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Joe Addona

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Sep 12, 2002, 10:04:07 PM9/12/02
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Hi,

I am an amateur photographer who until now has been mainly interested in
sports. I have had some success with sports (I actually got some work
published), but I am looking to get into landscape/nature/flower
photography.

I have started reading up on this and realize I have a lot to learn. The
comments from people who have done this before is very valuable. To that end
I have posted 4 photos of flowers that I took at a recent trip to our
botanical gardens. Your comments and critique is greatly appreciated,
especially in the area of composition, angle, color, etc.... And please, if
you don't like them - say why. I won't learn anything from comments like
"they S%$#%".

Thanks in advance,
Joe

All pictures were taken with a Nikon D100 and Nikon 80-200mm f2.8 lens @
f2.8

http://www.jmatecharch.com/photo/img_001.htm
http://www.jmatecharch.com/photo/img_002.htm
http://www.jmatecharch.com/photo/img_003.htm
http://www.jmatecharch.com/photo/img_004.htm


Berry

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Sep 13, 2002, 12:03:55 AM9/13/02
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Botanicals is not my area but I might suggest a closer consideration of the
space around your subject ie remove distracting backgound objects so that
the space around your subject is more symetrical and complementary in colour
and/or contrast. Just a notion.
Jack


com

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Sep 13, 2002, 3:26:59 AM9/13/02
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All your pics are neat, clean, vibrant and...they have lots of colors.
Other than that, nothing.
Try first to get b&w pics where you won't be helped by the ahhhs and ohhhs of
colors then, gradually, go back to color.
Anyway, Achile's heel is still the b&w photography where you have to depict
colors through shades of grey.
So far, no art in ant of them; the only art is Mother Nature's creation and
motion freezed by your pics.
Lee

In article <AIbg9.7332$EZ2.2...@wagner.videotron.net>,
caddi...@videotron.ca says...

Rachael Nex

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Sep 13, 2002, 7:29:47 AM9/13/02
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"Berry" <drb...@shaw.ca> wrote in message
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I would agree. Though with plants you can't always do this (they tend to
grow where they want to, not where you want them to). Obviously looking for
better blooms composition-wise is the best idea - but sometimes this clashes
with the quality of blooms - i.e. a good one in a good composition space
might not be a good flower - it could be slightly damaged or dying or
whatever.

Some subtle touch-ups in post processing can sort this out - the clone tool
in your phot editing program (for getting rid of unwanted background
clutter - though obviously this doesn't always work - in the case of
composition errors or prettying up blooms in the case of petal damage) is
your friend ! I went to a botanical garden this weekend and have a few shots
that need abit of tweaking in this area. I find the more I do this sort of
editing the better I get at it - so give it a whirl (if you haven't already,
this is) and see how you get on. It can sometimes turn a good shot into a
great shot. Getting rid of the background clutter in your shots would
certainly improve them no end, IMHO.


Rachael


Rachael Nex

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Sep 13, 2002, 7:35:56 AM9/13/02
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<l...@attbi.dot. com (Lee)> wrote in message
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> All your pics are neat, clean, vibrant and...they have lots of colors.
> Other than that, nothing.
> Try first to get b&w pics where you won't be helped by the ahhhs and ohhhs
of
> colors then, gradually, go back to color.
> Anyway, Achile's heel is still the b&w photography where you have to
depict
> colors through shades of grey.
> So far, no art in ant of them; the only art is Mother Nature's creation
and
> motion freezed by your pics.

Always an interesting point, is "art", in photography of static things. What
is art ? How do we define it ? What makes a picture have "art" over one that
isn't ?

I often wonder if I'm getting any "art" in my shots. Is it the same thing as
"having the eye" ? Some people say I "have the eye" but I'm not sure. How
would I know ? I think I know something with "art" when I see it, but I
don't exactly know how to define it.


What do you guys think - what do you define as "art" in photography ? Could
you look at two pictures side by side and say "That one has art, the other
doesn't" and then say why ?

Discuss !


Rachael


Marvin Margoshes

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Sep 13, 2002, 10:28:00 AM9/13/02
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Well done in all respects. I would not have thought to use back- or
side-lighting because it leaves shadows in the front, but the shadows in
your pix add to the composition. I've learned something about photographing
flowers.

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Marvin Margoshes

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Sep 13, 2002, 10:28:00 AM9/13/02
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Well done in all respects. I would not have thought to use back- or
side-lighting because it leaves shadows in the front, but the shadows in
your pix add to the composition. I've learned something about photographing
flowers.

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Gordon Gekko

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Sep 13, 2002, 10:37:30 PM9/13/02
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"Rachael Nex" <often...@theendofthebar.com> wrote in message news:<r4kg9.4892$7x3.2...@newsfep2-win.server.ntli.net>...

> Always an interesting point, is "art", in photography of static things. What
> is art ? How do we define it ? What makes a picture have "art" over one that
> isn't ?
>
> I often wonder if I'm getting any "art" in my shots. Is it the same thing as
> "having the eye" ? Some people say I "have the eye" but I'm not sure. How
> would I know ? I think I know something with "art" when I see it, but I
> don't exactly know how to define it.

Art is anything that's displayed in an art museum or an art gallery.

If you can imagine your picture being in a display in an art gallery,
then it's art. Hint: a picture of your kid playing soccer ain't art.

Frank S

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Sep 13, 2002, 10:45:51 PM9/13/02
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Neither is a picture of Sunday In The Park By George, unless . . .
--


Frank S


Tom Pfeiffer

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Sep 13, 2002, 11:48:05 PM9/13/02
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I liked your choice of subjects and the pleasing colors, but I thought your
composition was exactly the same in every shot, same perspective, same
relative subject size and position. You show a good understanding of the use
of sidelighting, now try for some alternate framing techniques.

Tom P.

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Ron Hunter

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Sep 14, 2002, 12:10:03 AM9/14/02
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Gordon Gekko wrote:> "Rachael Nex" <often...@theendofthebar.com> wrote in

It COULD be, if it communicates something beyond the representation of the
specific object. Much of what is art is in the eye of the beholder.

--
Ron Hunter rphu...@charter.net

Rob Davison

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Sep 15, 2002, 8:20:19 PM9/15/02
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In message <r4kg9.4892$7x3.2...@newsfep2-win.server.ntli.net>
"Rachael Nex" <often...@theendofthebar.com> wrote:
[...]

> Always an interesting point, is "art", in photography of static things. What
> is art ? How do we define it ? What makes a picture have "art" over one that
> isn't ?

I'd say that any picture that evokes reflection and/or emotion in the
person looking at it is art.

> I often wonder if I'm getting any "art" in my shots. Is it the same thing as
> "having the eye" ? Some people say I "have the eye" but I'm not sure. How
> would I know ?

If enough people tell you that you "have the eye" then I'd say it was a
fair bet that you do.

> I think I know something with "art" when I see it, but I
> don't exactly know how to define it.

Art is that which disappears when you try to define it. ;-p

> What do you guys think - what do you define as "art" in photography ? Could
> you look at two pictures side by side and say "That one has art, the other
> doesn't" and then say why ?

I think a picture can be interesting to look at and have a documentary
value without managing to be "art". The photos I like most have both
documentary and artistic value (to me).

Unfortunately if I ever manage to capture one of those it'll probably be
down to luck and practice rather than any natural ability.

> Discuss !

...and of course art is subjective, what is one mans (or womans) chalk
is another persons cheese...


Rob.
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Rachael Nex

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Sep 16, 2002, 9:24:47 AM9/16/02
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"Ron Hunter" <rphu...@charter.net> wrote in message
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> Gordon Gekko wrote:>

I didn't get Gordon's post so I'll quote it through this one.


"Rachael Nex" <often...@theendofthebar.com> wrote in
> message news:<r4kg9.4892$7x3.2...@newsfep2-win.server.ntli.net>...
> >
> >
> >>Always an interesting point, is "art", in photography of static things.
What
> >>is art ? How do we define it ? What makes a picture have "art" over one
that
> >>isn't ?
> >>
> >>I often wonder if I'm getting any "art" in my shots. Is it the same
thing as
> >>"having the eye" ? Some people say I "have the eye" but I'm not sure.
How
> >>would I know ? I think I know something with "art" when I see it, but I
> >>don't exactly know how to define it.
> >
> >
> > Art is anything that's displayed in an art museum or an art gallery.

Eeeum - that wasn't exactly what I meant. I meant what is art *in*
photography - the orignal poster who prompted my comments said there was "no
art in" the pictures under discussion. He didn't say "they are not art." You
see the difference ?


> >
> > If you can imagine your picture being in a display in an art gallery,
> > then it's art. Hint: a picture of your kid playing soccer ain't art.

<chuckle> I don't have any kids. Now, a pic of my dog playing football is
another matter entirely....


>
> It COULD be, if it communicates something beyond the representation of the
> specific object. Much of what is art is in the eye of the beholder.
>

That's what I was trying to ascertain, yeah, but what gives "art" in an
image rather than what *is* art (I think there is a difference as explained
above) - what was an individual's idea of art in photography. What makes one
shot have art yet not another ?

Rachael

Rachael Nex

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Sep 16, 2002, 9:26:59 AM9/16/02
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"Rob Davison" <rdav...@xtra.co.nz> wrote in message
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> In message <r4kg9.4892$7x3.2...@newsfep2-win.server.ntli.net>
> "Rachael Nex" <often...@theendofthebar.com> wrote:
> [...]
>
> > Always an interesting point, is "art", in photography of static things.
What
> > is art ? How do we define it ? What makes a picture have "art" over one
that
> > isn't ?
>
> I'd say that any picture that evokes reflection and/or emotion in the
> person looking at it is art.
>
> > I often wonder if I'm getting any "art" in my shots. Is it the same
thing as
> > "having the eye" ? Some people say I "have the eye" but I'm not sure.
How
> > would I know ?
>
> If enough people tell you that you "have the eye" then I'd say it was a
> fair bet that you do.
>
> > I think I know something with "art" when I see it, but I
> > don't exactly know how to define it.
>
> Art is that which disappears when you try to define it. ;-p
>

That much I agree with for sure.

> > What do you guys think - what do you define as "art" in photography ?
Could
> > you look at two pictures side by side and say "That one has art, the
other
> > doesn't" and then say why ?
>
> I think a picture can be interesting to look at and have a documentary
> value without managing to be "art". The photos I like most have both
> documentary and artistic value (to me).
>
> Unfortunately if I ever manage to capture one of those it'll probably be
> down to luck and practice rather than any natural ability.

Oh, I dunno - the infamous emu face shot fits both those requirements as far
as I'm concerned.

>
> > Discuss !
>
> ...and of course art is subjective, what is one mans (or womans) chalk
> is another persons cheese...
>

Indeed. I suppose if we could exactly define it absolutely the world would
be a pretty boring place.


Rachael


bi...@pippinf.com

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Sep 16, 2002, 5:00:52 PM9/16/02
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The eye of the beholder.

Art is extremely subjective. If you see art in a photograph, then
there's art in the photo.
If you don't see art there, that doesn't mean it's not there, just
that you don't see it.
Contradictory in a sense, but not in another, simply because art
itself is so subjective. Each person sees it differently.

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