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Jamas Enright
Jan 7, 2012, 10:13:40 PM1/7/12
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Yet another pit of lava has opened up. What's with them these days? But as
Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on his
hands...
http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
The criteria this time was a 24 minute limit to story creation. Since it
can take that long just to get a scene to work, I placed the limit of 24
minutes on script writing. And that's what got converted, with no extra
word tweaks or extra body language that wasn't already in there, nothing
else. Shows what does get added...
--
Jamas Enright
Blog: http://www.jamasenright.com
Homepage: http://www.eyrie.org/~thad/
Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on his
hands...
http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
The criteria this time was a 24 minute limit to story creation. Since it
can take that long just to get a scene to work, I placed the limit of 24
minutes on script writing. And that's what got converted, with no extra
word tweaks or extra body language that wasn't already in there, nothing
else. Shows what does get added...
--
Jamas Enright
Blog: http://www.jamasenright.com
Homepage: http://www.eyrie.org/~thad/
Scott Eiler
Jan 7, 2012, 10:55:06 PM1/7/12
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On 1/7/2012 7:13 PM, Jamas Enright wrote:
> Yet another pit of lava has opened up. What's with them these days? But
> as Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on
> his hands...
>
> http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
>
> The criteria this time was a 24 minute limit to story creation. Since it
> can take that long just to get a scene to work, I placed the limit of 24
> minutes on script writing. And that's what got converted, with no extra
> word tweaks or extra body language that wasn't already in there, nothing
> else. Shows what does get added...
Snort. I found several funny moments in this film. Particularly
> Yet another pit of lava has opened up. What's with them these days? But
> as Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on
> his hands...
>
> http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
>
> The criteria this time was a 24 minute limit to story creation. Since it
> can take that long just to get a scene to work, I placed the limit of 24
> minutes on script writing. And that's what got converted, with no extra
> word tweaks or extra body language that wasn't already in there, nothing
> else. Shows what does get added...
including the arguing over the introduction, and the sneaky villain.
--
(signed) Scott Eiler 8{D> -------- http://www.eilertech.com/ ---------
Turns out I'm an anally-fixated oedipal paranoid with
south-of-the-border schizophrenic delusions... But never mind, I've
found me the ideal job. I'm going to run for President!
- Major Honey, scripted by Grant Morrison, Doom Patrol #46, August 1991.
Andrew Perron
Jan 15, 2012, 2:11:32 PM1/15/12
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On Sun, 8 Jan 2012 03:13:40 +0000 (UTC), Jamas Enright wrote:
> Yet another pit of lava has opened up. What's with them these days? But as
> Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on his
> hands...
>
> http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
Jeez, narrator, what's wrong with in medias res? >:/
> Yet another pit of lava has opened up. What's with them these days? But as
> Brassica goes to investigate, he ends up with a very large problem on his
> hands...
>
> http://youtu.be/Mqm8YkXQr7M
> The criteria this time was a 24 minute limit to story creation. Since it
> can take that long just to get a scene to work, I placed the limit of 24
> minutes on script writing. And that's what got converted, with no extra
> word tweaks or extra body language that wasn't already in there, nothing
> else. Shows what does get added...
grammatically correct, it parses weird. The one thing I would have added
was some sort of twist on how things were resolved, having it *not* follow
the pattern they predicted at the beginning.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, lava~
Jamas Enright
Jan 17, 2012, 1:00:00 PM1/17/12
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On Sun, 15 Jan 2012, Andrew Perron wrote:
> Jeez, narrator, what's wrong with in medias res? >:/
She doesn't get her opening scene if they jump right into it.
> Jeez, narrator, what's wrong with in medias res? >:/
> grammatically correct, it parses weird. The one thing I would have added
> was some sort of twist on how things were resolved, having it *not* follow
> the pattern they predicted at the beginning.
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