What is "Original" in reference to artwork on a kite?
If one was to reproduce the Mona Lisa except with her mouth open, would this
be original?
Look at the home page at www.kitebuilder.com. Olivier Reymond admits his
art work was a design from a poster... but he placed it off center, cropped
it, and used ripstop colors on a Genki.... Original?
What about Geometric Patterns?
How about Doug Larock's 29 foot delta.... Did you ever see that geometric
pattern to that extreme in those colors? Original?
How bout that picture on the left.... If I reproduced that on a Genki, and
devised a way to make that Eddy kite "hang off the top" would I get points
for originality?
How about a landscape reproduction from a photograph...... original?
How bout a very large, impressing Rokkaku - solid black... as a giant black
whole in the sky? Original?
If the kite is indeed original, should it automatically receive more points
than a very well done reproduction of Mickey Mouse? Even if the judge does
not particularly like the original artwork?
Is this something that can BE scored in a competition? Or is it purely a
subjective opinion as to what turns a person on?
How bout Originality versus Creativity? Maybe we should more towards
creativity?
...... there are many, many more questions, but those are a start. Lets
hear your thoughts...
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How 'bout we look at it his way........
Original?
Does involve colors?
Haven't all colors already been used by someone else?
Doesn't that eliminate all "originality" and limit judging to "creativity"?
Just my opinion.
See you in the sky,
Dan
Steve Ferrel <st...@kitebuilder.com> wrote in message
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In my view there is little "original" art. Even the Mona Lisa was not very
original - a beguiling portrait of a woman - done differently than the
thousands of other painters of similar women. In judging kite art I think we
would do better to look for creativity and innovation and these are not
easily measured. On the other hand "original" can simply mean first, not a
copy of a previous work, a new creation. I hope we can keep the lid on this
potential can of worms. Just my$.02
Ray
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Well,
I have several things to say on this topic and I do not think it is a can of
worms. I do think the topic needs discussion but not argument.
You could disect the question into simple words such as "original" and"artwork"
and what do they mean? I think that might be too anal for this discussion.
Artwork to me is the expression of a persons feelings brought to the attention
of other people. It can be a photograph, a painting, a garden, or a sand
sculpture. It can be a campbells soup can brought to us(the audience), like no
other has expressed it before. Art is the picture of a persons soul.
A copy is exactly that, a rendering of an orginal expression, whether it is
wood burned into a box, or the colors of the original are changed or the
orignal idea is moved to one side a little bit.
"Copies" are not necessarily bad or unworthy, they are just in a different
category than Art. In order to judge a piece of art, one must be knowledgable
about the subject. I have just been studying the Art Deco period to discover
the Wm Bradley, Alphonse Muchas, and
Aubrey beardsley's styles had much in common with lesser known artists of the
same period of time. And artists and designers in this period were "inspired"
by the new Oriental "influence." I have put several words here in Quotations
because they have a relationship to the word "copy".
I have seen kitemakers use obscure artwork, artwork that the public is unaware
of, claim as their own. I think that is wrong to do. I think the original
inspiration should be given credit. The "craftperson" ( the one who used the
original idea) should be given credit for rerendering the original idea on the
medium of kites.
I do feel seeing a Degas, Matisse, Mucha or a Don Morris a couple hundred feet
in the sky is a totally different experience than seeing it on a wall or a
TShirt.
There are a few other distintions that should be considered during this
discussion but it might take took much room to do that. I think each should be
broken down to their simplest forms to solve the problem though.
I just got carried away on this topic.
Sorry,
Kathy Goodwind
rec.kites
You make some good points. I like your definition of art as the expression
of a person's feeling brought to the attention of other people. My feeling
about kite art is that it should do just that - express one's feeling about
the joy of one's soul soaring aloft with the kite - and do so with 100 feet
of line out. A kite should be more than just an easel in the sky.
Ray
> ...... there are many, many more questions, but those are a start. Lets
> hear your thoughts...
Since you have asked a questions with no *real* answers, I will reply by
asking another one:
If a person was born and raised in a cave, with no contact with other
humans, and drew figures and drawings in the sand or on rocks with graphite,
would he create original ideas?
Yikes. People seem to think that qestioning things that are unquestionable
will answer *something*.
Almost as bizzare as someone asking the question, "does God exist?"
My *answer* might be, "why do you ask?"
Whoa. Heavy :-)
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> If a person was born and raised in a cave, with no contact with other
> humans, and drew figures and drawings in the sand or on rocks with
graphite,
> would he create original ideas?
I think you just opened the lid on that can of worms.
He also wrote
> Yikes. People seem to think that qestioning things that are
unquestionable
> will answer *something*.
Sure, they will. I think it was Fulgum (Everything I had to know I learned
in Kindergarten) who said in any discussion group there are two kinds of
people - first there are those who have something to say, then there are
those who have to say something. I'm afraid I just put myself in that last
category.
Ray
i think multiple categories for images would be the only solution at a
large festival with many entries, possible titled things like 'best
use of a cultural icon', ' best abstract (or non-representational)
image', 'best original artwork', and then perhaps a 'best of all
categories', for good measure.
rev. brett r. schutzman
director of operations
maproom systems
"Steve Ferrel" <st...@kitebuilder.com> wrote in message news:<ti1t7pd...@corp.supernews.com>...
I very much agree with you in that the true
kitebuilder/architect/artist/writer/dancer/chef/etc... exposes his soul in
the work he presents to the public. I differ from you however in your
belief that is contrary to your teacher. I am a firm believer that copying
another's work leads to lessons learned. It is indeed the way we learn.
As a crawling child copies the two legs before him, he learns to walk. As
he watches those steps move to music, he learns to dance...
I remember attending a Paul Cézanne exhibit a few years ago and prior to
visiting the museum, I researched the artist. It was then I learned Cézanne
frequented French galleries to copy other artist's work. I believe he said:
"Attempting a faithful copy of another artist's work allows you to
appreciate at a deeper level the 'problem' that preoccupied the mind of the
artist in that particular work." As an architect, can you truly appreciate
portions of Wright's work before you understand the problems involved when
designing a cantilever? As one develops, no matter what the occupation,
another's work can be the bridge to your own ideas and advancements.
Swimmers beware: crossing those dangerous rapids without a bridge can kill
you! ;) The problem arises when the designer of the bridge is not
acknowledged and it is even worse when the student limits himself to selling
that bridge under his own name... rather than becoming motivated to build a
different or better bridge.
People often come to me asking "How do I build a kite?" and I always
recommend a book, a plan, or a website, but I also stress that the
instructions they read are only guidelines. I always encourage
experimentation.... Just as I use a recipe in a cookbook as a guide, often
the dinner tastes better with two cloves of garlic rather than the direction
of one. And sometimes the meal tastes great even when I skip an ingredient -
nobody notices. There are so many ways of doing things, and it is cool
when the builder can add his own "personal spice." - THAT is what i like to
reward in a kitebuilding competition.
The premise to my original post was the current debate going on inside my
own head.... whether or not to reward "originality" when judging a kite -
what it is, and how to do it. Currently, the rulebook states that we
consider originality as one of many questions we ask ourselves when scoring
a kite for Visual Appeal and Stuctural Design -- and I think this is a good
thing. Maybe that is the way it should remain. However, there are some
kite builders that have expressed thoughts that originality should be taken
further and rewarded higher. But I find this a difficult thing to realize,
to define, and to "score". I thought I'd look to rec.kites for input.... to
get me over this personal hurdle.
I am with you in your view that we should look at the kite further - in
respect to craftsmanship. Actually that is what we currently do. The
kitemaking competition is comprehensive in that we judge the kite by the
following criteria: Visual Appeal, Flight, Craftsmanship, and Design. An
even 25% of the score goes to each of those criteria. The current debate
inside me now is how I view originality...... whatever that is.
so... I think I went off on a few tangents and maybe I should go to the
'next' post. I definitely opened a can here and I wonder if I should
continue to look inside!? But as i learned in college, once you open the
beer, you gotta drink it...lol
Remember.... it's "just kites".... the number one priority is to have fun.
These words are just food for thought and discussion.... take it easy
guys......
~Steve
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"Todd G. Christopher" <tchrist...@earthlink.net> wrote in message
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> --
>As a member of the AKA's Comprehensive Kitemaking Committee, I'd like to
>hear discussion on originality. I have my own personal beliefs but I'd like
>to hear what you think.
I suspect this question stems from a desire to define judging criteria,
but there's something more subtle going on too.
One of the more insidious requirements for a judging criterion is that
it should be a metric - it must be possible to rank a given entry as
being somehow 'greater than' or 'less than' other entrys, according to
that criterion.
The problem here is that this is attempting to conflate judgement with
*measurement*. Thus when we consider the question 'is X more original
than Y' then the question is doubly difficult, because we lack an
adequate definition not only of 'original', but also of 'more'.
Why has the idea of measurement been invoked ? Almost certainly in an
attempt to inject a little pseudo - objectivity into the process, since
objectivity is frequently confused with 'fairness', and competitive
people get very upset if their game isn't 'fair'.
'Pseudo' because true objectivity is the domain of statistical sampling
and calibrated physical measurement, neither of which feature highly in
the minds of those viewing a ( purported ) work of art ( although I've
heard tell that some particularly sad people will try to measure stitch
lengths with a digital micrometer ).
The only honest way out of this dead end is to openly abandon the
pursuit of any veneer of objectivity, and to simply award prizes to
those kites which, in the opinion of the judges, are beautiful.
Note carefully that the question 'is it beautiful ? ' is a vastly
different thing to the question 'is it more beautiful than... ?'.
This makes the judgement clearly as totally subjective as it is possible
to be, and may encourage a little more Aoxo :).
MdeR.
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>Note carefully that the question 'is it beautiful ? ' is a vastly
>different thing to the question 'is it more beautiful than... ?'.
>
>This makes the judgement clearly as totally subjective as it is possible
>to be, and may encourage a little more Aoxo :).
Brilliant!! Here, Here! and Amen!
Kathy Goodwind
rec.kites
>I am beginning to subscribe to the thought that we should let the public
decide
>which one kite they like the best. That then is the winner and the
>competition is done in one day. Life is truly so short it should be spent
>flying kites and not judging the minutia. I like, Leland, think we made a
>mistake trying to capture guidelines much less rules, too much time
stressing
>and less time being happy.
The problem is, many people enjoy competing. The AKA Kitemaking Competitions
draw more individuals then almost any other field event at our annual
convention, and the basic rules that Lee and Kathy compiled are still used.
Sure, judging beauty is subjective. However, the rules call for an evaluation
of four different criteria -- craftsmanship, design, flight, and visual
appeal.
No where is the *quality* of "art" mentioned in the lengthy description of
these four criteria. Instead, one question asked is about "original art" as
opposed to a copy of something else. The scoring system is an attempt to make
something inherently subjective as objective as possible -- for those who wish
to participate.
Kathy now says that we should simply let the public decide. AKA does
that too. We have our People's Choice events in addition to the more
rigorous Kitemaking Competition. It's our best effort to have it both
ways and please everyone.
Have fun!
dg
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>he only honest way out of this dead end is to openly abandon the
>pursuit of any veneer of objectivity, and to simply award prizes to
>those kites which, in the opinion of the judges, are beautiful.
>Note carefully that the question 'is it beautiful ? ' is a vastly
>different thing to the question 'is it more beautiful than... ?'.
>
This is all very well, and is a swell way to attend a museum, or even to go
through life. Perhaps I'm missing something, but I don't see how it helps
judges.
The concept of measurement is inherent in judging a competition. Giving one
person first prize, and another person second prize (if we were judging on
beauty alone) means (if it means anything) that the judges have determined the
first prize winner's kite as MORE beautiful than the second-prize winner. Even
if you evade this problem by abandoning the ranking of prizes, you still end up
giving prizes to some people and not others, surely suggesting that the ones
with prizes have made kites MORE beautiful than the ones without prizes. The
only way to eliminate the more/less scale is to go to a blunt beautiful/ugly
decision, which is not only absurd but, presumably, unacceptable..
To me, the whole enterprise of kite criticism, or flight criticism, or art
criticism, is only annoying, because I don't compete. But, as David Gomberg
said, many people seem to like these competitions, and I've enjoyed attending
them, just to see the beautiful kites.
If, somehow, standards of judging were nailed down, then I hope kitebuilders
wouldn't simply build kites that would win prizes. I hope they'd continue to
build kites they thought beautiful.
I do think the "is it beautiful" question best answers the "is it original"
question. Even determining WHETHER it's original is beyond the capacity of
likely judges. And to introduce originality as a necessary component of a
craft that has a rich tradition is like looking for the best original folk
song. If it's original, you can't disallow it (since you can't even know it)
but I wouldn't give it "extra points".
Dave
>In article <b8lait4r98ll45fai...@4ax.com>, Mark de Roussier
><ma...@murder.demon.co.uk> writes:
>
>>he only honest way out of this dead end is to openly abandon the
>>pursuit of any veneer of objectivity, and to simply award prizes to
>>those kites which, in the opinion of the judges, are beautiful.
>>Note carefully that the question 'is it beautiful ? ' is a vastly
>>different thing to the question 'is it more beautiful than... ?'.
>>
>
>This is all very well, and is a swell way to attend a museum, or even to go
>through life. Perhaps I'm missing something...
Perhaps...
>, but I don't see how it helps judges.
I was attempting to explain why I think that 'judging' art by redefining
it in terms of measurable properties ( simply in order to allow it to be
ranked ) is an exercise in futility.
There currently is a very good set of definitions. The original kitemaking
competitions committee did a commendable job creating the guidelines that
provide a standardized format for competitions. "Originality" is written
into those guidelines/criteria as just one of many things to consider when
assigning the score. However, over the years we have seen what has been
claimed to be "original artwork" and some of those who have created such
pieces have requested additional recognition. On a personal level, in my
mind, I feel in some way those efforts should be rewarded. But it has always
been difficult for me to define - hence the original post. Maybe this
additional recognition should remain as the vote from the membership (thank
you Kathy, I sure wish I could have met Lee) as the People's Choice award...
where no "metric measurement" is needed.
As David said, people enjoy the kitebuilding competitions. I have to stress
that all this talk of rules and procedures and guidelines should not scare
people away. The competition field is not a stressful place. We have
fun........ People seem to enjoy the camaraderie as they ascend their kite
along with other kitebuilders that they have read about or heard about
throughout the year... They enjoy the competition among piers. And they
enjoy looking at the kites that win, seeing how and why they won, and
learning different techniques to improve their skills and or make their
hobby of kitebuilding easier. I don't think "competition" negates happiness.
I cant wait to see all the "beautiful" kites that pack the banquet hall this
year!
~Steve
"Mark de Roussier" <ma...@murder.demon.co.uk> wrote in message
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your thoughts on "original" artwork?
If I re-read this again I notice that the question is about ARTWORK.
You bring up some very valid questions. I think first we need to
decide whether we are holding "art exhibits" or "kite building
competitions. IM (very) HO, if we are holding kite building
competitions we should be judging kites not artwork. This is not to
say that many kites aren't works of art (they are) and is many cases
kites are an art form themselves.
Kites are by definition a "tethered, heavier than air, aircraft." We
can objectively discern if and how well a kite meets this description
by seeing it fly, or not. We can judge how well it is built by looking
at the final product, are straight lines straight? Is glue oozed where
it shouldn't be? On this traditional kite the basswood spars are
nicely sanded, on that one, they appear to have just left the table
saw and leave you with splinters. These kinds of things we can judge.
Now lets look at "artwork." Not everyone is born an artist, not
everyone is able to develop the talents to be one. Heck, I know the
definition of a kite and I know what I like, but I wouldn't want to
have to define art. Even if I would, or could, the person (see, even
that is politically correct) sitting next to me is going to have a
different idea what art is, so we start off with a problem. I can look
at a kite or two and tell you which is more pleasing to my eye but my
daughter might well disagree. (she does when it comes to music but
that's another "art form") In judging "artwork" we eventually put
ourselves into the position of deciding whether this Monet or that
Piccaso is the greater artist and ultimately it all boils down to
who's doing the looking.
Personally the old saw that says "Kite Competition is an Oxymoron"
rings very true. Further the comprehensive competition sometime seems
to bring out the ugly in some otherwise nice people (mines better than
yours is) On the other hand it is often the driving force behind the
creation of some gorgeous kites. If we are going to do this lets try
to keep in a "measurable format' and again, in my very humble
opinion, trying to "measure" the value of original artwork when
judging kites is like comparing apples to oranges.
Terry "Gizmo" Gerweck
There have been some great responses in this thread that I would have liked the
opportunity to add my opinions for what they are worth. Just when a juicy
response is being posted from me, I get kicked off this damn AOHELL. I know, I
know I need to change.
I think this is a great topic for exchange.
Terry's last comment probably hits the nail on the head. My next post was
going to suggest that Artwork should be in a totally different category.
Thereby judged on the merits of its origianal artwork and not involve
craftsmanship at all. Speaking of Aimee Barsello types of presentations at
festivals here.
Although I am a proponent of providing competitions for those who like to
compete, the AKA several years ago in Jacksonville Florida tried to limit
competitions to one day events. The other consideration is trying to find the
time at a banquet to allow all the awards to be handed out. In Hawaii it was a
problem since the facility was only available for a specific amount of time.
Lastly, the number of awards becomes very expensive to finance. I am sure that
is the least of the problems but there is only so much time that one convention
can spend on competitions and awards. I have long since given up on trying to
judge, trying to give seminars, trying to accept awards, I just like to come
and see. Again, Terry is correct. It seems as though we would have to hire
some pretty qualified judges to determine the the validity of Kite Artwork
orginality. I have seen some pretty artistic work that wouldn't have passed
the stitch length, spot of glue, hem width test but I certainly would given the
kite a whole lotta points for originality.
Just want to say there has been a whole lotta good input on the topic and the
discussion has been fun. Not too serious just serious enough.
Thanks,
Kathy Goodwind
rec.kites
The judging panel should be kite builders and fliers who know what actually
goes into making kites. On the panel there should be a spread of knowledge
(which nedn't all be resting in the same individual person's head!) about
techniques (applique, etc); types of kite (soft/traditional/foil etc, etc);
kite history (so that they can see something that's actually new, rather
than a straightforward copy of someone else's work); a good knowledge of
what's been happening at other competitions around the world (so that we
don't get a single (albeit superb) kite that simply gets hawked around all
the competitions for a couple of years, stifling competition); main-stream
art (so that they have some idea of reference, and the place of this work of
art in the world), and lastly, I think that they need a hide like an
elephant, since they'll never get the judging right for all people.
I guess that these are probably the exact sort of criteria that are used
when selecting judges. It's certainly not the right thing to get Lady
Cynthia Hogbottom-Smart to come out and make a judgement.
Oh, the originality thing. I think that we probably worry too much about
this. It's enough (surely?!) that when we look at the kite that wins, we
gasp and say that it's beautiful, clever, well made and 'says something' to
us. Think of the pleasure that you get when you see a good idea, well
implemented and that's the sort of thing that the judges should be thinking
when they decide. At Bristol last September there was a circoflex flying
that had a second kite, a bird, flying in the centre of the ring. For me,
that was one of those moments - I'd never seen anything like it before - it
looked exactly as if a kestrel or something was hovering in the ring.
Clever, innovative, well executed and so on. As for whether it would have
deserved to win any competition, I'm not qualified to judge. But it was one
of those things that makes making and flying kites such a continued
pleasure.
Lastly a few words about judging. It is difficult, and it should be.
Judges have to have the courage to make hard choices and to justify them.
Just think about the fuss that's made over the great artistic prizes such as
the Booker prize for literature and the Turner prize. These are surrounded
by controversy and so we shouldn't be too worried about it.
As for copyright and suchlike - well, if it's well executed and has a fresh
angle then in my books it's perfectly OK. But if it's cynically making
money that should be going to the original designer, then it's certainly not
OK. (but we've been here many, many times before, haven't we folks?)
That's it - end of diatribe
Nick
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"Jerry Houk" <jeh...@ix.netcom.com> wrote in message
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> Let's not forget, as in a good kite, the frame can make or break a good
piece of
> art. ;-)
K I T E S T U D I O
I'm not saying that Art cannot, or even should not, be judged - just
that it cannot be *objectively* measured, and that falling into this way
of thinking is a great danger when 'art' and 'competition' are being
mixed.
It's also quite clear to me that there are folk who enjoy competition,
and I'm not saying that they should not be catered for.
But I also know that there are many people who are very good indeed at
what they do who would not dream of entering a competition. For me, this
diminishes the attraction of competitions - the winner is generally
accorded 'status' for being 'first', and yet they are 'first' merely
amongst those who have chosen to compete in that competition, and ( in
the case of 'art' competitions ) according to the judgement of a
particular set of judges.
To those who like to compete, I'd say choose a discipline in which your
performance can be objectively measured, or else accept that you are
simply another artist looking to have your ego stroked.