On Wednesday, October 14, 2015 at 9:32:41 PM UTC-7, Zobovor wrote:
> "Convoy" is episode nine of Transformers: Prime, first airing on March 4, 2011 during its first season. It was written by Joseph Kuhr, who also wrote for Batman: the Brave and the Bold among other series. The title is strangely apt, given that Convoy is the Japanese name for Optimus Prime.
Also, more importantly, they are a convoy.
> Our episode begins with one Special Agent Fowler yelling at Optimus Prime over a communications channel. The Decepticons made an attempt to steal the Dynamic Nuclear Generation System, or DNGS (which he pronounced "dingus") and now Fowler is aboard a downed aircraft. He demands that Prime use the space bridge to transport the device to safety, but Prime says the nuclear device is too volatile to transport in this manner. Three human children provide sarcastic running commentary.
Only Miko is sarcastic. Jack is quiet, and Raf is wondering whether he is about to get irradiated by an exploding Dingus.
> The Transformers: Prime character designs take their cues from the look of the Michael Bay movie characters, though the CGI designs are understandably much simpler. The designs for their faces really bother me, though. Optimus Prime, for example, has these gigantic Groucho Marx eyebrows, no nose whatsoever, and a tiny little slit for a mouth. It's difficult to quantify what constitutes a cool-looking design, but the end result isn't cool-looking to me. It's just goofy.
The designs are a weird mix of TF:Animated and the Movieverse. And, like Animated, they take a while to get used to.
> Peter Cullen is arguably THE voice of Optimus Prime; he's been played by other voice actors (Neil Kaplan in 2001's Robots in Disguise; Garry Chalk during the Armada days; David Kaye for Animated) but none have successfully captured the deep resonance. With that said, it's been over 30 years since Cullen first provided the voice characterization, and it shows in his delivery. These days, his rendition of Prime toggles between world-weary and just plain exhausted.
I think part of that is the Optimii he is voicing are world-weary and exhausted. One of the things I find a little jarring is that TF:Prime Optimus Prime looks young and sounds old.
> So the Autobots arrive in person to transport the DNGS to its destination. Somehow, they all manage to squeal their tires on dirt. End teaser; cue the opening theme song.
It's part of their disguise. Their tires actually never squeal, but they play a squealing noise at appropriate times so people don't notice. But they don't always get it right.
> An old rustbucket that looks like G2 Electro is in Prime's way; Special Agent Fowler impatiently lays on the horn. It becomes apparent that they're being followed, ostensibly by Decepticons. For some reason, Prime insists that they remain in vehicle mode and do not engage.
The public doesn't know about Transformers in this continuity, and the Autobots intend to keep it that way.
> I'm struck by what a bad toy commercial this is, because Prime is the only Transformer that's been identified by name. I recognize that the yellow guy must be Bumblebee and the white guy must be Ratchet, but there's also a green guy and I have no idea what his name is.
Don't forget the blue motorcycle!
> The leader of the group finally reveals himself as Silas and his organization is called MECH. I assume that's an acronym for something, but they never tell us.
Monstrous Electronic Cannibal Hamsters. They're sort of embarrassed about their name, so they don't use it often.
> Elsewhere, the Decepticons intercept a communications signal and learn of the Autobots' plans, and prepare to intercept. When the Autobots enter a train tunnel, they switch the cargo, loading the DNGS onboard a train car with the help of military personnel. Silas continues his pursuit of the Autobots, not realizing they have transported the cargo.
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> A bunch of generic Decepticon troops arrive and Prime is finally allowed to transform. I'm not sure what purpose is served in staying in vehicle mode for 14 out of 22 minutes. It's not like this is the Michael Bay films where it behooves the filmmakers to use their real-life cars as long as possible because of the expense of animating the robot forms in CGI. The generic troops don't offer any clever quips, and indeed don't even speak; I suppose this gives the Autobots free reign to quickly and easily destroy them without having to get rid of any toy-characters.
The Vehicons speak. One of them spoke this episode in fact. They don't make a lot of quips in this series, although there are a few scenes in other episodes where they chat among themselves and complain about their bosses.
> Silas figures out that the device is on board the train and sends agents to intercept. The human children decide it's necessary for them to save the day and use the space bridge to warp on board the train car, preparing to fight the MECH agents with fire extinguishers and such.
It's such a staggeringly bad, ill-thought-out plan. They have no weapons.
> Silas inexplicably decides to withdraw,
He saw Optimus approaching, and recognized that his troops wouldn't have time to secure the Dingus and get it off the train. The kids delay the troops for an instant, but they would have been shot.
> but not before blasting the tracks ahead of the train. Prime springs into action and, in a scene reminiscient of "Auto-Bop" but more likely borrowed from Spider-Man 2, he stops the train with his bare hands.
The train scene has been used in Superman comics and cartoons going back a long, long time. I assume there are lots of other spots it gets used.
> I thought this review would be longer, but in truth I have so little to say. There was virtually no character development for anybody, with Prime and Fowler getting the bulk of the dialogue.
I think we got a lot of development for Jack, and give or take every other character got a brief moment. There were a lot of characters, though.
But, you didn't notice, or weren't interested in:
The discovery that humans can be as evil as the Decepticons?
The woeful ineffectiveness of the kids plan?
Autobots killing people?
Jack's very uncertain steps towards heroism?
Starscream delegating too much, but still showing more military genius than just about any previous Decepticon leader?
The animation?
The music?
The really nice opening?
> The Autobots could have been replaced by any other characters and it wouldn't have affected the outcome of the story in the least.
That's objectively not true. Replace Bumblebee with G1 Slizardo, Bulkhead with Energon Alpha Q, Ratchet with Armada Leader-1 and Arcee with The Fallen, and it would have been entirely different!
It's a very human centric story though.
> This was not a very engaging episode for me, especially since the "race to find the MacGuffin" episodes have been done far better in other shows.
> So, here's what I would have done differently. First, explain the reason why the Autobots feel like they need to stay disguised as vehicles. I'm sure it's got something to do with the premise of the show, or at least the first season, but I was essentially a first-time viewer and I felt lost. If they had stressed the danger of just what would happen if they did transform, it would have made the plot point seem important instead of just annoying.
I wonder if you would be lost watching a random episode of Beast Wars for the first time. If you didn't already know and love the characters, would you recognize the slow, subtle development that occurred across many episodes?
G1 was very much a short-form show -- characters got a single spotlight episode, and has minimal characterization outside of their spotlight episode. With BW and TF:Prime, you're getting more of a slice of the whole series, even if the episode has a proper story arc.
> All the Autobots should have been given a moment to shine. I can guess what their personalities are like based on their traditional character archetypes (Bumblebee is young and plucky, green maybe-Bulkhead is a rough-and-tumble type, etc.) but, really, none of that came through in this particular episode.
You didn't get anything from their individual battle styles? It's not all dialog in this series -- particularly because neither Bumblebee nor Soundwave actually speak.
And, each got a few lines to remind us of their character, except Bumblebee of course, but he got a little extra focus in the action scenes.
> There should have been actual, live Decepticons to fight instead of drones with no dialogue. There was no witty banter and no real sense that the Autobots were ever in danger. I felt no desire to own a toy of a mindless Decepticon drone, if one even exists.
They aren't mindless or drones. They are fine, upstanding members of the Decepticon army. I do think they should have been given more explicit personalities, and more varied personalities, throughout the show.
> The Autobot-Decepticon war is usually at the forefront of a Transformers story and sending brainless machines to do their dirty work is boring.
I don't like Bumblebee either, but Bulkhead is always very nice, despite being dimwitted.
> (For the record, before anyone starts preparing a "G1 sucks too" argument, I hated the centurion droids in "The Key to Vector Sigma" and I hated the Decepti-cars in "Make Tracks.")
I liked the centurion droids. Really, every artifact of ancient Cybertron delighted me.
> I get that shows like this are usually structured so that the children end up saving the day. Spike (and, later, Daniel) did it countless times throughout G1; those stupid kids in Armada did it constantly; etc. If somebody feels like this is how the target audience relates to this show, fine. There's certainly a precedent for it throughout children's programming. Penny was the real hero of the Inspector Gadget series; the human friends of the Dinosaucers usually got more screen time than the actual Dinosaucers did; the list goes on. The episode just broadcasts it so obviously. The kids literally just stand there, doing absolutely nothing useful, until they decide it's time to save the Autobots and warp in there to be the heroes.
... And they are utterly ineffective.
> It would have flowed more organically if they'd been accidentally caught up in affairs somehow or if they had been forced, compelled, to intervene because somebody had a personal stake in the episode's events. Also, like the Autobots, I didn't get a feel at all for their individual personalities. They were just... the prerequisite kids.
I thought the kids' personalities came out well. Raf doesn't have a personality, of course. But Miko and Jack got a lot of bits of characterization. Miko is like G1 Cliffjumper, filled with bravado and a courage that borders on stupidity, and Jack has the same reluctance of G1 Mirage.
I figure referencing G1 Autobots is the way to go with you.
> Also, speaking strictly from the standpoint of an old Geewun fanboy, this is a show where Frank Welker returned as the voice of Megatron, so an episode without him seems empty somehow.
It's such a different Megatron it's not the same at all.
> Go ahead and challenge my opinions! Tell me why I'm wrong! Go ahead, I'm a big boy. I can take it.
I think we have wildly different views of this episode.