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Rik

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Dec 30, 2007, 12:10:26 PM12/30/07
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*Little* *Arthur*

When the spore touches the ant
it must sprout and down its steed:

white threads needle over barding;
sharp tips lance the pauldron gaps.

Once in, it knits itself a new flesh
between the silks of muscle and fat.

A ring of barbs crowns the head
beneath the bascinet, to rule the beast.

Come dawn, an ant clambers the length
of a long stalk to view its domain;

it lifts the belly to salute the crowds
below, scurrying to service the realm.

When the grail erupts from the armour
spores shower down: Camelot blooms.

(rev 1, Dec 07)


Rik, knee deep.

Rik

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Dec 30, 2007, 12:15:33 PM12/30/07
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Rik wrote:

> *Little* *Arthur*
>
> Now the spore has touched the ant


> it must sprout and down its steed:
>

etc

First lines are not permitted to fuck up!

Rik, knee deep.

Dennis M. Hammes

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Dec 31, 2007, 4:36:20 AM12/31/07
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Rik wrote:


Chuckles attacked by sidewalk lichen?
(Through the Armor of his Righteousness?)

The stuff that producess a queen, or a lethal parasite?
The elements of both don't quite resolve ("for me").

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Dennis M. Hammes

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Dec 31, 2007, 4:42:21 AM12/31/07
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Rik wrote:


In the fucked-up version, the spore downed its steed (the ant).
In this, "it" is somehow the ant who must sprout and down -- itself?
For some reason, I see the Pink (the colour of the carnivorous
mold) Panther shuffling up to survey his realm of pod-people:

"Dead ant, dead ant, de-dant de-dant de-dant de-dant..."

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