I have contributed substantial parts of this article over many years, but now its so hacked about that it has lost its structure and the use of English, in part, is not good. Actually, I'll go further - it's poor, contains errors and lacks cohesion.
Over the next few weeks I'll seek to completely rewrite this article with a better structure, improved use of English, no duplication, expanded references etc. If others feel that this is not appropriate, please contribute below; if you feel something is missing and needs to be added, please say so. Let me know your thoughts.
Nick
I have contributed substantial parts of this article over many years, but now its so hacked about that it has lost its structure and the use of English, in part, is not good. Actually, I'll go further - it's poor, contains errors and lacks cohesion.
Over the next few weeks I'll seek to completely rewrite this article with a better structure, improved use of English, no duplication, expanded references etc. If others feel that this is not appropriate, please contribute below; if you feel something is missing and needs to be added, please say so. Let me know your thoughts.
Miss Susan says that Nicholas can have a gold star from the stationery
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