A quick question. How do I treat the punctuation in the follow sentence:
I'm merely making my point (and it's a good one!).
I'm not sure if this is grammatically correct or not. I'd like to include
the exclaimation _inside_ the brackets because that's where the emphasis
lies (rather than on the entire sentence).
Suggestions and guidance is appreciated.
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> Hail,
>
> A quick question. How do I treat the punctuation in the follow
> sentence:
>
> I'm merely making my point (and it's a good one!).
>
> I'm not sure if this is grammatically correct or not. I'd like to
> include the exclaimation _inside_ the brackets because that's
> where the emphasis lies (rather than on the entire sentence).
>
> Suggestions and guidance is appreciated.
I wouldn't put the important point of the sentence inside
brackets/parentheses, because they mean that the information
contained within is relatively unimportant.
"I'm merely making my point, and it's a good one!" or
"I'm merely making my point---and it's a good one!" or
"I'm merely making my point. And it's a good one!"
are all stronger.
I wouldn't say that the part inside the parentheses is important, it's more
of an off-handed remark which is why I put it in there to begin with.
I see. The this is the way to punctuate it:
"I'm merely making my point (and it's a good one!)"
no final period outside the parenthesis.
Except in BrEnglish, where, if the sentence ends after the parenthesis, a
full stop is required.
Well, then, given that what's inside the parenthesis marks is not an
exclamation in grammatical form[1] but a plain declarative sentence,
and given that it's an off-handed remark, there's no reason in the
world to put a bang, or anything else but the closing parenthesis
mark, after it. So just delete the bang, put a period after the
closing parenthesis mark, and move on.
[1] Proper grammatical form for exclamations, by example:
-- How lovely are thy dwelling places, O Lord!
-- What a piece of work is man!
-- Ouch!
-- Help!
--
Bob Lieblich
Not that anyone pays attention anymore
Not when the sentence/phrase inside the parenthetic brackets has its own
question mark or exclamation mark.
Alan Jones
Even when the sentence/phrase inside the parentheses has its own
punctuation, the external sentence requires punctuation.
>Even when the sentence/phrase inside the parentheses has its own
>punctuation, the external sentence requires punctuation.
Agreed. The rule I use is that the sentence must still be correctly
punctuated if you remove everything from "(" to ")". Possibly that's
too simple.
David