I like your version much better!
Ray
Ray> I just finished reading Scaduto, so I remember how he reports this.
Ray> Scaduto claims that Bob turned up with three friends (they were on a
Ray> wild car drive around the country), and Bob was disappointed that
Ray> Sandburg didn't recognize him. They didn't talk for long, and Bob
Ray> came away dejected --- Sandburg didn't want to listen to anybody but
Ray> himself.
Robert Shelton, in _No_Direction_Home_, tells essentially this story.
Ken