Hi Mohit,
I left some comments on your proposal, you can have a look and act on them as you see fit. You can also reply directly to the comments in the Google Doc if you have further questions. Please remember to update the proposal by April 4 - 18:00 UTC and re-submit the final version as PDF.
A general comment that can be useful to other applicants as well:
I think you should narrow the focus of your proposal. There is a lot of discussion about improving the MDAnalysis documentation, but your proposal is about the project on benchmarking and optimisation. You are of course very welcome to propose your own project about improving the documentation (although that would be more suited for Google Season of Docs), but in such case it should not be mixed with the benchmarking and optimisation project. If you want to work on the benchmarking and optimisation project, whose goal is to "increase the performance assessment coverage and identify code that should be improved", please focus on those aspects. The proposal should be rather narrow-scoped and detailed.
I hope the comments help.
Best,
Rocco