OK, sounds good to me. That would be a good production note to add.
On 5/2/23 8:46 AM, Weijia Cheng wrote:
> Interesting, it seems the /Chant of Mystics/ version of "The Fruits of
> Death" was first published in 1911 in /The Atlantic/, just a few years
> after /Myrtle and Myrrh/ was published:
> he chose the /Atlantic/ version, I'm going to treat that as Rihani's
> final version and cut the one from /Myrtle and Myrrh/ from the final
> production.
>
> On Monday, May 1, 2023 at 6:34:23 AM UTC-7 Weijia Cheng wrote:
>
>
https://archive.org/details/myrtlemyrrhpoems00riha/page/48/mode/1up?view=theater <
https://archive.org/details/myrtlemyrrhpoems00riha/page/48/mode/1up?view=theater>
>
https://archive.org/details/chantofmysticsot00riha/page/21/mode/1up?view=theater <
https://archive.org/details/chantofmysticsot00riha/page/21/mode/1up?view=theater>
>
> Links for comparison
>
> On Monday, May 1, 2023 at 6:33:59 AM UTC-7 Weijia Cheng wrote:
>
> OK, here's a situation I've never seen before. Both /Myrtle and
> Myrrh/ and /A Chant of Mystics/ have different versions of the
> poem "The Fruits of Death," which have the same general theme
> but different verses. If I had to guess, since /Chant/ was
> published later, it has a revised version of the original from
> /Myrtle and Myrrh/. What do we want to do with this? Cut the
> first one from /Myrtle and Myrrh/, or maybe keep both? They are
> <
https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/A_Chant_of_Mystics_and_Other_Poems <
https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/A_Chant_of_Mystics_and_Other_Poems>>, IA
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