[VOY] Lynch's Spoiler Review: "Non Sequitur"
Timothy W. Lynch
contains spoilers (Teflon-coated yaks) for the VOY episode (but who
last *saw* the feather duster?) "Non Sequitur".
In brief: The ground here is so well-trodden that there's nothing fresh
to find, but it was pleasant and diverting enough.
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Brief summary: Ensign Kim awakes in San Francisco, finding
himself in an alternate reality where he never boarded Voyager.
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Okay. I've said before that I like what-if stories and reality-bending
stories, but even I'm starting to get tired of them now. "Voyager", in
particular, has so much meat hiding in its core premises that it's a little
disturbing to see so much emphasis placed on "but this isn't really the
case" stories. Any particular style of episode can get old if overused,
and this type is lingering dangerously close.
Some of that might be because this is the second show of the last three
which heavily calls to mind a TNG equivalent. [Both the episodes
here and their TNG equivalents were written by Brannon Braga,
which is either keeping honest or inbreeding, depending on your
perspective. :-) ] Two weeks ago, we had "Projections", which had a
great many similarities to "Frame of Mind", but was still well done.
This time, "Non Sequitur" strikes me as a reworking of "Parallels"
(alias "Schrodinger's Klingon"), which saw Worf jumping between
alternate realities as a result of a shuttle accident.
"Non Sequitur" was entertaining enough in spots, but it suffers
greatly in comparison to "Parallels", for two strong reasons. The first
problem is that of the lead character: Kim's had so little development
that this was still virtually an Everyman story, as opposed to Worf,
who was so well known by then that it was interesting to see where
his next might-have-been would take him. The second is similar:
perhaps because of Kim's lack of fleshing out, the alternate reality he
was in just wasn't all that compelling. Given all the trouble he got
himself into so quickly, there didn't seem to be much force behind
Cosimo's arguments that this was really the good life for Harry.
Despite all that, however, I did enjoy the episode taken as a whole.
From Harry's meeting to discuss the runabout he didn't remember
designing (hasn't *everyone* had a nightmare like that at some point
in their lives?), to little details like his clarinet being there, to
Starfleet's inevitable suspicion when he called up Voyager's files with
such ease and to his visit with Tom Paris (more on that later), the
show rarely got boring. Old news mostly, perhaps, but still done
with enough flair in spots to be worth the trip.
A fair amount of the reason for that has to be what was done with
Tom Paris. Paris has been somewhat better defined than Kim, so he
didn't seem as washed-out as Kim did -- and more importantly, since
he *changed* when Harry jumped realities, we got to see a contrast
between the Paris we know and the Paris we were seeing then, and
got to realize just how easily Paris's life might have changed "for want
of a nail". Add in Kim's hero-worship, displayed here about as much
as it's ever been, and the Kim/Paris stuff was the peak of the show.
(Besides, everyone's been so damned good of late that it's nice to see
a scoundrel.)
Plot-wise, the basic story was fine, if well-worn. There are a few
details nibbling around the edges that I'm not so sure of, though,
mostly nit-picks. For instance:
-- The anklet strikes me as overkill. Given how visible it is, it's
basically going to be the 24th-century equivalent of putting a scarlet
"M" on his chest. Given how easily Starfleet personnel can install
transponders these days (done many times in TNG and DS9 for
communications without communicators), I'm surprised it wasn't
something like that. It'd probably be tougher to tamper with, too.
(For that matter, why *did* he have to tamper with it? It didn't stop
them from knowing where he was, it seems.) I liked Paris's
observation about how much they chafe, though. :-)
-- I find it a little bit difficult to believe that Starfleet Headquarters isn't
shielded from unauthorized transports. What about saboteurs? In
these days of Maquis activity, that strikes me as a real danger...
-- Technobabble. Insert my standard lament; there's still too much of
it, and saying "it isn't necessary for you to understand" through one
of the characters seems tantamount to saying "no, we're not even
TRYING to make sense now with it". No, thanks.
-- I also think that the computer ought to have a non-voice option, so
that people can work at 4 in the morning without waking up their
fiancees. :-)
Speaking of which, one of the weaker elements of the show was
*definitely* Jennifer Gatti's performance. While I preferred her here
to her work as Ba'el in TNG's "Birthright", there's still nothing
particularly compelling there to watch. Okay, so she looks good in a
towel -- but with dialogue like "I've got to see Paris." / "But you said
you were going to Marseilles!", that's rather far from enough. (I also
think, given all the speculation about Harry's sexual orientation that
I've seen bandied about, that Libby's presence was partly to have a
"Harry-is-SO-straight!" moment ... but I could be way off there.)
In terms of characterization, I've already mentioned that the best stuff
revolved around Paris, not Kim. Kim's devotion to duty *did* come
across well, but was undercut because his life here really didn't seem
to be working out all that smoothly, so he didn't have as much
motivation to stay as we were supposed to think. Paris was pretty
good throughout (both the writing and Robert Duncan McNeill's
performance), and virtually everyone else was window-dressing.
Some of the better moments came in throwaway lines, really -- things
like Lasca's "Harry -- you better be dying.", Kim's "Look, that was
another lifetime; I'm doing the best I can", and Kim's "Why does
everyone say relax when they're about to do something terrible?"
worked better than entire scenes in some cases. (One other nice bit
was the fact that for once, the aliens behind this *weren't* omniscient
or omnipotent. It's getting crowded in the Omnipotent Beings Sector
these days.)
As far as the ending goes, I liked Harry's "I owe you one" to Paris
quite a bit. (The chase was nice, too, though the Spacedock rather
suspiciously resembled the Dyson sphere the Enterprise fled in
"Relics". :-) ) In terms of the story, though, there's one thing that is
going to have to get remembered: Voyager has now lost one
shuttlecraft. With a fairly small crew complement, I don't imagine
there are all that many shuttles in the first place -- if the ship's just lost
one third or one half of its entire shuttle complement, that's something
the crew will need to keep in mind later.
That more or less covers everything, I think. "Non Sequitur" was
fun, and I enjoyed it -- but these sort of stories are starting to run a
little too often for my tastes. With Voyager in the Delta Quadrant,
there are lots of things that can and should be done *there*; let's see
them!
So, wrapping up:
Writing: The plot was one Brannon Braga could've written in his
sleep by now, but there were enough little touches in it to be
fun.
Directing: David Livingston got in some nice aerial shots while Paris
was being chased, but all in all this was rather neutral.
Acting: McNeill was particularly strong, Garrett Wang was pretty
good. Jennifer Gatti -- no.
OVERALL: I think this is about a 6.5 or so. Not thrilling, but
pleasant.
NEXT WEEK:
"And He Built a Crooked Starship"?
Tim Lynch (Harvard-Westlake School, Science Dept.)
tly...@alumni.caltech.edu
"Why does everyone always say 'relax' when they're about to do
something terrible?"
-- Harry Kim
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Tim Klassen
> In terms of the story, though, there's one thing that is
> going to have to get remembered: Voyager has now lost one
> shuttlecraft. With a fairly small crew complement, I don't imagine
> there are all that many shuttles in the first place -- if the ship's
just lost
> one third or one half of its entire shuttle complement, that's something
> the crew will need to keep in mind later.
Actually, that was number two. They lost another a couple of weeks ago in
that episode with Chakotay and the kid. At least this may mean they will
have to stop using the "crew member gets into trouble on a shuttle
mission" theme that has become more than a little cliche. But then I
suspect i'm only fooling myself if I believe that!
TimK
Charles Owen
>
>Actually, that was number two. They lost another a couple of weeks ago in
>that episode with Chakotay and the kid. At least this may mean they will
>have to stop using the "crew member gets into trouble on a shuttle
>mission" theme that has become more than a little cliche. But then I
>suspect i'm only fooling myself if I believe that!
>
"Parturition"
Episode: 22 - First Showing Week of: 10/9/95
When Kes spends free time with a smitten Tom Paris, Neelix is overcome with
jealousy and
instigates a messy fight with the Lieutenant. In the aftermath, the Captain
sends the sparring pair on
a shuttlecraft mission to an M-Class planet, to replenish food supplies. When
their craft experiences
an interference pattern, they crash on the planet's surface.
So, will they lose another one?
--
Charles B. Owen Charles...@dartmouth.edu
Dartmouth College Office: 603-646-3297
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Matthew White
> >
> Sure are. Next episode:
>
> "Parturition"
>
> Episode: 22 - First Showing Week of: 10/9/95
>
> When Kes spends free time with a smitten Tom Paris, Neelix is overcome with
Don't tell me!!! I haven't seen the episode yet!
But let me guess. Neelix, in a fit of jealous rage, kills
Paris, cooks him and serves him to the crew. An angry Janeway
tells Neelix, "I don't have the luxury of locking you in the
brig for the next 70 years, but if you EVER do that again,
you're in big trouble, mister."