C5-1b CLUES, EXPLANATION, *VERY* BRIEF (IF ANY) COMMENTARY:
(The "Comments" sections, if any, are not my only opinions
on these clues, but this message is long enough already).
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From Greg Lawler (jo...@math.duke.edu)
Repair cracks to racing vehicle (5,3)
repair = anagram indicator
cracks to = anagram of STOCK CAR
racing vehicle = defn
How to make this is a secret procedure (7)
How to make this is = to get IS from THIS one
has to STEAL TH
a secret procedure = defn
Southern getaway including a view of the ocean (8)
southern = S
getaway = ESCAPE
including = containment indicator
a = A
view of the ocean = defn
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Comments:
(See "Winners" article)
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From Kevin Wald (wa...@math.uchicago.edu)
Vehicle reversed, leading to house's destruction (5, 3)
Vehicle = STOCK CAR
house's = COT'S
destruction = RACK (as in "rack and ruin")
"leading to" COTS, RACK = RACKCOTS
reversed, RACKCOTS = STOCK CAR
Destroy hat, lest sneak-thieves use it (7)
sneak-thieves use it = STEALTH
Destroy = anagram indicator
hat, lest (anagrammed) = STEALTH
Painting is, like hat-wearing, a bishop's domain (8)
Painting = SEASCAPE
like = AS
hat = CAP
a bishop's domain = SEE
AS + CAP "wearing" SEE = SE(ASCAP)E
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Comments:
Fairly good clues. In the first, "reversed" sticks out a bit
as an indicator.
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From Murray Smith (smi...@direct.ca)
1) See about music group The Fighting Temeraire (8) (container clue)
Explanation: The Fighting Temeraire is a well-known 1839 seascape by the
English painter Joseph Turner. ASCAP is the acronym for the American
Society of Composers, Authors,and Publishers (ensures songwriters get
paid royalties).
SE (ASCAP) E
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2) STEALTH (fill-in-the-blank clue)
Abbie Hoffman's ____ is Book subterfuge (7)
Explanation: 'Steal This Book' is an underground classic published around
1970. It caused widespread controversy because the youth of that era took
the title as a directive, causing booksellers much grief. The book was a
primer on stealthy activity related to activism. This could be regarded
as a partial &lit with 'subterfuge' as the standard definition element.
'Book' is capitalised to show it's part of a title and also to misdirect
towards the Bible.
STEAL THis Book
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3) STOCK CAR (definitions by example)
Is side-tracked in Chicago, but quickly makes rounds door-to-door (5,3)
Explanation: Chicago is a rail-head with many abattoirs. NASCAR etc.
stock cars race on oval circuits 'door-to-door', as opposed to F1 and
Indy cars etc. which race 'open-wheel' - usually on a twisty track.
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Comments:
I found the second-clue "blank" a little distracting;
incomplete. Liked the "side-tracked..." part of third clue.
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From Don Monson (dmo...@direct.ca)
1) NASCAR-bound in livestock carrier? (8)
NASCAR-bound - the definition. . . sort of. . . I guess
IN - (along with double-duty BOUND) is hidden word
indicator
liveSTOCK CARrier - hidden word holder
(BTW the question-mark seems to me to fit, but if it C.I. (cryptically
incorrect) you may remove it!)
2) Destroy the last bomber (7)
DESTROY - anagram indicator
THE LAST - anagram material
BOMBER - definition
3) A Winslow Homer painting, see, contains composition, organization (8)
A WINSLOW HOMER PAINTING - typically a seascape
SEE - container word
CONTAINS - container indicator
COMPOSITION ORGANIZATION - ASCAP (American Society of Composers,
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Comments:
Very iffy first-clue definition; not-very-hidden hidden word.
Good second clue. Comma between "composition" and
"organization" undesirable.
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From Brian Westley (mer...@dgii.com)
I heard Ms. Channing didn't finish that particular race (5,3)
I heard = homonym indicator
Ms. Channing = Stockard (not Carol)
didn't finish = remove "d"
that particular race = "stock car" defined as a type of race (stock car
race)
Taketh away? (7)
Single punny definition of "steal-th". Marred because
"stealth" *really does* come from "steal-eth". Oh well.
I kind of like it anyway.
Ease around top after starting to scale, say, the white cliffs of Dover
(8)
ease = EASE
around = container indicator
top = CAP (EAScapE)
after = after
starting to scale = S (sEAScapE)
say, the white cliffs of Dover = example of a SEASCAPE
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Comments:
Very amusing first-clue image of Carol C. galvanting about.
Second clue would seem to clue "stealeth" rather than
"stealth". Third clue: would one be easing around the top
after *starting* to scale cliffs?
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From David Bullock k(BUL...@whio.lincoln.ac.nz)
Take delivery of vehicle at race track (8)
Take delivery of = STOCK
vehicle = CAR
at race track = definition
Bomber entered in and expected to steal the show at Farnborough (7)
--------- ^^^^^^^^ =====
defn container STEALTH
indic
(Farnborough Show is a famous air show)
Pea cases shelled and painted, but not a still-life (8)
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anagram anag. defn
indic.
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Comments:
Derivation of "stock car" isn't much different than cryptic
construction. Second: either oversophisticated/underexplained
for me, or there's too many extraneous words.
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From Matthew Merzbacher (mat...@ella.mills.edu)
Railroad type found at Daytona (5,3)
straightforward double-definition
I'd like to beg your indulgence as I submit two clues for "STEALTH".
Please take your preference. I was intrigued by the difficulty of
finding a straight definition for this word that was the right part
of speech (I kept defnining "STEALTHY" by accident).
The last strange secret passage (7)
The last = anagram fodder
strange = anagram indicator
secret passage = defn. (perhaps needing a ?)
Can quietly pass the salt mixture (7)
Can quietly pass = defn.
the salt = anagram fodder
mixture = anagram indicator
View of browser tossing fishing gear into ocean! (8)
Browser = NETSCAPE (hey, we're all computer literate,
right?)
tossing ... into = replacement indicator
fishing gear = NET
ocean = SEA
NETSCAPE with NET->SEA = SEASCAPE
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Comments:
Liked first "second clue". Third-clue indicator doesn't
seem quite proper.
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From Todd McClary (TO...@KUHUB.CC.UKANS.EDU)
Speedway vehicle's damage involving timer noise? (5,3)
Speedway vehicle = definition
damage = SCAR
involving = container indicator
timer noise? = TOCK
Shake the salt with subtlety (7)
Shake = anagram indicator
the salt = fodder
subtlety = definition
Group of artists enters to view painting (8)
Group of artists = ASCAP
enters = container indicator
to view = SEE
painting = SEASCAPE
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Comments:
(See "Winners" article)
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From Phil Rose (p...@wg.icl.co.uk)
13) This motor races out of the showroom? (5,3)
Punny double definition. A STOCK CAR is used in racing, and a
car that is delivered ex-STOCK comes from stock held in the
showroom.
7) Looks at headland within earshot of a view of waves crashing (8)
Looks at headland => SEES CAPE
within earshot - homophone indicator
a view of waves crashing => definition (SEASCAPE)
The two words separately are not exactly homophones but together
the elision makes the S at the end of SEES unvoiced.
11) Quiet invasion destroys latest hospital (7)
Quiet invasion => definition (STEALTH)
destroys - anagram indicator
latest => LATEST => STEALT
Hospital => H (standard UK abbrev. as used on roadsigns)
STEALT+H => STEALTH
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Comments:
First clue --- two definitions aren't all that different. In
second clue, "earshot" and "view" seem mismatched in the surface.
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From Jake Bergmann (jber...@bbn.com)
One drags in this frame, small beds, and mirror (5,3)
One drags in this definition -- "drag" means, take
part in a drag race
frame RACK
small beds COTS
mirror reversal signal
STOC + KCAR -- Full-reversal charade
Insinuation of corruption in latest headline for Hillary (7)
insinuation definition
corruption in anagram signal
latest anagram fodder
headline for Hillary H
STEALT + H -- Charade with anagram
Strike a cleft bust out of water coloring? (8)
strike S (baseball)
a A
cleft container signal (past tense)
bust out ESCAPE
water coloring offbeat definition
S + E(A)SCAPE -- Charade with container
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Comments:
(See "Winners" article)
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From Clay Colwell (er...@bga.com)
Stand beds backward to hold an animal in its tracks? (8)
STAND -- RACK
BEDS -- COTS
BACKWARD -- reversal indicator (STOC-KCAR)
TO HOLD AN ANIMAL IN ITS TRACKS? -- punny defn. (since
a stockcar is a railroad car that carries cattle, it certainly
is "holding an animal in its (railroad) tracks)
Hidden in haste, although sneaking done quietly (7)
HIDDEN IN -- "contained" indicator
HASTE, ALTHOUGH -- container (haSTE, ALTHough)
SNEAKING DONE QUIETLY -- defn.
Sound, to taper off at headland! (8)
SOUND -- homophone indicator
TO TAPER OFF AT -- CEASE
HEADLAND -- CAPE (cryptic sounds like CEASE-CAPE)
This is a weak &lit., since it describes a sample
seascape (a strait [or "sound"] narrowing and disappearing as
a promontory cuts it off). I used "headland" instead
of "promontory" or "peninsula" for deceptive affect,
in case someone tries to play with HEADLAND = L.
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Comments:
In the first clue, "in its tracks" doesn't feel quite right in the
definition. Second clue: very good, particularly the hidden
cryptic. Third clue lacks "view" or "painting" aspect.
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From Dave Fisher (dfi...@interlinx.qc.ca)
Cock-eyed star cast as a tired racer (8)
cock-eyed star = ST(COCK)AR
anagrammed to ST(OCKC)AR
cast = anagram indicator
as = equator
a tired racer = definition (pun)
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'The Last Waltz' bombed in Libya (7)
the last = anagram (STEALTH)
waltz = anagram indicator
bombed in Libya = definition (Stealth bomber's 1st deployment)
(the quotes and caps added to obscure the anagram indicator:
noun in surface reading, verb in wordplay) Acceptable?
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Offshore prospect sounds like a land grab (8)
offshore prospect = definition (tough in a stand alone clue
but not when cross referenced?)
sounds like = homophone indicator
a land grab = SEIZE CAPE = SEASCAPE
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Comments:
First clue: I don't much like the "eyed" part, and the
anagram indicator is a bit far from its fodder. Second:
unless you're referring to a raid other than the one in
April 1986, only F-111, A-6, and A-7 (non-Stealth) planes
were used; Stealth aircraft weren't used in combat until
Panama and the Persian Gulf between 1989 and 1991.
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From John Hakemian (sailo...@delphi.com)
Street machine destroyed rock acts (5,3)
"Street machine" = definition
"destroyed" = anagram indicator
"rock acts" = anagram fodder
ROCKACTS anagrams to STOCK CAR
Hiding oddly, so the tail itches, in a singular manner (7)
"Hiding" = definition
"oddly" = take only the odd letters
"So ThE tAiL iTcHeS (oddly)= STEALTHS
"in a singular manner" means take singular form, or STEALTH
Call about movie union at oceanside site (8)
"Call" = SEE (as in poker)
"about" = container indicator
"movie union" = ASCAP (American Society of Cinematographers and
Photographers)
SE-ASCAP-E = SEASCAPE
"oceanside site" = definition
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Comments:
Second clue: definition seems a bit of a stretch to me;
too bad it couldn't be done without the subtraction part,
which kind of drags the clue out. Third clue: pretty good.
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Brian Spollen
BSpo...@aol.com