Hi Noreena,
I tried the game. Stunning graphics. Music is great.
Game play is a little confusing. In the end, I just clicked around until the pointer changed, then clicked - so I really had no idea what I was doing or why.
I have two teen-age sons. Neither would get any "health" lessons from this game. In part, because the message is pretty mundane and too well-known (don't smoke, don't drink) and don't address issues that teen-agers face today. Most teens in the US already don't smoke. They can't legally drink until age 21.
More pressing issues - is vaping smoking? What health risks? why? Now that marijuana is legal, how should I modify my behavior, if at all, when using it (e.g., marijuana stays in the blood stream for days - weeks, unlike alcohol, which clears out of the system in hours).
I'd say...
Great effort and great start. Now, work on UI and relevance.
Thanks for letting me play!
Meghan