www.lrmi.net/the-specification> was unclear in a couple of
particulars, and there are a couple of updates that are required. So I
have drafted an editorial update which you can see at
<http://pjjk.net/lrmiexx/the-specification.html>

What I would like as is that people check my changes to ensure is that
I'm not making the page worse.

Thanks, Phil


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[Phil Barker]

Hello all, just to wrap this up, I want to let you know that last week I
updated the page at http://www.lrmi.net/the-specification in line with
the draft I circulated below.

If there is anything in the LRMI spec documentation that you think needs
clarifying (or even correcting) please let me know, maybe via this list
so that other people can comment.

Phil

On 11/03/14 12:21, Phil Barker wrote:
> Hello all. I would like to ask the favour of a quick check on some
> editorial changes.
>
> It came to my attention that The Specification page on the LRMI
> website <http://www.lrmi.net/the-specification> was unclear in a
> couple of particulars, and there are a couple of updates that are
> required. So I have drafted an editorial update which you can see at
> <http://pjjk.net/lrmiexx/the-specification.html>
>
> What I would like as is that people check my changes to ensure is that
> I'm not making the page worse.
>
> Thanks, Phil
>
>


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