Still working on Cosca Ep 4.

[Quantum Mechanic]

Kind of stuck on the meetings among characters right now. I think I have a clue, but I'm going to have to chew on it for awhile.

I'll be out of town and unreachable for the next week or so, so if you have something related to group management that needs attention, raise the issue with the group moderators.

QM

[fred daddio]

Hi QM,

I just started on proofreading Cosca4 after being busy with other life issues for awhile.

I did not notice anything to flag in chapter 1.  There were a few I spotted in chapter 2, mostly grammatical, all easily fixed.  The proofed copy is attached to this email.  I'll start on chapter 3 tomorrow.  While Mike does his edits in red, I will use green to be distinct and avoid confusion.

I really like what you are doing with this story!  I've been wondering about the Cosca, their weaponry, and why Earth is still getting invaded despite their boasts about protecting themselves.  Thanks for exploring the question.  I really look forward to the results of Sandy's investigative reporting.

Fred

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