Request for support to review the paper and reference (Chicago-style footnotes.)

[Kwizera Rulinda]

Dear Rising Scholars,

I'm reaching out to request your support in reviewing our paper entitled Implications of social media on youth Mental health in Rwanda. 

I would like more emphasis on Chicago Style Footnote If it is accurate .

I look forward to hearing from you and possible collaboration .

Warmly,

Rulinda 

Kwizera Rulinda

CEO, MINDORA Health

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[Kimberly C. Merenda]

Hello,

The footnotes overall are extremely well formatted. A quick look reveals a few matters: CMOS doesn't recommend using Ibid; the first line of footnotes should be indented; check with the journal to see if they prefer spaces between footnotes; check with the journal to see if they want live links (some of your links are live and some are not); footnote 34 should not include the author's Ph.D.; and in the text of your paper, terminal punctuation (usually periods) should come before the inserted footnote number.

I'm looking at your block quotes, and they seem to be centered? While they should be indented, they should be left-aligned. There may be extra space between some of your paragraphs. 

I hope that this helps. Your article is important and very relevant.

Take care,

Kimberly

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[James Odongo]

Thank you Rulinda. I don't see your references. Call me

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[A. Atia Apusigah]

 To support but I am more familiar with APA style referencing. Having studied in Canada where the emphasis was as on APA, 8 lost track of others. 8 was also chief editor for Ghana and journal of Development studies for 9 years

Prof. Agnes Atia Apusigah, Ph.D, JP
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(Education, Gender, Cultural Studies)

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[Kwizera Rulinda]

Dear  Kimberly , 

I appreciate your feedback and I look forward to make some recommended changes.

Warmly, 

Rulinda 

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