h0p3
I read quite a lot of it. Its interesting. Particularly the themes and style of composition.
It comes over, philosophically, as an "assay in teleology."
Its very concerned with meaning, but also legacy--lessons learnt, rules derived that a Putative Junior Should Benefit From.
In that regard it brought strongly to mind the great Russian film "Palms" (Ladoni) by Artour Aristakysian that is a meditation by a father about his unborn child using extraordinary footage of ordinary & disabled people:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4D3tSwHMQa0 (The English subtitled version is gone, only Spanish, sorry).
The point being: they share an emergent single, recursively, pursued thread backgrounded against the viscus nature of the "normal".
If one were cynical you could see it purely as a writing exercise about inhabiting a persona that adumbrates a system that is "right". But its cleverer than that. Its almost a human writing it about a reality.
I might have further comments on the relation of the message to the medium.
Josiah