On 4/15/2013 11:20 PM, Sean Cleary wrote:
> Would anyone be interested in setting this to music?
Well, it's simple ballad scansion; I could immediately fit it to several
tunes, major and minor, that aren't original but that I can't remember
the source of. (And to several annoying things which I'm not going to
mention for fear of earworming people.)
Coming up with an _interesting_ tune is another matter.
Length... It might indeed benefit from editing. How to edit depends on
what aspects of the story you consider most important. It isn't quite
grabbing me enough for me to start making those decisions.
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Joe Kesselman,
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