Poster for Come and Sing

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Helen Bertels

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Nov 22, 2023, 9:23:49 AM11/22/23
to jan wright, Ros McCaul, 'Lisa Webster' via Carshalton Choral Society
Hi All
Im attaching a draft poster for the Come and Sing. Could I have opinions please and any adjustments to text that might be necessary.
Please comment freely as I can always change it. Im not very keen on the bottom line where it says at All Saints Carshalton - not sure if this is necessary? I made it smaller because the other text is more important.
Running it past you 3 first before the committee!!
best wishes
Helen

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Helen Bertels

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Nov 22, 2023, 10:19:10 AM11/22/23
to Howard King, 'Lisa Choral Society
Apologies - sent to all in error!
Helen

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On 22 Nov 2023, at 14:48, Howard King <howard...@gmail.com> wrote:


Not sure if you meant to send this to me.
My comment would be that, although it's obvious (music included) it might be absolutely clearer as ( use of music score included). Or probably too pedantic !

H

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Ros McCaul

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Nov 22, 2023, 11:40:02 AM11/22/23
to Helen Bertels, 'Lisa Choral Society
Looks good.  Suggestions include -

Change text at top to " enjoy singing with a choir?  Want to develop ...." and maybe font to Italic?

Change text at bottom from "at All Saints Church" to "see our website for details".  The website address is immediately above.

Probably should specify that a music score is included.

Ros





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