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Francisco  
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From: Francisco <ffernandezdecas...@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 20:40:24 -0700 (PDT)
Local: Mon, May 31 2010 11:40 pm
Subject: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Ata and Jessica,

I uploaded two files: a first rough draft and references.

There is to much work pending:

1. The tables for strategies and indicators have heading only in the
first page. How can we add headings in the other pages?
2. Images are needed
3. What is our conclusion?
4. We do not have strategies and indicators for some sites.
5. Some paragraphs are completely disconnected. So, we need to read
carefully the whole document to make sure that every thing is related
each other.
6. We have a list of references but we used different styles:
homogeneity?
7. I designed a table of contents but I am not sure if it is the right
one.
8. What about the title? I proposed one but, please, feel free to make
changes.

I hope we can finish this report before noon.

Thanks for your hard work
ff


 
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Jessica DeLora  
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From: Jessica DeLora <jkd...@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 20:49:23 -0700
Local: Mon, May 31 2010 11:49 pm
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Francisco, thank you for uploading the document. I am going to go ahead and
start editing rough draft. When I am done I will upload the new draft. Once
the new document is uploaded those who still need to add their parts can do
so and either Ata or I could do a final edit.

Hopefully this works. If anyone has a better suggestion let me know.

jessica

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Ata Khan  
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From: Ata Khan <akha...@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 21:10:09 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 12:10 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Jessica, when you upload a new draft, I'll go ahead and do my edits/final
edits and upload again. If anybody wants to add any text, go ahead and
e-mail me.

-Ata


 
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Courtney Holowach  
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From: Courtney Holowach <courtneyaholow...@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 21:13:54 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 12:13 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Hi Ata and Jessica,

Not sure if the final version of my section was added, so I'm attaching it
here just in case.  it has the corresponding image numbers.  Thanks again
for editing.

-Court

  Sustainability Strategies for Santa Ana Rail Station.doc
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Kawin Sawangarom  
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From: Kawin Sawangarom <kawinsawanga...@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2010 21:18:02 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 12:18 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Regarding our conclusion, we can use Mike's conclusion, perhaps adapt
something to make it suitable to our economic/community report. Mike's
conclusion is attached to this email. The other group uses this too but
changed a bit.

Kawin

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  SUMMARY AND CONCLUSION.doc
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Francisco Fernández  
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From: Francisco Fernández <ffernandezdecas...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 00:21:29 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 3:21 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

...OK, but who is able to adapt this conclusion? Is anybody willing and able
to prepare our concluding ideas based on our document and Professor Ruane
text?

In addition, I noticed that we do not have appendices. Do we?

About the design of our document. Did you see the Affordable Housing Team
document? How can I do something like that regarding the "front page"? In
general, how can we improve the design of the document?

Kawin: just to confirm the logistic about the CD. Are you providing us with
the CD or do we need to buy one?

ff

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From: Ata Khan <akha...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 00:35:16 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 3:35 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Francisco,

I'll attempt writing the conclusion--where can I find Ruane's text? If
someone can send me that, I'll get started.

If we need blank CDs, I have some and will keep them on me tomorrow.

Regarding the Affordable Housing document, we can make a title page like the
one in that report using Adobe Illustrator or even Word--since I have
Illustrator, I'll go ahead and make a sample cover page to make our report
look like "professional consultant" material.

Francisco or anyone else for that matter--any ideas on a title? Send me some
ideas and I'll put that in; if not, that's okay, I'll just come up with one.

Also, I'm planning on using Calibri Size 12 font throughout to keep it
uniformed, and will make sure we have a standard header/footer.

Hopefully I can come up with something for you all to look at in the morning
and provide feedback...

What's the schedule tomorrow, are we meeting before?

-Ata

2010/6/1 Francisco Fernández <ffernandezdecas...@gmail.com>


 
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Jessica DeLora  
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From: Jessica DeLora <jkd...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 01:10:46 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 4:10 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Ata,
The document is too large to attach to the email, I have uploaded it to our
group page. I edited grammar and sentence structure the best I could. I also
added Kawin and Courtney's pictures into the document. I think what is most
needed now is formatting and basically making the document look
professional. Also, thank you for doing the conclusion. I haven't seen
Ruane's conclusion and don't know where to find it.

To the rest of the team,
The high lighted areas within the document are areas that are incomplete.
They include the following:

1.3.1.3 Anaheim (pg 12)
Imagae site plan area between talbert st & slater st (pg 36)
1.3.2.4 Aliso Viejo (pg 38)
List of Green-Specific Financing Used in Nueva Vista Family Housing (pg 47)
2.2.1.2 Anaheim (pg 48)
2.2.1.3 Fullerton (pg 48)
2.2.1.4 Santa Ana (pg 48)
2.2.2.4 Aliso Viejo (pg 50)
3.1.2 Strategies and Indicators for Anaheim (pg 54)
3.1.3 Strategies and indicators for Fullerton (pg 54)
3.2.4 Strategies and indicators for Aliso Viejo (pg 63)
Conclusion (pg 66)

If these are you section, please insert them into the appropriate spaces as
soon as you can.  Thank you!

~jess


 
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Ata Khan  
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 More options Jun 1 2010, 4:14 am
From: Ata Khan <akha...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 01:14:05 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 4:14 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

awesome, thanks jessica :)


 
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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 01:29:38 -0700
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Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Hey guys, I uploaded my case study for Anaheim, I definitely still need to
update though with recommendations and goals which I will be doing tomorrow
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Kawin Sawangarom  
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 More options Jun 1 2010, 10:10 am
From: Kawin Sawangarom <kawinsawanga...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 07:10:27 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 10:10 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Thanks everyone for your hard work.

Ata, you can find Mike's conclusion in this e-mail.

I'll bring one or two with cases. I recommend that Ata bring some blank CDs
too, just in case.

Kawin

  SUMMARY AND CONCLUSION.doc
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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 07:57:05 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 10:57 am
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Morning All,

I added the missing part of my Santa Ana section.  I've uploaded the most
current document to the google group.

-C

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From: Ata Khan <akha...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 11:05:35 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 2:05 pm
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Hey everyone,

I'll be at work until 5p, where I can't access Gmail, so I wanted to let you
know that I have a copy of the document and I'm making edits  and formatting
changes to it now an will be doing so at work, too.

When I get back home I'll upload the final edited document. If you need to
get a hold of me, you can e-mail me at ak...@lbschools.net, or call/text
909/657.8807.

Ata

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 11:14:25 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 2:14 pm
Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

...my schedule today is really hard, but I am willing to help with doing
whatever you need.

Ata and Jessica, go ahead with your own suggestions about fonts, design,
style, and the like. From 2 to 3 pm I have a break and I will try to read
the full document (last version with all the issues pointed out by Jessica)
if it is available.

I am still thinking about how we can add heading in the columns of the
strategies-indicators tables. If you try to read that section, you can
identify what each column is about in the first page, but after the first
page, it is hard to follow what we are suggesting. I was thinking in trying
the same tables in excel, but it will take too much time. If we find a
solution with Word, it could be better....What do you think?

ff

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From: "Kawin Sawangarom" <ksawa...@uci.edu>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 13:29:12 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 4:29 pm
Subject: Meeting Tonight
Hi guys,

We will meet with the other group tonight, most possibly at 6.30. I'll
confirm you the exact time later. If you can't make it at 6.30 (some of
you might be busy with editing the report and I very much appreciate
that), that's fine. At least some of us should be able to attend the
meeting.

For what we're gonna discuss during the meeting, refer the Chris's message
below:

can we meet tonight at 6:30? we need to agree on the exact content of the
presentation (how many opportunity sites to address and in what detail),
set up a time line for completion of the presentation slides, and agree on
who will be in charge of working with the community sus group to format and
design the presentation.

also, the affordable housing group is presenting and i think mike expects us
to attend that.

Best,
Kawin

--
Kawin Sawangarom
Urban and Regional Planning Student'10
Department of Planning, Policy, and Design
University of California, Irvine
Tel: (949) 813-1902

 
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From: Matthew Agustín <ma2...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 14:16:54 -0700
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Subject: Re: DRAFT AND REFERENCES

Hey guys, I finished updating the google doc with my strengths, weaknesses,
goals and strategies/indicators.  I also included another case study
involving the Orange Line Bus Rapid Transit in LA.  See you all at 6:30

2010/6/1 Francisco Fernández <ffernandezdecas...@gmail.com>

--
Matt Agustín
Urban + Regional Planning '10
School of Social Ecology
University of California, Irvine

 
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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 16:16:53 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 7:16 pm
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

...I would like to be there but I have an appointment. I might not be able
to attend the class today (or arrive late), given some issues related to my
research project and the comprehensive exams I have this summer.

Anyhow, we are in touch.

ff

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 17:08:05 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 8:08 pm
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

Hi all,

This is to comfirm that we will have the meeting with the other group at
6.30pm tonight in room 315 as usual. I do hope that some of us will attend
the meeting so that we will have an agreement between the two groups that
we're all happy.

Ata and Jessica, if you need a blank CD with a case, I have ones and you can
see me in the back lab. If you already have ones, please let me know.

The affordable housing team will be presenting at 7pm. I'm not sure what
time we're gonna submit our CD (report) to Mike as he will be in the
presentation. We'll see.

Kawin

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From: Ata Khan <akha...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 17:10:21 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 8:10 pm
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

I am working on the edits right now and will burn to CD. Kawin, or anyone
else attending, if you can refer to our current document when going over
with Kris and Co., they'll get an idea of our content. I won't be attending
the meeting so I can finish this, but I'll make it to the presentation and
then we can talk to Mike after.

-Ata

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 17:43:03 -0700
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Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

oh ya can somebody bring a laptop that can burn CDs? thanks

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 17:44:57 -0700
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Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

I have a laptop that can burn a CD... No worries.

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 19:10:22 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 10:10 pm
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

Hi Ata,

I don't think that this edit made it into the document.  Pasted below is the
information that was missing for my section:

2.2.1.4. Santa Ana

   - To connect people and places to home, shops, schools and offices within
   Santa Ana from the transit center
   - To create streamlined transportation schedules to encourage use of the
   statio
   - Increase walkability to and around transit station
   - To illustrate the vibrancy of Santa Ana as a community thus enticing
   people to utilize the transit center

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 19:39:46 -0700
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Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

Hey Everyone,

So I've edited and formatted the document, newest draft is uploaded as
"SCS_Final_Draft_1.1." There are still some gaps. We're missing a few tables
(that are found in Section 3) and a few "Goals" for individual sites. For
example, I didn't realize I should have created a separate table for my key
findings from Aliso Viejo, so I need to spend some time making that.

I think we all have this information for each of our sites, but might not
have been able to get in the format found in the document. Another kink I'm
working out is the pagination on the Table of Contents, because it's
auto-formatted, and to number the tables/figures (I'm waiting on everything
to be filled in before numbering). Other than that, most everything is good
to go, but if I had to guess, I'd say this is only an 85% complete document.

I'd really like if we had some more time to spend editing and getting a
single tone throughout the document and making sure all our figures are
numbered properly. At any rate, we can show this to Ruane for the time
being.

-Ata

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Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 20:59:27 -0700
Local: Tues, Jun 1 2010 11:59 pm
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight
Hi Ata and Jessica,

If you haven't figured out how to add the header rows to each page of the
tables yet, Ken found out how. First, highlight the header row of the
first page of the table, then click 'Layout' tab and click 'Repeat Header
Rows'. You're gonna do this for every table (one site has one table, but
several pages).

I'll let you know about about presentation contents and responsibilities
soon.

Kawin

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From: Francisco Fernández <ffernandezdecas...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 1 Jun 2010 21:56:16 -0700
Local: Wed, Jun 2 2010 12:56 am
Subject: Re: Meeting Tonight

Hi all,

According to Professor Ruane, the new deadline is this Thursday, 5 pm. So, I
suggest:

1. Please provide Ata and Jessica with the pending information about our
sites, today.
2. Let Ata and Jessica to focus on design. The rest of the group can focus
on content, I mean, once we have the complete document (hopefully tomorrow
morning), we need to read carefully the whole text, trying to identify our
key arguments. So, what we need to do is to make sure that we have a
"discourse" in our work...an original "discourse"...this "discourse" needs
connectors between one section and the following one and some concepts or
principles supporting our discourse. What we really have are just different
pieces of information with certain order, but not an ARGUMENT...not a
"discourse". As you can see, the introduction I suggested anticipates some
thoughts in that direction (to make an argument). We need to take ourselves
out of the team and try to be a "jury". What is the purpose of this
document? What are the key points those guys are trying to communicate?
There is something new in this proposal or is it just the same information I
have read in different websites?, Is this proposal really useful for me or
Orange County?, etc.
3. If we review the document in this way, we could prepare a five-paragraph
Summary (I am suggesting a summary) with the key ideas of our discourse and
we could also improve our conclusions. I think all these things will
facilitate the work of our presenters and enhance the quality of our work.
What do you think?

ff

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