Re: Proposed Rules & Notes

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Tim Ackley

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Dec 8, 2025, 3:13:44 PMDec 8
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All,

Thank you to Diana and the entire committee. The work product is excellent!

I foresee very few changes:
  • page 6 - no smoking: remove "e-cigarettes, and vape pens." They are not covered by the Vaux no smoking resolution.
  • page 4 - resident access: add statement that lost or stolen fobs must be reported within 24 hours.
  • page 4 - parking access: for lost or stolen items, replace "report within 5 days" with "report within 24 hours."
  • page 4 - access (Hal): as Hal suggested, I think a more direct, declarative sentence would be better (see Hal's note).
  • page 5 - security (Hal): I think the section is fine as is. No changes necessary.
  • page 6 - noises & nuisances (Hal): No changes necessary.
Regarding wordsmithing and formatting suggestions:
  • the word "shall": Although it is viewed by some people as archaic, it is still widely used for technical writing such as this. I don't feel this suggestion is important enough to change its use in multiple instances within this document. No changes necessary.
  • formatting: No need to add "beautification" or links (which change over time). No changes necessary.
Again, thank you to everyone who contributed! Great work!

Tim

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On Fri, Oct 31, 2025 at 10:11 AM Joe Mack <jmmc...@gmail.com> wrote:
First, agree, on the quality of this immense effort. Thanks to the Rules Committee!

I will have all notes back by end of the weekend. I reviewed these six months or so ago and felt comfortable after a few changes were made .

Is there some way we can meet AFTER we have all read through and made  notes to discuss this fully?
 
To important to let something slip between the cracks
Joe

On Wed, Oct 29, 2025 at 6:34 PM <wor...@finitearts.com> wrote:

Hello, BODers:

 

At some point pretty soon we need to approve and adopt rules.  The Rules Committee has done a lot of work and have submitted a draft for all of us to scrutinize.

 

My overall reaction is -- excellent work by our committee.

 

Here are my notes, few but important, I believe.  Please take a look at both the rules as proposed and my notes and give this matter serious thought.

 

(Please use vauxofficers, not ordinary email, to discuss among ourselves.)

 

>>>>>> HAL NOTES:

 

> Page 4 Access --

            "Board does not have discretion . . . "

            - okay, but oblique

            - lose this sentence and add more explicit rule:

                        no provision is made for guest and visitor access -- relies on owners

            - virtual keys: do not limit them to less than Butterfly expiration of 1 year

 

> Page 5 Security -- 

            - give this section its own top heading

            - specific rule: never try to proceed through garage gate unless your vehicle opened it

            - report lost or stolen fobs within 24 hours

 

> Page 6 Noises & Nuisances

            - emphasize no harassment by anyone against anyone else

 

> Wordsmithing

            - please lose off-putting legalistic terms like "shall"

                        - e.g. -- "The Board shall reserve the right " --> "The Board reserves the right"

                                    - many other instances

 

> Formatting

            - needs "beautification"

            - needs links

            - current version was formatted by me (Hal) in 2019;

            - I propose to do so again once rules are approved

 

> Very few notes -- really good job !

 

<<<<<< 

 

— Hal

Paul Block

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Dec 8, 2025, 6:20:53 PMDec 8
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Great notes, Tim
-p
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On Dec 8, 2025, at 12:13 PM, Tim Ackley <tim.ack...@gmail.com> wrote:


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