for Jan 25th Helen's poems= Displaced and two Haiku

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Helen Cooper

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Jan 23, 2024, 5:04:29 PM1/23/24
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Fellow writers,

I wrote Displaced this morning and it needs a lot of work but I'm sure your feedback will help!  

See you on Thursday.

Helen
Cumulus Haiku.docx
Displaced.docx

Celia Mccauley

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Jan 24, 2024, 2:55:25 PM1/24/24
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Helen, I loved the Haiku, especially the second one.  I also think the last three lines of Displaced, summarize it perfectly. 

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