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REVIEW: End of Month Reviews #50 � February 2008 [spoilers]

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[REVIEW] End of Month Reviews #50 � February 2008 [spoilers]

Academy of Super-Heroes #85-86 [ASH]
Anthology2 #52 [AC] {promotional excerpt}
Beige Countdown #5 [LNH]
Derek Radner's Private Journal #2-3 [ASH]
Doomed Romance #4 [8Fold]
Lady Lawful And Doctor Developer Valentine's Day Special [ASH]
New Exarchs #11 [SG/LNH]
Pinnacle City Tales #1 [Pincity]
Sporkman #13-15 [SG]
Superfreaks Season 3 #13 [Superfreaks]


Also posted:
58.5 #22-27 [LNH]
Legion of Net.Heroes Volume 2 #24-25 [LNH]


I want to try something slightly different for this issue. There
was an observation made in a (comparatively) recent _Russell's Reviews_
that some episodes of ongoing stories aren't always conductive to new
readers - or even old readers trying to reorient themselves after a
lengthy publishing delay - being able to grasp what's going on. This is
a pertinent point, and also segues into the subject of whether a reader
can comfortably get a grasp of the tone and overall feel of a series in
addition to merely what's been happening in its plot. So I'd like to
preface each entry with a 'what's this all about?' summary.
That said, it does occur to me that a summary like that is not
something that I can imagine my readers wanting to be included month
after month. A more detailed summary of ongoing story arcs, sure, but
not the series summary aspects. I'll have to think about how frequently
to use it; how frequently a series gets posted would be one obvious factor.
Spoilers below...


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Academy of Super Heroes #85-86
'Coming Home Part 2 - Devastation' and
'Coming Home Part 3 - Infiltration'
An Academy of Super-Heroes [ASH] series
by Dave Van Domelen

What is this?: You know, that may take a bit of explaining,
since the _ASH_ series is basically a combination of science fiction
and superhero elements in not only storytelling style but also in
setting. The world that it takes place in doesn't rely as much on
the assumed details of the real world with genre elements bolted on as
other 'superhero' worlds. Specifically, the setting is in the near
future approximately a generation after a worldwide catastrophe at the
end of the twentieth century wiped out a large part of the planetary
population and shook up world politics. The government of the North
American Combine has noted the increasing number of superhumans, and
set up a school to train them.
Thematically one direction of the series has been about
consequences. As in, regardless of what the actual problem the ASH
members are facing, the overall trend of the series is more often than
not that they're are trying to maintain some sort of status quo in the
face of situations that can be *contained*, but for a variety of
reasons (often political) can rarely be considered *defused*.
Which I suppose is appropriate considering how badly things could,
theoretically, get out of control. The underpinning of superpowers in
the ASH universe are that they are magical (as in, they operate by
cheerfully ignoring any and all physical laws if necessary). This
extends from minor superpowers all the way up to the pantheons of pagan
gods, and going by the example of what happened to the planet Venus, a
moderately puissant god could probably redecorate the solar system as
a Ditko space if he or she set their mind to it. In-story the reason
that this doesn't happen is that the gods all block each other in order
to prevent one of them getting an advantage, creating a stalemate. Out
of story, well, I'm only speculating here, but it *is* a fictional
setting that's more about telling stories than working out every logical
consequence. And of course it's more fun to write and read about human
or superhuman level characters than about incomprehensibly powerful
divinities. Or to put it another way, the *threat* of gods turning up
and using the world as their plaything (as in the 'Pyramid Scheme'
crossover or Q'Nos's machinations) are more interesting than actually
having them succeed.
And that is fair enough. However, the magnitude of the threats
involved in those latter type of stories, and the fact that this sort
of thing has had the opportunity to be going on for millennia, makes me
wonder how the freaking Hell this universe has survived against the odds
to the point where it looks *only a little bit* different from the real
world. There are rationalisations of course, but statistically speaking
they can't be anything other than that: rationalisations. The setting
works that way because the writers, and in the end the owner, want it to
work that way. That makes for a rather interesting comparison with the
LNH Looniverse, which also can be accused of having a dramatically
driven tendency to flirt with awe inspiring but also suicidally risky
events. The main difference is that the ASH universe cannot necessarily
be accused of being self aware. It also makes for an interesting
comparison with the Superfreaks setting, which also usually treats its
stories in a science fictional manner of examining the consequences.
The difference seems to be in what the starting material is; the
presence of almost Lovecraftian entities that can erase human history
as a by product of their own political machinations is not something
that Martin has forced the Pepperton police to face up against. Yet.
Finally, let's consider the current storyline. Basically it's
ongoing fallout from previous adventures, although perfectly good
reading in their own right. Back in the 'Four To Never' and 'Timequake'
arcs, a group of villains from (even further) in the future engineered
a paradox in order to make themselves temporally unassailable. As a
result of attempts to fix the resulting damage, Solar Max and Jen
Kleinvogel have been stranded in the 1st century, and were laying low
with some monks in China.
So. Issue 84 concluded with Solar Max and Kleinvogel being called
to arms to help defend against a potentially world destroying demon
called Devastation. In issue 85 they found that merely physically
fighting it was impractical, so they hatched a desperate scheme to push
Devastation forward in time so that at some point one or more of the
ultra powerful superhumans now identified as pagan gods might take
notice and more permanently deal with the entity. This they duly did,
and after eventually loosing Devastation they arrived in 1976, albeit a
divergent timeline version of 1976. In issue 86 they did various
errands in 1976, helping out the native superheroes of that time as
well as trying to track down the divergence point, before heading back
to their home timeline.


Anthology2 #52
'Serapham Wing: Doomsday Clock'
An Artifice Comics [AC] series
by Ashley Corgan

What is this?: This specific post is a promotional excerpt
from the Artifice Comics shared writing universe (webpage at:
http://artificecomics.com/ ). Like some of the Superguy series,
occasionally an Artifice Comics story will be posted to RACC in part
or in whole. However, whereas Superguy and Legion of Net.Heroes
tend overall to be superhero adventure-comedy (and I have a much
longer examination of what that means below in the entry for _New
Exarchs_), the AC setting tends to be more straight adventure, and
often taking full advantage of adult presentation.
The _Anthology2_ series itself is, as its name suggests, an
anthology series rotating between writers. In this particular
instance the characters of Schezerade and Herlot have just escaped
from the proverbial 'watery grave', and Schezerade is not happy
with Herlot. The full version of story indicates that both are
trainees at an Academy that uses mecha-style Assault Training
Armor. Schezerade targets and sinks Herlot's AVA even as he is
celebrating his victory in a combat training match, killing him.
At the subsequent trial she states that he had been fixing the
outcome of training matches, but on the basis of reading this
story alone revenge seems just as likely to be the motivation.
The presence of various science fiction elements usually
associated with anime and manga, such as combat armour, makes me
visualise this in an anime art style. Whether this is appropriate,
I have no idea.
And for those of you who worry about these sort of things, a
google search indicates that this is the first time that Ashley has
had a story posted to rec.arts.comics.creative, meaning that
technically she's eligible for the Newbie Award at next year's
RACCies. I will throw open the question to the assembled
RACConteurs of whether a partial promotional post should be
eligible.


Beige Countdown #5
'The Bicycle In The River'
A Legion of Net.Heroes [LNH] limited series
by Arthur Spitzer

What is this?: A limited series that chronicles the events
of the year leading up to the forewarned return of the Bryttle
Brothers at 'Beige Midnight'. Or to be more precise, as part of
the payoff of the 'Infinite Leadership Crisis' Event/anthology
storyline in 2007 was the revelation that that Bart the Dark
Receptionist was playing with the Legion's collective heads and
trying to instil fear in them. The 'Infinite Leadership Crisis'
was Bart's way of taunting the Legion with his power, and the
year leading to 'Beige Midnight' is his way of letting them stew.
But while this particular counterpoint hasn't been addressed
in any posted stories that I can recall, it should nevertheless
be self-evident that Bart doesn't have a particularly good grasp
of superhero psychology. Trying to scare them simply makes them
more bull headedly obstinate. The Legion was never going to
simply sit around and worry about their impending doom, unless...
Unless they were weakened by fractious leadership spills, or
encumbered with general anti-hero attitudes after a public
disaster, or compromised by Presidential attempts to subvert
their power for his own benefit. Which of course is exactly
what's been happening.
In this episode President Hex Luthor has framed and
imprisoned his long-time adversary Bicycle Repair Lad. Now, you
may recall that in issue 7 Manga Man's rather dubious actions
were inclined towards supervillainous self defeat, and it was
Hex Luthor who kept Manga man on track. It was almost as if
Hex had read the Evil Overlord's Handbook and taken it to heart.
That has changed. Although Bicycle Repair Lad is nominally at
Hex's mercy, he's correctly deduced that both his attempt to take
over the world and an attempt to discredit and remove an opponent
that no one has so far been taking seriously are indications
that Hex Luthor is falling back into old, supervillainous thought
patterns. In short, Hex Luthor is beginning to loose it. Or
regain it, depending on how you define 'it'.


Derek Radner's Private Journal #2-3
'Evil' and 'Assets'
An Academy of Super-Heroes [ASH] series
by Dave Van Domelen

What is this?: Mr Radner is a supervillain in the 21st
century setting of the ASH universe, going by the codename
Triton. The high concept of _Private Journal_ is that these
are the musings of Radner written down before or in the early
part of his villainous career, before he attained his later
Master Villain status as leader of the Conclave of Super
Villains and chancellor of the north African country of Khadam.
The second issue presents his musing on the nature of evil.
Like the presentation of his thoughts on villainy is #1, they
are well presented for adolescent writings, but they still have
the hint of characterisation that he's not so much trying to get
a clear grasp of the subject as get a clear grasp of how he can
rationalise his own inclinations.
The writings in the third issue are somewhat more sophisticated,
as befits the fact that they were written later, after starting his
supervillainous career and being caught. 'Villainy' and 'Evil'
were basically him flirting with the idea of being a villain and
looking for rationalisations for himself. By comparison 'Assets'
is a strategic overview of how to achieve his goals once he fully
commits to being a supercriminal, so it more or less has to be
more sophisticated. The time for abstract philosophising is over,
and now he has to get to the nitty gritty of planning how to
achieve his ends.


Doomed Romance #4
'Cut Out My Heart' part 1 of 2
An Eightfold [8Fold] series
by Tom Russell

What is this?: It's one of a series of somewhat skewed
romance titles put out by 8Fold. Now, non-superhero stories are
quite rare on rec.arts.comics.creative. It seems to be a
consequence of the fact that the newsgroup originally developed
out of alt.comics.lnh, the original newsgroup for the superhero-
oriented Legion of Net.Heroes imprint, plus the general
misapprehension that the medium of comic books automatically
equates to the genre of superheroes. (It seems that the
increasing prevalence of manga in western countries hasn't done
as much about that latter aspect as could be hoped.)
In the specific case of this story the two parts are done as a
crossover with _Kinky Romance_, with the second part being posted in
March. This half focuses on the breakdown of the marriage of Tuck
and Cordelia after Tuck decides to undergo surgery to become a woman.
The story is heavy of interpersonal interaction, which is to be
expected in the depiction of a marriage breakup.


Lady Lawful And Doctor Developer Valentine's Day Special
'Dark Cupid'
An Academy of Super-Heroes [ASH] series
by Andrew Burton

What is this?: She's a superheroine. He's a reformed super-
villain and her partner. Together they have a rather sweet
relationship. Oh, and kinky sex. Frankly, the best summary of the
_Lady Lawful And Doctor Developer_ series that I can think of remains
'superhero sitcom'. The heart of the series is the relationship
between the two main characters, and there's been very little
superhero puncheminnaface so far.
The series takes place in the Academy of Superheroes universe,
but it's set back in the late twentieth century, during the 'Third
Heroic Age'. This means that there's none of the heavy continuity
that you get by way of crossovers between series set in a shared
fictional present. Of course, _LL&DD_ tends to be light on continuity
in any case, with the stories tending to be character vignettes - and
that holds true here with this episode being a Valentine's Day special.
Part of the characterisation of Doctor Developer (the most overt
part, and probably the easiest to present via cliche) is that he has a
fetish for putting people in death traps. In this story Lady Lawful
gives him Valentine's Day treat by returning the favour. Aw, bless.
He can take as well as he can give. Of course, Lady Lawful disguises
herself so he doesn't know who has him restrained until quite late in
the piece. And it's telling that he's still turned on by it.


New Exarchs #11
'Getting Squirrelly'
A Superguy and Legion of Net.Heroes [SG/LNH] series
by Dave Van Domelen

What is this?: It's yet another series written by Dave Van
Domelen. Yes, he's a busy boy. Specifically, _New Exarchs_ is a
comedy-adventure series set in the main Superguy universe (000Superguy)
featuring a bunch of characters who started out, more or less, in the
main Legion of Net.Heroes universe (the Looniverse). They're actually
nanotechnologically created duplicates of people from the Looniverse
- although it took them a while to discover the fact. Thematically
they've spend a lot of their screen time in both this series and the
previous _Exarchs_ series dealing with various aspects of other
dimensions (dimensional travel, other dimensional counterparts, the
magical ramifications of being non-natives...): this is actually the
third other-dimensional invasion that they've had to oppose.
More broadly, this series unites aspects of Superguy and Legion
of Net.Heroes imprints. They're actually a rather good matchup for one
another. Well, mostly. Superguy as a setting tends to slightly more
action oriented with comedy overtones, while the Legion tends to be
outright comic book parody and veers heavily towards the anarchically
insane. That said, the fact that both imprints have strong comedy
elements in them gives them both leeway to contain stories that vary
between very serious to totally silly. It's much like the way a
chaotic system can integrate pockets of order, but an orderly system
has trouble reconciling pockets of chaos into itself. In other words,
the presence of comedic elements gives justification for why a
compromise about mood and tone can occur.
As far as plot is concerned, the Exarchs are in the middle of a
story arc. They've reunited after several years to investigate the
alleged death of one of their members, Paul. Along the way they
uncovered evidence of an invasion from 000Superdry. The Exarchs (and,
secretly, Jonkatta the squirrel) have infiltrated that dimension and
are now scouting around. In this issue we learn that Paul is indeed
still alive, and is being held prisoner by Sung the Stainless.
Meanwhile the Exarchs and Jonkatta have separately both had interviews
with some of the natives.


Pinnacle City Tales #1
'Black & White Pictures'
A Pinnacle City [Pincity] series
by Rick Hindle

What is this?: Hmm. Now this is an interesting situation. Up
until the moment that I began thinking about how describe _Pinnacle
City Tales_ and the Pinnacle City imprint in general, I hadn't
consciously registered that Rick has not been writing some sort of
hybrid or variation of the superhero genre like a number of the other
entries in this month's EoMR. This episode, like other of his recent
efforts (_Thunderclap_, _The Goddess And The Bomb_, and all the way
back to his early efforts with _City Of Heroes_) has 'merely' been
generic but well written superhero fiction. Which is not to say that
this is all that he has produced; I still remember fondly _Legends Of
The Eternal World_. In any case, _Pinnacle City Tales_ is the latest
series/miniseries by Rick set in the eponymous Pinnacle City. Now,
one of Rick's interests seems to be the theme of superhero history
and tradition, and this story is another example.
This issue is a focus on the origin of the American Ranger, a
cyborg superhuman who we first encountered recently in... No, I'm
sorry, I was going to say recently in _Thunderclap_, but a google
search indicates he's been around as a background character since
_City Of Heroes_ #1, published back in 1998.
There's an interesting mixture of Golden Age tropes and more
modern characterisation here. For example, it's explained that at
the same time that the Japanese bombed Pear Harbour in December 1941,
German submarines started bombing Pinnacle City in a similar effort
to use surprise to knock out the superhumans residing there. That's
a superficially plausible reason - and who knows, it might even remain
plausible even after the United States' isolationist stance towards
Europe is factored in. But is has the feel of direct and simple (and
I mean that in a non-pejorative way) rational to get superheroes
involved in World War 2 early. In other words, the type of treatment
of plot that, while enjoyed by adults, was written at a level to also
be enjoyed by children. In fact, the first time I read that paragraph
I had this sudden visualisation of the way the artwork would have
looked published in that era, all flat colours and heavy night time
shadows as flying men zoom out from the shoreline in the direction
of a lurking sub...
At the other extreme are more modern attitudes, such as the
Ranger looking back in pity at people thinking it unmanly to cry.
One could point to this being an attitude shift in society over the
decades, but I think it's more than that. It adds weight to the
notion that the American Ranger is old, and has accumulated hard won
wisdom during his battles. It is not merely because he's lived
through the 1970s, and Alan Alda showed it was okay to cry. The
Ranger probably figured that out decades earlier.


Sporkman #13-15
'A New Victory' ; 'A New Escape' and 'A New 'Splosion'
Lemurs on a Dirigible parts 8-10
A Superguy [SG] series
by Greg Fishbone

What is this?: Actually, _Sporkman_ already has useful flavour
text summary of the series premise at the start of each episode (well,
okay, after the opening scene of each episode). The title character
was a child superhero called Sporkboy, and as an adult is now
traumatised by his past.
More generally... Well, once again we come to that rather broad
concept of what a 'typical' Superguy or Legion of Net.Heroes series
is, considering that both are 'open' writing universes and both have
leeway to encompass all sorts of stories. But if we're going to dabble
in stereotypes about 'superhero action-comedy', then _Sporkman_ fits
into that mould.
The current story situation is most definitely the result of what
has gone before. Mickey Dunn was wandering around Europe and met
Jeanette LeBlanc, who acted on one of her hunches to fly Mickey back
to America to look for his mother. However, their flight on the
Supersonic Airship Unsplodable was interrupted when the zombie Bill
O'Reilly unleashed a horde of man eating lemurs in order to capture
Jeanette. The fact that Serially Numbered Underling Number Thirteen
captured Jeanette first in an attempt to thwart O'Reilly has not
actually helped the situation all that much. Now, in these last three
episodes of the story arc Mickey and his immediate companions do a lot
of running around trying to save as many people as possible before
fate catches up with ironically-named airship and causes it to explode.


Superfreaks Season 3 #13
'The Sex Files'
A Superfreaks [Superfreaks] series
by Martin Phipps

What is this?: Another series using story elements from multiple
genres. And, like _Sporkman_ it has a flavour text summary of the
series premise at the start. In this case it's essentially a police
investigative series, set in a world where superhero and science
fiction occurrences are real and complicate the investigations.
_Superfreaks_ has some soap opera character interaction between its
cast members, but most of the focus of the series tends to be about the
legal ramifications of all the genre elements, and it's been slowly
adding different types of genre element over time: superheros and
superhuman battles, cloning, and finally alien contact. Basically,
it's extrapolation about how law enforcement would work under those
conditions.
One thought that occurs to me as I type this: In real life,
advances in technology mean a type of 'arms race' between lateral
thinking criminals exploiting new opportunities and the cops and
legislators trying to keep up. For our purposes superhuman powers
acts as a technology substitute. Now, while the basic principles of
detective work would remain the same (keep collecting evidence until
you have enough to prove the crime) the police should logically be
using both new techniques and technology as it becomes available to
them, as well as trying to come up with new methodologies to deal with
new and ever more esoteric types of crime. For example, perhaps the
Pepperton should have been making tentative steps to see what use
supertech would have been in their investigations. Moreover, now the
entire alien civilisations (rather than just lone survivors, like
Extreme) have made contact with Earth, they should also be expressing
interest in extraterrestrial policing methods.
I'm of two minds about the fact that we haven't seen anything like
that so far. On the one hand, it is a bit shortfall for a series that
prides itself on making extrapolations of how policing in a superhero
universe might work. On the other hand, _Superfreaks_ can be
interpreted as a 'hard science fiction' universe, by which I mean it
*is* more interested in the logical extrapolations, rather than, say,
making up technobabble to act as a plot hole filler ala Star Trek.
Just as it is extremely difficult for a writer to convincingly present
a direct depiction of a super intelligent person, it would be difficult
to convincingly present a direct depiction of advanced policing methods.
One would probably need to have (or have access to a consultant who has)
a background in the subject to pull it off. Still, it should be
possible to hint at it obliquely, especially if it involves members
of the Pepperton police department arguing about the relative merits
of untested equipment.
And yes, this does mean I'm expecting a Season 4. It finally and
belatedly occurs to me that since _Superfreaks_ is modelled on various
television shows like _CSI_ that perhaps the 'Series end' notices could
be better interpreted as the conclusion of a season rather than the end
of the title altogether. I can be a bit slow with things like that.
Now, overall story direction. Well, to begin with, I haven't made
comment about _Superfreaks_ since October last year. One thing I've
noticed since then is that on a plotting level, the early issues of
Season 3 were connected in a plot thread where the consequences of one
story directly drove the engine of story of later ones. There has
been none of that lately; the stories have all been pretty much stand
alones, with perhaps a cliffhanger to lead from one issue to another.
In issue 13 there are two main plots. In one some FBI
investigators have to put a stop to a guy who placed a amateur sex
videos of his girlfriend on the internet. The problem is that she's
a clone of Jessica Alba, and even though the video was not a revenue
generating exercise, it's illegal to make audiovisual materials of
clones without the permission of the donor. The second has nothing to
do with sex, instead involving a puzzle relating to the murder of a
museum curator, who was murdered over a treasure horde from World War 2.


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Martin Phipps

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Mar 20, 2008, 2:21:25 PM3/20/08
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On Mar 20, 1:10 pm, Saxon Brenton <saxonbren...@hotmail.com> wrote:

> Superfreaks Season 3 #13
> 'The Sex Files'
> A Superfreaks [Superfreaks] series
> by Martin Phipps

[...]


>      One thought that occurs to me as I type this:  In real life,
> advances in technology mean a type of 'arms race' between lateral
> thinking criminals exploiting new opportunities and the cops and
> legislators trying to keep up.  For our purposes superhuman powers
> acts as a technology substitute.  Now, while the basic principles of
> detective work would remain the same (keep collecting evidence until
> you have enough to prove the crime) the police should logically be
> using both new techniques and technology as it becomes available to
> them, as well as trying to come up with new methodologies to deal with
> new and ever more esoteric types of crime.  For example, perhaps the
> Pepperton should have been making tentative steps to see what use
> supertech would have been in their investigations.  Moreover, now the
> entire alien civilisations (rather than just lone survivors, like
> Extreme) have made contact with Earth, they should also be expressing
> interest in extraterrestrial policing methods.
>      I'm of two minds about the fact that we haven't seen anything like
> that so far.

You got me. The issue of future tech was delt with in Season 2 #'s
16-17 but I haven't delt with alien technologogy other than to have
Detective King warn the Dullkins to be careful about introducing to
Earth technology that could potentially be weaponized.

> On the one hand, it is a bit shortfall for a series that
> prides itself on making extrapolations of how policing in a superhero
> universe might work.  On the other hand, _Superfreaks_ can be
> interpreted as a 'hard science fiction' universe, by which I mean it
> *is* more interested in the logical extrapolations, rather than, say,
> making up technobabble to act as a plot hole filler ala Star Trek.  
> Just as it is extremely difficult for a writer to convincingly present
> a direct depiction of a super intelligent person, it would be difficult
> to convincingly present a direct depiction of advanced policing methods.  
> One would probably need to have (or have access to a consultant who has)
> a background in the subject to pull it off.  Still, it should be
> possible to hint at it obliquely, especially if it involves members
> of the Pepperton police department arguing about the relative merits
> of untested equipment.

Oh that happens on actual forensic shows. One CSI episode had CSIs
using a "sniffer": a combination vacuum cleaner and sensor that could
be used to detect things like perfumes, drugs or explosives. The
question of reliability came up: if you use a device to detect
something at the scene then don't you also have to collect samples
that you can take back to the lab to test under more controlled
conditions? The answer is "Yes" because catching the criminal is only
have the job: you also have to provide reliable evidence that can be
presented in court. But in the episode in question they were able to
identify a suspect based on her perfume and the question of whether or
not such evidence would stand up in court turned out to be moot
because the suspect ended up confessing. Yes, the suspects on CSI
_always_ confess when confronted by the detectives so that the case
can be considered solved; the suspects on Law and Order _never_
confess when confronted by the detectives so that the lawyers can then
get involved. It's almost as if the suspects know which show they are
on. :)

Martin

Dave Van Domelen

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Mar 20, 2008, 3:44:33 PM3/20/08
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In article <BAY105-W20E1C034F...@phx.gbl>,
Saxon Brenton <saxonb...@hotmail.com> wrote:
[Re: ASH #85-86, and the setting in general]

> And that is fair enough. However, the magnitude of the threats
>involved in those latter type of stories, and the fact that this sort
>of thing has had the opportunity to be going on for millennia, makes me
>wonder how the freaking Hell this universe has survived against the odds
>to the point where it looks *only a little bit* different from the real
>world.

Well, as #85 showed, it doesn't always survive. Branches are constantly
getting pruned off, either by things like Devastation, or like Channel's
"Oops, I broke reality" trick of ASH #15. We just happen to be following the
thread where things hold together, if only barely. :)

Dave Van Domelen, has an issue of Derek Radner's Journal ready to post,
plus LL&DD #7 is just about ready to go, but might space things out a bit to
give him time to work on the growing monster that is CSV Annual #2 without
having a big dry spell in between.

EDMLite

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Mar 20, 2008, 7:37:56 PM3/20/08
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On Mar 19, 10:10 pm, Saxon Brenton <saxonbren...@hotmail.com> wrote:

> That said, it does occur to me that a summary like that is not
> something that I can imagine my readers wanting to be included month
> after month. A more detailed summary of ongoing story arcs, sure, but
> not the series summary aspects. I'll have to think about how frequently
> to use it; how frequently a series gets posted would be one obvious factor.

I've been thinking about this lately, and wondering
whether we ought to take more advantage of the medium
in which we write.

It would be easy, for example, for the writer of an
LNH story to provide a link to a page on the LNH
wiki site. That page could include a quick summary
of what the series is about (such as you provide here)
as well as a cast list and short descriptions of the
series' major story arcs.

The link would allow first-time readers to get caught
up quickly on the series, without giving long-time
readers another wall of text to scroll past.

Of course, authors could always provide
"Previously on..." sections at the beginnings of
their issues that grow increasingly longer with
each episode. But only a crazy person would
do that...

--Easily-Discovered Man Lite
--Sultan of summarization

Arthur Spitzer

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Nice summations of all those stories, Saxon...

Was going to write a recap for Beige Countdown #1... but Christ I'm
tired...

Arthur "Should be asleep..." Spitzer

apotheca...@gmail.com

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May 6, 2008, 3:17:39 AM5/6/08
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Ash here:

Well thanks for the plug, good sir. Im fairly new to the whole online
publishing machine destroying my beloved print, but I appreciate the
consideration for the RACC awards.

(Future note: I'm decidedly female, and SW is very much anime in
print. Thanks!)

Saxon Brenton wrote:
> [REVIEW] End of Month Reviews #50

> Anthology2 #52 [AC]

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