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George Dance

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Nov 8, 2009, 6:06:25 PM11/8/09
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Deer

A quiver of wind,
a play of sun,
energy frozen
tensed to run,
a flickering flame
trembling,
an infinitely gentle thing.

Raise the gun,
squeeze,
see my own
blood gush
from the open wound.

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George Dance

nominal9

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Nov 21, 2009, 12:35:14 PM11/21/09
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Cheap shot.....
make up your mind....is this Bambi?... or is it supper?
just questioning where you want to go with this, as a "message"....
nominal9
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