{ASSM} "yes Mistress" Eli the Bearded <220 Words> {Fdom/Fm/toy/hum}
Eli the Bearded
what I had in mind. Here's something I wrote to show the sort of
response I was looking for. If you don't know about the 220 word
story contest/game, see my post in alt.sex.stories.d:
From: Eli the Bearded <*@eli.users.panix.com>
Subject: {ASSD} different take on word count limits
Date: Thu, 25 Jul 2002 19:16:31 -0400
Message-ID: <eli$02072...@qz.little-neck.ny.us>
Between the two lines of hyphens I use 160 different words to write
a 1001 word story. My first draft used about 180 words for a story
about 900 words long. Some typos may have made it through to this
revision, some probably have, but you'll have to live with it.
This story contains elements of humiliation, female domination of a
male, sex-toy fucking and sucking, and S&M. If these things bother
your or cannot be leagal read by you, please move on.
Feedback on this story may be posted to alt.sex.stories.d or sent
by email to *@eli.users.panix.com (yes, that is (star) (at) eli
(dot) users (dot) panix (dot) com).
Copyright 2002, see distribution notice at end of story.
Elijah
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yes Mistress, i am filthy. i have been touching myself in a filthy
way and made a filthy mess. i have been touching my ass and my dick
and i am a slut and i am so filthy.
yes Mistress, i will put on the clamps. i will hang the weights from
the clamps. i will lick clean my fingers. i will lick up my mess.
i put the clamps on my nipples and on my dick. i put the weights on
the clamps. as i crawl to the mess the clamps swing and pull painfully
on my nipples, the weights on my dick drag on the floor.
now at my filthy mess, i lick and lick and lick and the clamps swing
painfully and swing hard. then i crawl back to my Mistress and lick
and kiss Her boots to let Her know i, Her filthy slut toy, am back.
then i see She has Her strap-on dildo on. i know what this means. i
crawl on the bed to lick and kiss and suck the dildo. She likes to
see me fuck the dildo with my mouth. i make sure to suck hard and push
the dildo deep in my throat. She likes to look at my throat and see it
swell with the dildo. i do not look at Her, i just look at the dildo.
i know what is next. She likes to fuck my ass with the dildo. She
likes me to know the dildo is bigger than my dick. She likes me to
know the dildo is better than my dick. my dick is filthy, but the
dildo is clean, i always lick it clean. i crawl forward. my mouth is
near Her boots. i lick her boots and feel the dildo at my ass. i
feel the dildo push into my ass and i lick her boots. hard and fast
the dildo fucks me, the dildo fills me. my ass is filthy and the dildo
will be filthy but She fucks my ass. She fucks it hard and deep.
yes Mistress, fuck me. i am Your slut. i am Your toy. i am filthy and
i need punishment. i made a mess with my come. fuck me hard Mistress
with Your big dildo. Your dick is shiny and clean and so much better
than my filthy dick.
my nipple weights swing fast now. i feel my dick swell even with the
clamps still on it. i know that i am not allowed to come but the dildo
in my ass, the dildo fucking my ass, the dildo better and bigger than
my dick, the dildo hurts my ass, the dildo hard in my ass, the dildo
fills me, the dildo will make me come. i feel filthy when i come. i am
filthy and i make a mess. She did not see that i have come, but i know
it and i will tell her. i always tell her so She will know i am not
hiding it from Her. i will have to lick up my come and i feel filthy.
i know when the dildo comes out of my ass it is when i must lick up my
mess. i feel the dildo pull and i say i will clean it Mistress. i lick
up the mess on the dildo. i suck off the dildo again. i suck off the
mess on the dildo so it will be clean and shiny, not like my filthy
dick.
then i tell my Mistress of the mess i made while She fucked me. i tell
her i am a filthy slut and i love a big hard dick in my ass. i tell her
it again and again how filthy i am.
She is silent. i know she is angry. i lick up my mess while She stares
at me. i feel her eyes deep in my back as i lick and lick. i am filthy
and She is so silent it hurts. i must punish myself. She will not be
angry with me if i punish myself.
i take off the weights and the clamps and my nipples hurt so much. i
take out the electric toy. this toy hurts so much. She will know it
hurts and approve of the punishment. She will approve. i put the probe
in my ass and the clips on my nipples. i set the voltage high and set
the timer and wait.
then the voltage runs through me and i scream it hurts and She stares
at me. i know She likes it. my ass and my nipples and a line between
them it hurts so much so deep in me.
when the timer stops and the voltage stops i take the clips off my
nipples and put them on my dick and balls. i take the probe from my
ass. it is filthy now, i will need to lick it clean. i set the timer
again and now suck the probe.
again the voltage runs through me and i scream because it hurts so
much and again She stares at me. my filthy dick hurts as much as it
is filthy. deep in my throat the voltage hurts more than any dildo
more than any dick fucking my mouth or ass.
when the timer stops and the voltage stops i lick and kiss Her boots.
She knows it is good for me to be painfully punished because i am so
filthy. She knows i need Her punishment. i lick Her boots to make them
shiny and clean to make them not like me, not filthy.
my Mistress is dead but She would approve of my punishment. even dead
She knows i need Her and knows i will keep her clean always. She knows
i am her worthless slut that i need Her to keep me in line, to keep my
filthy dick punished and my filthy ass punished. She knows She is not
dead to me.
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This story is written and copyright by Eli the Bearded, July 2002, for
the 220 words story concept. It may be freely distributed unmodified
by Usenet, in archives of Usenet, and on free websites.
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Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights
reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated.
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