MISC, CONTEST: Superhuman World 2009: A Date with the Darkness
Scott Eiler
October 29, 2009
Superhuman Dream Date Goes Horribly Wrong!
A DATE WITH THE DARKNESS
He dreamed of stars coating the Earth, then darkness eating the stars.
He hoped it wasn't one of his true dreams.
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Leon Utwald was in his 40s, and had had superhuman powers for just the
last three years. But he didn't know the source.
Leon could absorb the properties of things he touched. For instance,
he could absorb the material strength of concrete - and also its
immobility, so he'd be stuck until he let the strength go. He didn't
consider that much of a combat power, so he didn't go on patrol with
it - or even use the power in public.
He did better absorbing information. He could touch a book and absorb
what it said - but only as much as he could remember. He hadn't found
a good way to use that power for the good of the world yet. But it
really helped him do his job as a copy editor, since he could absorb a
book's worth of typos all at once.
Leon could also absorb superhuman powers. He'd found this out last
year, when all women got superhuman strength. It had been easy enough
to touch the women he knew to confirm this.
The high point of Leon's day today would be a dinner meeting with a
client: Pam Brown, a kinesthesiologist. Ms. Brown was publishing an
article on Pilates exercise in one of his company's magazines. This
was normal business on the surface, but Leon knew his client worked
for The Combine, one of the superhuman companies that had opened in
the last three years. He'd absorb some information from her if he
could.
The dinner started well. Ms. Brown was twenty-something, with a non-
petite but athletic body. She said, "Call me Pam".
Leon gave Pam a corrected manuscript for her article. The business was
over before appetizers arrived. So there was time for talk. They
started with small talk about the latest alien infestation. Pam's
company had people who'd met the aliens, so Leon was able to steer the
subject to her work.
Leon didn't get a chance to touch Pam, but she was informative anyway.
She said, the superhumans she worked with had been together longer
than three years, and she had had superhuman powers as long as they
had. So he decided to confide in her...
"Pam, I've never told anyone this, but I have powers like that too. If
I touch you, I can absorb what powers you have." And he touched her
wrist. "You've got strength like all women, but there's something
else..."
"No! Watch out!"
Leon absorbed darkness. Bone-chilling darkness. And it screamed at
him.
He came to on the restaurant floor. Pam was talking to him. He
couldn't make out what she was saying, but he could tell she was
calling him.
Others were gathered around, but they lost interest after he got up.
So he and Pam could talk again.
Leon said, "That darkness. It's in you?"
"No. We're all in it. It just likes me best for some reason... I paid
the check. I think we'd better go."
So ended Leon Utwald's date with The Bride of the Ultimate Darkness.
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Before he went to bed that night, he prayed he wouldn't dream of
darkness. Leon Utwald sometimes absorbed true things from the universe
in dreams. He now knew the darkness was true.
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story is posted on the Web at
http://www.eilertech.com/stories/2009/desiration.htm#date . The Web
version has hyperlinks and extra material which links it to other
stories, including my contest entry "The Trillions" from last month.
The lead character is new for this story. His date, the Bride of the
Ultimate Darkness, is a longstanding character in my fiction.
http://www.eilertech.com/stories/2004/journal_dark.htm is a good place
to learn about her.
Andrew Perron
thing in your stories. Still, I do enjoy ideas!
Also, you should consider getting your own tag for this world! And,
y'know, a name for it. It's neat!
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who likes the unexplained continuity
references.
Scott Eiler
> Hmmmmmm. Interesting concepts, but a bit dry; that seems to be a recurring
> thing in your stories. Still, I do enjoy ideas!
I'll admit, ideas are my strong point. Narration may not be, but I'm
working on it. (One of my rotating narrators is a superpowered koala
on speed. You might find his work exciting, but he's best on the high
adventure stuff.)
> Also, you should consider getting your own tag for this world! And,
> y'know, a name for it. It's neat!
A RACC tag and name like "SW2009: Superhuman World 2009"? Or should
I stick with "SW: Superhuman World" so as not to have to change the
tag next year?
> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who likes the unexplained continuity
> references.
If you start rooting around on the web page, you'll get all the
continuity you can handle.
Andrew Perron
> On Nov 13, 1:16 am, Andrew Perron <pwer...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hmmmmmm. Interesting concepts, but a bit dry; that seems to be a recurring
>> thing in your stories. Still, I do enjoy ideas!
>
> I'll admit, ideas are my strong point. Narration may not be, but I'm
> working on it. (One of my rotating narrators is a superpowered koala
> on speed. You might find his work exciting, but he's best on the high
> adventure stuff.)
Ooooh, sounds fun! I've got a cyborg steampunk koala somewhere around, but
he doesn't talk...
>> Also, you should consider getting your own tag for this world! And,
>> y'know, a name for it. It's neat!
>
> A RACC tag and name like "SW2009: Superhuman World 2009"? Or should
> I stick with "SW: Superhuman World" so as not to have to change the
> tag next year?
Well, "Superhuman World" is pretty generic. But yeah, something like that.
>> Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, who likes the unexplained continuity
>> references.
>
> If you start rooting around on the web page, you'll get all the
> continuity you can handle.
Oh man. So tempting, but I should really read Beige Countdown and Beige
Midnight and ASH and Eightfold and... @.@
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, and make my own imprint and