Hey gimme - and thanks ...
gimme_this_gimme_t
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> Horace writes :
>>Thanks y'all!! -- Any critique will be greatly appreciated.
> First the good news ..
> You took on an impressive piece. Simply memorizing the piece is a fair
> amount of work.
> There's no doubting that you're a pretty sharp guy.
> Except for the deep breath you took before playing, for the most part
> you seem relaxed.
> You're pleasant to watch.
> The music you selected is very beautiful. I've never heard it before.
> It's wonderful and
> I'm not suprised it's stayed with you over the years.
this is, of course, only about half of the piece - maybe a tad more
but it's a nice one and I do remember enjoying it - yes -- when played
to speed it is a good one for that little zing in a performance (though
my "performance" life now is none at all, of course HA HA HA HA HA -
well except for you folks who are kind enough to review things!! These
days it's all about the act of playing - not readying a performance for
others I guess.
> I'm also very impressed that you're posting these songs on the internet
> for us and the
> world to view. That is very cool.
mercenary actually :-)) my only source of peer/elder review these days
(but thanks again)
> Um, I can't tell for certain on the quicktime movie but it looks like
> you lightly anchor
> your pinky on the first string. Personally I think that is a good idea.
> I like it.
I may drop it occasionally - but it's not anchored -- I think all those
years of playing other styles before classical at school has permanently
stiffened my RH pinky - yes :-)) my teacher used to chide me to make it
move with (a) but I never was able to do so (he finally gave up trying
to get me to curl it under :-))
> You also play the piece at a brisk pace - that helps keep it
> interesting.
certainly not to speed yet but I tried to get a little pace for the vid
- yes
> Now for the take it or leave it bad news ...
I really need to find a score or re-write the one I have so I can scan
it in or something - that would surely make this easier but ...
> On the very begining B minor I'd recommend some vibrato on the 6th
> string. And I'd
> recommend doing something with it - playing it round like a hoom sound
> to it.
I'm sorry to say I'm not really sure of the mechanics to accomplish
this?? the opening are all full barres, but I could probably hinge any
or all of them I guess. But still, how does one get vibrato when the
index finger is holding a barre?
> (Actually there are other spots where some vibrato would really help,
> e.g. the
> hold half way through the piece and the end.)
Yeah - this really does need to be worked up and I had just changed
several fingerings before making the vid. <grin type="sheepish"/>
I slow at the end of the first section only because I was fighting that
fingering - terribly un-natural the way I have it now and, other than
maybe a whole hand vibrato of some kind, I'm not sure I could pull out
any individual things there --- maybe refingering will help in that spot
in particular.
but yes - there really are several other places where a little vib would
be a nice touch and I'll put some in here and there when I set about
really pushing it into my hands (for now, I'm embarrassed to admit that
I am pushing my limit just to get through it and remember the fingering
changes made :-((
> Also, I'd recommend playing the treble strings on the left side of your
> nail and using
> a slight twist motion. I'd strive for a magic sort of soft sound.
> Something that highlights
> the quality of your guitar.
that's the almansa/enriquez - not that great a guitar (but not terrible
for practice, I guess). I actually kept (tried to keep) the trebles a
bit sharper rather than rounder. I'll take a listen using rounder and
see how it does. SOME of this may also be the weakness (in every sense
of the word :-)) of my RH - still not fully powered from base knuckles
so some there's "grabbing" goin' on there for sure.
> Another thing, I think the quality of the sound in those upper
> registers
> would be improved if you polished your nails with extra extra fine
> paper. I think
> I hear a subtle scratch when you hit the strings.
ahh - well - actually, my nails are glass(meaning "smooth as") - and I
do finish with old warn emery paper folded into a thick flat roll (of
sorts) --- BUT I had been playing for a little bit prior to the vid so I
could have some play-ware when I did the vid - yes. And I had probably
wrestled with the dog a couple of times so could have some tiny nicks etc.
> I'd also strive to make the bass lines separate from the melody.
> Actually you are playing it fairly well and you probably are thinking
> that you're pretty
> close and that you're doing that already.
yeah, it really needs to be worked up in general - and more separation
is needed for sure. But I'm not unhappy with it for the little time put
in so far (pretty good for these old and out of shape hands -- think I
need some time practicing that "finger yoga" :-))) (I like this group!!
HA HA HA)
And yes, this piece probably just makes it easier to accomplish the
(some) separation (almost by default) than do many, more technically
challenging, pieces.
> So if I could give you one piece of advice here, something to practice,
> it would
> be to try to keep the treble strings pressed until after hitting the
> 6th string. And listen
> closely as you play and make certain the bass line has not subtle
> breaks.
neat - yes - I'll try being more conscious of that and give it a try!
> There is one spot in particular - as the song goes down the guitar neck
> where you
> play an open B and the sustain in the bass is totally dies. I'd
> recommend playing
> that B on the 4th fret and keeping that F# pressed.
if I know where you are referring to, some of that may just be RH
failure and all but missing the notes as well :-))) and yes - the
sustain on this guitar is not what it is on the other (but this one is
cedar and less frantically bright than the other - though it also lacks
the volume of the spruce, I find it easier to get volume dynamics on
this one as well)
> Regarding the big picture, and phrasing. Well, you play the song
> without any major
> gaphs so, some a good amound of phrasing comes just from the music
> itself.
yes - I have found that (in my case and perhaps for others) a poor
fingering can lead me to poor phrasing of the resulting (dare I call it)
music. The piece itself does seem to almost
> As it is, you haven't added much phrasing of your own.
> For one thing, the entire song is played above the sound hole. I'd
> recommend
> playing ponticello after that hold just about half way through the
> song.
yes - think so
> Also, about 12 measures after picking up after the hold there
> is a spot where the quality of the sound on the 3rd string
> has sort a a guitar/twang to it. I'd recommend playing that ponticello.
> Make the quality of the sond on that 3rd string *really* stand out.
> Finally, about 3 quarters of they way through the piece there's a spot
> where
> you play an open A, then later an open E. I would recommend dampening
> them with your thumb. It will sound better that way. I think of your
> playing
> Prelude 1 for lute where you let the open E ring as you work your way
> down
> the guitar neck. It's a similar sort of deal. If you can dampen those
> notes
> and turn them into half notes as written it sounds more forceful and
> the
> melody on the upper register comes out better.
yes - I'll try that
> It's interesting how the light starts out bright then darkens. And
> there is
> considerable white noice in the audio. Not a big deal but I mention it
> so
> you know I'm paying attention.
yeah - we had a partly cloudy day and one came overhead part way through
the vid -- I lightened the other formats but I can never seem to export
an avi that quicktime will accept as input for making the .mov format
files --- some day I'll figure that out but, for now, the .mov files are
often raw.
> Right at the end you seem somewhat satisfied with your playing but you
> make a bit of a "that's the best I can do" sort of facial expression.
> It's better
> to show off. Try a "I'm showing off" attitude and when you play
> alude to your enjoyment and happiness. More than what you do now.
> And put on a face of confidence. Even if there is a bit of acting
> involved.
HA HA HA - thanks gimme - that probably WAS a look of self satisfaction
at making it through (with only one really bad SPLAT) with the changed
fingerings and with a bit more speed than I had been playing. I think
I'll need to hold off on the "I'm showing off" till I can play at least
well enough that I can FEEL like I'm showing off a bit HA HA HA HA -
that is probably a rather LONG time away yet HA HA HA HA
--
Horace ...once known as "Kicker" :-)
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