{ASS}AnnD"Centerfold"MF(0/4)

[ann_d...@hotmail.com]

Centerfold is a story I've been writing on and off
for some months now. I really wasn't planning
to finish it because I've been somewhat
discouraged of late by the lack of feedback from
both the last few stories I've posted as well as my
web page.

I only finished it because Maria (maria1971) kept
on my case to do so. So if you enjoy it, you can
thank her for nagging me almost daily to write it.
If you don’t like it, you can blame me. But of
course that would mean that you’d have to write
and tell me that.

Ann Douglas

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<ann_d...@hotmail.com> wrote:

> Centerfold is a story I've been writing on and off
> for some months now. I really wasn't planning
> to finish it because I've been somewhat
> discouraged of late by the lack of feedback from
> both the last few stories I've posted as well as my
> web page.
>
> I only finished it because Maria (maria1971) kept
> on my case to do so. So if you enjoy it, you can
> thank her for nagging me almost daily to write it.
> If you don't like it, you can blame me. But of
> course that would mean that you'd have to write
> and tell me that.

Glad to see a new story from you, but a favor please: don't use curly
quotes in your stories. They don't work over the net. One solution,
since Word is so hard to work with these days, is to save your story as
"ASCII text" before you copy and paste it. Another is to compose in
Notepad/Wordpad.
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[Homer Vargas]

In article <7suc8t$g1$1...@nnrp1.deja.com>,

ann_d...@hotmail.com wrote:
> Centerfold is a story I've been writing on and off
> for some months now. I really wasn't planning
> to finish it because I've been somewhat
> discouraged of late by the lack of feedback from
> both the last few stories I've posted as well as my
> web page.
>
> I only finished it because Maria (maria1971) kept
> on my case to do so. So if you enjoy it, you can
> thank her for nagging me almost daily to write it.
> If you don’t like it, you can blame me. But of
> course that would mean that you’d have to write
> and tell me that.
>

> Ann Douglas

While Maria's point -- commenting to this NG is no substitute for an
actual note of thanks from a reader, (I got one from Chazz, too.) the
reverse is also true. Some writers -- I for one -- would like to see a
discussion of their stories -- pros. cons. whys, and why nots. In a
separate post I have suggested that we discuss this very story. As for
the remark that few authors read ASSD, maybe it's because we so seldom
discuss stories.

Cheers,

Homer

My stories are now found on Lazeez's website at
http://www.storiesonline.net (Thanks Lazeez) and
on http://www.asstr.org/~Vargas/ (Thanks, Kristen)